ArHi FF: Burying Desires II #2 Chap27 pg137 April, 26

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#591

After a long time, you updated. Thank you for that.

But am I the only one who felt that the last chapter is a bit rushed. know, you have tied the loose ends, but feels like it is rushed. But then again , I will not complain as you brought a closure to this beautiful story by updating the last chapter.

Thank you dear.

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#592

Welcome back.

Update was too good.

Khushi and arnav now have their perfect family.

Continue soon

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#593

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#594

Beautiful story.. loved it 😊

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#595

awesum ending to an awesum story

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claucrispop

@claucrispop

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#596

i just found this story...

it was great...

i loved this arnav and khushi...

i love it...

it was an awesome ending...

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#597

Instead of putting the story on hold for a long time,u had decided to end it very gracefully.

And the last chapter had tied up all the loose ends and gave us a complete feeling.
I had loved the genuine concern of Khushi regarding the distribution of her motherly love between Muski and the unborn.

Also,the way Arnav had convinved her regarding the same was worth reading.

And the show stopper was the beautiful narration of the amazing bomd of Muski And Mahiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Just give a thought to write abt an awesome Epilogue.We feel a teeny weeny bit of our heart n soul as incomplete with it.