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Posted: 12 years ago
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Episode - 21 (Saturday)



It was morning. All are sleeping, so Taani came out of her tent. She started walking towards the waterfalls. At the same time, Rey too came out of his tent. Seeing Taani walking alone towards the waterfalls, followed her.

Near the waterfalls, Rey came from behind & wished in a soft tone,' Good morning.'

Taani hearing sudden voice jumped in her place & turned around to find Rey. She smiled & said,' Good Morning to you too Rey. Aap itni subah?

Rey smiled back,' Ha, tum bhi to ho yahape.

Ha, woh to bas aisehi. Sab soh rahe the, isiliye main yaha agayi


Both without finding any words felt awkward & smiled at each other.


At this point, team arrived. Tum log yahape kiya kar rahe ho?

Taani & Rey replied in unision : Kuch nahi.

SWARON suddenly thought of informing team about their relationship status,' Guys tum logo ko kuch batana hai. After some moments of silents, they said slowly,'We are a couple now.

Team was shocked,' W-H-A-T

All are very happy.

Amar & Bharat joked,' Chal, 1 saal baad hi sahi, tum logo ka kuch to hua.

Everybody laughed.

Team's concentration suddenly shifted towards Taani,' Woh Taani, tumhara mood abhi kaisa hai?

Taani being confused replied,': theek hai...kyon?

Isko aur bhi theek kar dete hai. Without giving anybody a chance to think, pick up Tani & throw her into the water.

Seeing dis Swayam & Rey got angry. Swayam went to pull her up , but Taani drag him down in the water. Seeing these, all started laughing & slowly one by one dragged the other members into water.They all enjoyed a lot in water. After some time, they came out of water. All of dem felt uncomfortable as all were in wet clothes. Taani & Vishakha went to bring dry clothes for girls & Viky & NIL went to bring dry clothes for boys.


Girls went to the interior part of the forest to change their dresses & , whereas boys stay outside to guard them. After changing girls went back to the tents & boys change their clothes


The whole morning goes very nice as they all r busy in cooking. In the late afternoon, after having lunch, they all decided to explore the forest.

Edited by tuli_jayee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Episode - 22




All couples are walking hand in hand except Rey & Taani. Both are feeling awkward but Rey's feeling is very confused. He is very happy as Taani is walking with him, at the same time he did'nt realize the reason behind this. To break the silence, he started speaking.

Rey asked,' Taani, tumhara favourite hero kaun hai?'

Taani was surprised & asked ,''Yeh kaisa sawal hai?'

Rey smiled & replied ,'actually everybody is talking. Sirf hum dono hi aise chal rahe hai, as if kisine punishment diya hai.Aur usse bhi ajeeb ke tum itni silent ho. Tum itna chup chaap achhi nahi lagti. Sooo, I thought is silence ko break karne ke liye kiya puchu. To aisehi puch liya. To bolo kaun hai favourite hero?

Taani smiled too hearing Rey's explanation,' SRK'

Rey behaved as if shocked,'W-H-A-T? mujhe laga maximum ladki ki tarha tumhe Salman khan pasand honge. Phir S-R-K?

Taani smiled softly & replied,' Ho sakta hai SRK , Amir jaisa cute ya Salman jaisa body nahi hai but phir bhi woh special hai.He has a charm jo itne saal se har age ki ladkiyo ko special feel karaye hai. Jab bhi unko screen pe dekhti thi, mujhe kabhi bhi nahi laga ki woh heroine ko dialogue bol rahe hai. I felt that ki woh sari bate woh mujhse hi kahe rahe hai. Unko jab bhi dekhti hu, I can't even explain ki mujhe kiya ho jata hai.

Rey asked further,' Achha, to joh bhi ladke ladkiyao ko special feel karata hai, toh unko unse pyar ho jata hai?

Taani replied,': Nahi Rey, sirf special feel karana nahi. Girls chahte hai ki unka boyfriend thoda sensible, understanding, loving or caring ho. Ye sab honge to woh automatically special feel karegi.

Rey replied as if understanding,' Okkk.'

Taani smiled & asked,' Aapki favourite heroine kaun hai?

