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Originally posted by: rocking_gal
well well wasn't it a shocking thing...
but but but...u nailed it gal...!!!had a idiotic smile on my face...through out the Stry...firstly u wrote an romantic os nd wat a Stry it was...light but still touched me..,they way he was in kitchen,candle light dinner...woah...a dream sort of sequence...looks like both wont get enough of staring at each other...then came their dance to a beautiful song...hayeee dance...well y does all mushy scenes get interrupted Haan...y did she frown...???maana padega Riya u did a very good job...will be waiting for next update..
seee even Rocking thinks you nailed it!!!!!!
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I told you it wasn't such a bad idea to come back!!
And don't be so overwhelmed!!!!
You are a great writer!!! never forget that!! 😳
Lo again shuru hogai with the deep stuff! Mera kuch nahi ho sakta!! 😆
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