Originally posted by: vironikajain
First of all a very warm welcome to the forum...
Very emotional write up...
Ram's emotional turnmoil, hurt, pain, love, care, anguish, helplessness..everything single thing is beautifully described.. 👍🏼
Dialogues of Ram nd how his love increased day by day, his routine..superb one..
Very well written..👏
U should cont this..ab itna rulaya toh Priya ko utha ke or khushiyan dhikha ke compensate karo 😉
Thank you for writing a very emotional and spell-binding OS. You have written it in such a beautiful way that I was able to picture everything.
You have the talent and should continue.
When you said that your hindi will not be so good... I was dreading reading it in hindi as I talk awful long time to diciper it. But as I read on, I was so happy with your style, language and vocabulary used including the hindi, which was very good.
Hope you continue as I am looking forward to reading the next part.
Edited by bishop22 - 10 years ago
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