Rey replied,' Madhuri Dixit. She is a diva. She is such a fav dancer with a million dollar killer smile & a majestic personality. I simply can't explain ki unki smile pe to main fida hu aur unko dance karte dekhna, meri to puri world ruk jaati hai.

T(smiles): To aap dasnce to apna career banana chahte hai. Kaise - like actor, Choreographer ya dance ki academy khol kar?

R (jokingly): Waise good looking hu, achha dance bhi karleta hu, so I can try for acting. Tumhe kiya lagta hai

T: Ha, bahot achha actor ban sakte ho. Aur waise bhi sare clg ki ladkiyo ki aap heartthrob ho, to automatically hit actor ban jaoge as saari girls aapki movie dekhne ayenge to unki b/f s paas option nahi rahega apni g/f s ko company den eke alawa, to apki film hit ho jayega na

Both laughed at it.

Seeing Taani laughing, Rey becomes happy. Swayam, also feels happy to see Tani like dis.


GUYS PLZ BATAANA FOREST & WATERFALLS KA COMBINATION KAISA LAGA?

Edited by tuli_jayee - 11 years ago
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#53

Episode - 23

Taani & Rey spent wonderful moments while chatting.

All couples are so busy among themselves, that they get separated from one another. In small groups i.e each couple in a group.

Rey was feeling happy as he & Taani are alone. After noticing this, T looked for others. Rey also tries to call them, but there was network problem, so they cannot contact one another.

All has reached quite interior. Suddenly it started raining, so all run to took shelter.

Swaron runs & rook shelter under a CAVE formation & sit closely, so that none of them gets wet. Swayam wrap his hand around Sh s shoulder.

SWaron's shelter



Viha took shelter under a big tree & thereby save themselves from rain

Team manage to return back to the tent. Since it was lightning along with rains, so they decided to stay in 1 tent. Boys as usual decided to do planchet (as they were greatest pranksters). There used to be a haunted house near the garage where Bharat used to work. It was said a grl named MEERA used to stay in dat house. So all of them decided to cl the ghost of Meera

Taarey manages to took shelter under a cave like formation, but actually its not cave

Taarey's shelter -

Edited by tuli_jayee - 11 years ago
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Episode - 24

R: (tries to make T feel comfortable): Socho T, agar abhi isi baarish mein , koi ladki, white sari mein ake kahe ,'aap zara shift karenge, mujhe baithna hai'. To tum kiya karogi

T : Wow R, Kya imagination hai!- bearish mein, ladki ake, white sari mein (shouted) yahi pe baithna kyon chahegiii?

R: Itna gussa kyon kar rahi ho?

T: Nahi nahi. Main kyon gussa hogi? Main yahi kahungi Surely dear , aap yahi pe baitho , main koi dusra shelter dhoond leti hu'

R: Tum mujhe ekela uss bhootni ki sath bathake chali jaogi?

T: Bhootni!

R: Ha, bearish mein white sari pehenke Indian film ki bhootni hi aati hai

T: Hey krishnaji, mujhe laga aap white sari pehenke bearish mein kisi heroine ko expect kar rahe the/

R: Tum bhi na. Kaha tak soch leti ho! Anyways ab bolo kya bologi

T: Pata nahi. Pehle aane to do. Ayegi to baith jayegi. Is bearish mein kaha jaegi

R(in his mind): Achha to tumhe bhootni o se darr nahi lagta. Ok. Let's see

T was unmindful. Suddenly there was lighting & at the same time one big stone falls near T

With SWARON,

Due to lightning, Sh gets shocked & hit a rock & all the rocks fall below.

With ViHa,

A nest fall infront of Neha, due to lightning

In the tent,

When all of dem were taking Meera''s name, suddenly candle blows off

Due to suddenness of the incidents, all the girls shouted at the same time from different locations. In totality, it was a horrifying situation. Hearing screams from different part of the forest , the girls screamed louder. & each one of their screaming sound echoed in the forest.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Episode- 25

All the boys decided to take charge to stop dem.

ViHa hugged one another.

