ArHi FF: Desert Heat #9 *Ch 16, pg 1; NEW THREAD LINK pg 129*

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#611

Awww...

he found her anklet for her..

And next chapter is The good bye..

Hope not..

Please Arnav! Understand her!

Why did he have to allow Lavanya to get close to him?!

Khushi will be so hurt! That picture will never go away from her mind!

Hope everything becomes okay soon..

PS. No matter what happens in the story, I love reading your writings.

It is mind blowing dear. Awesome!

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

i was sobbing reading the update.. the anguish is unbearable :(

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smiley-shiney

@smiley-shiney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Fantastic update

I dont know y , but i felt very emotional reading the update

u penned every emotion very beautifully

I dont want to make any predictions for the future update

waiting for the next update

Thanks for the PM

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raws

@raws

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

oh so much teary...i dont want separation

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Amazing update as ever...

Khushi is torn between love and responsibility...I cant see them in pain...they have suffered enough.but precap??????...god!...they are going to be this for sometime now,looks like..

thanks for the pm

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

the part was so damn interesting..super awesome update loved it

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RK612

@RK612

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Amazing update. Thanks for the pm.

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moushumi_90

@moushumi_90

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

daaamn... 😭

it hurts dear...but trust i feel goosebumps all the tym while readin the update...i reallly felt bad for arnav dan khushi...but she is ryt at her place i guess...but i cant see arnav in pain.

please dear update soon :)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#619

Just how did things get sooo bad??? I dont understand Khushi... I know she is bound by a promise and she wants to face the Singh's and get rid of the guilt but that could have been easily done with Arnav by her side. She only had to say it once and Arnav would have taken her to them himself. By doing all this she is not hurting him but herself as well...

The part where you described Arnav's pain was just to painful to read. It doesnt deserve this at all especially because he had no say in the decision Khushi made for both of them...Im kinda glad that his friends decided to stand by him...

I am really hoping that whatever Maya saw is not true. The teaser definitely gave me so hope...😊

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#620

Unbelievable update.

Loved it.

Their angst is better than their love - lol.

I didnt see the teaser on pg 71 - has it moved ?

Thanks for the PM

WAITING for next chapter.

Goodbyes 😭