D3 (A new FF, as I imagined) COMPLETED(15/07 /14) - Page 5

Love all the parts
Rey taani convo loved it
update soon

Lovely parts!!
Totally sweet !!diabetes ho jaegi ya phirfat ho jayenge... hehhee jst jokin..
nyways. it was amazin .. revolvin around taani n her thoughts n tactics .. simply gud..
if possible add sm othr types lyk action..care..concern..
isme bhi concern tha bt indirect na..
on the whole gud updates..
n thnx 4 pm :)

Taani is a sweetheart, she help everyone to get close she is an amzing sister and friend i like her and Rey conversation, although she is still hurt and sad she try to put on a fake smile and be happy... hope her happiness return to her soon Superb chapters, u did a great job

all part really super /////

awesome ff yar...plz update soon...

Guys soch rai thi, yeh trip ko aaj update karti hu, so dat is weekend sab ki achhi jai. Plz baatana kaisa hua

Thank u guys ke aap sab ne pada & like kiya. Thank u all again

Episode - 19 (guys mere liye Sharon humesha purana wala hi rahega, bt if u r a vrushan fan, u can imagine accordingly)

Beside lake, SWARON

Sh: To tum itna chup kyon ho?

Sw: Aisa kuch nahi hai.

Sh: T ko leke upset ho?

Sw: Ha upset to hu. Bt usne mujhe promise kiya hai dat she wud take cr of herself& koi bhi prob hua, toh sab se pehle mujhe aake baatayegi. Toh, I thought ke use thoda time deti hu.

Some moment of silence.

Sh: Sw, tumhe kuch baatana chahti hu. Actually, hum dono itne din se is trial relationship mein hai, & I am enjoying this moment.

Sw: Baas itna hi. Us din to phn pe isse bhi kuch zyada boli thi. At least samne nahi bologi to who feel nahi ayega na. Plz at least mere samne to bolo.

Sh : Kiyaaa. Nooo. Nahiii. Bilkul nahi.

Sw: Plz at least 1 bar to bol na hi padega na.

Sh (pause): Ok...theek hai...close ur eyes.

Sw: Kyon

Sh: Maine kaha na plz...

Sw: Ok fine. (closed his eyes) Ab bolo

Sh : III...looovvveee...u

(Saying this runs from there)

Episode - 20

All the team members gathered at tents. All r happy & holding each others hand except R & T. Bt as they reached at the tent, they leave each others hand & go back to their respective tent.

Tent 1: Neha, Taani, Sharon

T & Sh: To N, vik ke sath patch up hua?

N: Ha baate huin. Maine phir se sorry bhi kaha, so ab sab theek hai.

T (slowly in Sh's ears): o mere bhai ne aisa kiya bola ke aap itna blush kar rahe ho?

Sh: Wo...wo...kuch nahi.

T: Ab itna sharmaneki bhi zaroorat nahi hai. Batao na. Do u like my bro.

Sh: No

T gets upset hearing dis. Seiing dis,

Sh: Actually, I don't like ur br, (pause), I love him stupid.

T: What.

& Gets very happy hearing this.

Sh: Aur abhi hum official hai. & hum kaal sabko iske baarein mein inform bhi karne wale hai

On the other hand SW inform R about the same.