Vik: Main yahi pe hu na, to tum itna darr kyon rahi ho?

In tent, all girls were holding their frnds (boys) hand. The boys consoled dem.

Sh hugged Swayam,

Sw: Toh Sh Rai Prakash ko darr bhi lagta hai. Agar koi bhoot aya bhi hoga to tumhari cheekhne se darr k bhag bhi gaya hoga.

Sh: Tum mujhe tease kar rahe ho. Pata hai main kitna chawkh gayi thi.

Sw: Honey jab main sath hu , tum itna darr kyon rahi ho?

Sh: Tum yahi ho na.

Sw: Ha, sweet heart.

Sh was convinced & both stayed in each others arms

Rey hold Taani's mouth with his hand

R: (in a husky voice): Abhi abhi to kahe rahi thi, bhootni ayegi to paas mein baithne dogi. Aur abhi darna bhi suru kar diya.

T get embarrassed as R is very close to her.

T(stammered): Woh...woh...achanak lightning hua aur woh paththar bhi gira to main darr gayi.

R: Toh yah ape main hu na toh itna darr kyon rahi ho.

T shifts on the other side as she is not comfortable in sitting so close with R.

R did'nt understand & sit more closely with T.

R: Abhi abhi to darr rahi thi, aur phir bhi dur jake baith rahi ho?

T did'nt say anything & luk on the otherside.

R: Ab tum kuch bol kyon nahi rahi ho?

T: Nahi who kya bolu?

R: Kuch bhi ...tum aise chup chap achha nahi lagta

Both started talking to one another.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Episode - 26 (Sunday)

Next day morning . All the sleeping.

In the tent,

Boys are sleeping with legs on one another & girls are sleeping hugging each other.

Vish wage up & slowly make all the other girls wake up. They started laughing at boys by seeing their way of sleeping

Boys wake up hearing their laughter & started blaming one another. Girls make them stop.

Sim: Boys, plz chup ho jao. Kal bearish ki wajah se humare frnds wapas nahi laute.Unko dhoondne jaana hai . Let's go

All get up & went to search others

Swaron, - Both were sleeping in each others arms. They wake up & looking at each other smiled.

Sh: Chalo chalet hai, warna sab dhundte hue aa jayenge.

With ViHa,

Both wake up & lost in each others eyes.

Swaron & team reached there.

All of dem started teasing Viha. Both came into senses

Team: Are 4 love birds ek sath. Kya baat hai.

Sh (hearing dis, to divert topic): Guys R & T kaha hai, unko dhundte hai.

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#57

Episode- 27

R wake up & saw T sleeping by keeping her head on his shoulder. Seeing T , he didn't wake her up. Bt seeing T so closeto him, he felt very happy.

After sometime, T wake up.Seeing R luking at her, she felt awkward & sit straight.

T: Sorry, who main so gayi thi.

R: It's ok. Neend agayi , toh so gayi, isme itna awkward kyon ho rahi ho?

Bt R was amused to see T getting embarrassed

T: Abhi hume chalna chahiya. Pata nahi sab tent tak pahoche honge bhi ya nahi.

R wants to spend more time with T: Nahi thode der baad chalet hai na. Mujhe abhi bhi neend aarahi hai.

By saying dis, Rpretends to sleep & keep his head on T's shoulder.

T felt more uncomfortable.

R was smiling from inside by seeing dis

After some time,

T: Ab main kya karu? R so rahe hai. Inko uthayu bhi to kaise?& aise bathe rehna is very uncomfortable.

After sometime T decided to wake R up.

T: R uthiye, dekhiye kaafi late hogaya & hume chalna chahiye

R was not in a mood to go bt as T is calling repeatedly, so he decided to leave with her.

R: Chalo baakio ko dhoondte hai.

Halfway they meet gang

Sw: Tu theek hai na t?

T: Ha bhai, kal bearish k wajah se wapas ja nahi sake/

Team: theek hai, chalo wapas chalet hai.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res..

unres


veryy nic update

loved it each nd every part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Awesome updates
love all the chapter
taarey part superb
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome updates😛
All d parts were superb
Update soon !!!

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