Arshi: The Symphonious Saga!!! #Bairiyaa 16/3 Pg. 42 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional and heart breaking chapter he kept the truth from her and she found out he was using her she was his cover so sad loved the song since you left it open i will think one decide to call the other and talk just for answer loved the os thanks for the pm sometimes it the mistakes that make us understand how stronger we are and if we are meant to be .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Each saga was beautiful than the other...I look forward to enjoy this journey...cheers to you...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Praja!

The helplessness over the circumstances that led to the breakup might have been very unavoidable, but what was the best part of this OS was the opening scene😊. Khushi's lone figure desperately trying to wipe off the foggy window pane, while hoping to see Arnav was so poignant that I couldn't help but feel what she was going through.👏

The reasons which tumbled out later justified the separation, but still there was this small hope in my mind that despite the misgivings between the two, there would be reconciliation after all. Kya karu...dil hai ke manta nahi!

Henceforth I ban you from writing anything remotely painful!😡

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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg it is so touching ...
cant see arnav like this ...
though khushi is also in same pain but I felt more fr arnav ...
plz continue soon jyada intezaar na karao humse ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update yet too emotional.Eagerly waiting 4 the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
# NOTE #
Hello all lovely readers!😛

Yes, I know. I totally deserve your these Hummps, Hmmms, Angry birds..Opps I meant Angry faces(😉) etc..etc .I am too late to post a note even by my own standards. But looking at my lazyish writing history you won't be surprised. 😃

I just wished to convey you that next update of TSS!!! will be more delayed (Ouch...don't throw shoes at me ...That really hurts) The reason is ,I am in the process of writing another story and I want to give my undivided time that is already short due to other commitments to it. It's not that TSS!!! is less important for me in any way but any new story needs more attention at its initial developing stage. And I like investing my 100% in any venture. Hence the decision.

The next update will be slightly delayed but I will try my real best to write and post it as soon as possible.Meantime I will be replying to all your beautiful comments.

Thank you for being with such torturous me. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divyahet

😃

simply brilliant update Praju...
you made me cry ...
though Arnav is at fault but still feel bad for him...
both are madly in love but one wrong step in beautiful relationship and bas sab khatam nahi hota hue bhi khatam break up...😭...an old song for this update...the singer is Talat Mehmood.

phir vohi shaam vahi gam vahi tanahaai hai
dil ko samajhaane teri yaad chali aai hai

phir tasavvur tere pahalu me bithaa jaaegaa
phir gayaa vaqt ghadi bhar ko palat aaegaa
dil bahal jaaegaa aakhir ye to saudaai hai
phir vohi shaam

jaane ab tujh se mulaaqaat kabhi ho ke na ho
jo adhuri rahe vo baat kabhi ho ke na ho
meri mazil teri mazil se bichhad aai hai
phir vohi shaam

phir tere zulf ke rukhasaar ki baate hogi
hijr ki raat magar pyaar ki baate hogi
phir muhabbat me tadapane ki qasam khaai hai
phir vohi shaam.


thank you for this wonderful n very emotional update.
hope you'll continue soon,
lots of love n hugs,
take care of yourself dear.





Your every comment make me smile genuinely but this one made me sad.

I myself was already so emotional after writing this story and here you post this song.
I had heard this song earlier but it affected me this time like never. The words perfectly suitable for mood of the story. As if the song unfold the story I wished to write.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

oh god that was really emotional there
so it all started for a mission for arnie
but when he fell for her even he didnt know
was it when he first approached her
or when he got to know her
him hiding the truth from her resulted in this
but i would like to keep an open mind about this
that maybe one day they did solves their differences
that she eventually came to the cafe for the meet
mus can ruin any relationship
but that dont mean that their love wasnt true
its just that she already went through the same pain in her life before
and she couldnt take it
she said things in heat of moment
resulting in this
wow what beautiful but sad song


You are absolutely right dear! Both of them truly loved each other but some times circumstances are such that only love is not enough to pass through it.

I too being optimist , chose to keep the end open

The song is really beautiful. Even pain is sometimes beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndeternity

😆😆😆Awesome update dear my heart ached for dis 2 love birds😭 omg it my first tym on de first page in my if history lol... yay😳 😳⭐️and plsss pm me dear ... arnav lied 2 khushi and he had 2 pay but he shud hav pacifyed khushi loved it and yea try 2 write smthg wth de songs from yeh jawani he dewaani and bula dena from ashiqui2 plsss dear continue soon will be wating for ur update😆


Congrats on being first page and I wish yours to be first comment on next story ⭐️
Hope you received my PM. Generally I send PMs after 1/2 days of posting update.
I am bound to oblige to your request. YJHD is in my list too but I am yet to get a suitable story for it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Wonderful update 👏

brilliant story line.👍🏼
Arnav is a detective, I always appreciate ASR in different avatars. His killing looks is perfect for every job.😛
My heart is crying for both😭. Poor Arnav, though what he did, deceiving khushi for his selfish motive and job, was unfair but he loved khushi and he is in pain because his life,khushi, is not with him.
Both are eager to talk but for one guilt and for other the pain she felt when her heart broke come in between them.
continue soon.


Yeah very true. No matter which character he will play , he will be perfect for it.

sometimes no one can control the situation and then it leaves us in devastating pain.

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