OS: The Sum of all parts. - Page 4

As always brilliantly penned.

You have captured the nuances of love, life and friendship so very beautifully that I am in awe. The warmth, the familiarity, the affection, the touch, and the trip all delighfully fall into place. Khushi's hesitancy in wearing that bathing suit and Arnav's playfulness by keeping in the secret was real fun to read.I read a while back that the phrase 'happily married' is an oxymoron.

Well Arnav and Khushi here seem to live and breath that oxymoron then.

I am so glad I found you. (Which makes it sound like a love declaration...But I am in love woth your writing style...)

So long. I loved the fish. 😊

Mind blowing 😃 

Beautiful, natural, real and oh so tender is how I describe the relationship between Arnav and Khushi...

Edited by moomin4455 - 10 years ago

Awesome piece written 👏 ⭐️

RB, that was so exquisite, I have no words to say anything except that this was every woman's dream honeymoon (at least it was mine) --- the  kind of honeymoon that lays out the foundations of the married life that should follow such a honeymoon.

That teared me up and cheered me up! Edited by Japonica - 10 years ago

What an OS!

this ws pure bliss! enjoyed it immensely! :)

enjoyed it. Loved the last line especially.

"You don't complete me. You remind me that I am already whole." 

The title is so apt to the way u have written the OS.