OS: The Sum of all parts. - Page 3

Your writing has an inherent charm in it and its simplicity and effortlessness are perhaps the most alluring qualities of it. You know you are brilliant and i just enjoy reading everything you write.

I wish i could express my admiration eloquently but words always seem superfluous and inadequate to me.

Just keep on writing because you are great at it.👏

p.s.- Thanks for the pm.

 

This is a truly beautiful OS, which romantically captures every nuance of their relationship with frankly awe inspiring clarity; you perfectly depict the inherent fiestiness, friendship, and love in the relationship. Importantly the story shows an honest discovery about each other, which for me is the hallmark of what every successful, longlasting relationship in our lives are all about. However what I loved the most is how you seamlessly blended their past, present and future and so in essence gave a snapshot into their blissful life together, full of fights and nok jhoks and also importantly; love.

 

Simply amazing

 

Manreet :)

fantastic one - a perfect OS -

I felt as if I was there with them all through their trip -

- I long for one such holiday dear - hope I get that soon from my arnav

This is what I had loved so much about ASR - when he hated - he hated with passion and when he loved he loved with passion. This is such a rich beautiful character - and the two of them together, make it a whole for us!