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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 4:-
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Wow Finally an update after ages

I waited so long for it 

Comming to the update 

AsYalicious 

Just amazing



The Ayaan-Asad misunderstanding clear scene was so cute 

Aaha the ice-cream scene was the best 

Najma ko shak... So happy 

AsYa lost in each others thoughts... Wow 

I feel the person who disturbed Asad was Najma 

P.s. wat abt the shooting stars preview 

P.p.s. it was very short 

Luv ya

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Fav Dialogues-

"He is mad. Pagal hai poora Mr. Khan.. And you and him.. uhh... I'm so sorry for barging in! I think both of you need sometime alone!", she said and rushed out of the window. 

"Mr. Khan! Aap yahan? See.. I'm really sorry for barging in. I just felt you were tensed so I came to check on you! It's okay Mr. Khan. Main phupi ko kuch nahi bataungi. I promise! I will keep your secret safe. But you know.. I never thought you would swing the other way!", said Zoya.

"Oh shit.. I'm so sorry Mr. Khan! I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Mere liye shayad ye normal nahi hai but aapke liye to normal hai.. I shouldn't have said that! But agar aap uss leechad ke saath khush hain, then I'm happy for you too!", she completed. 


"Relax! Let's go out for some Ice Cream!", he said.   
Zoya's eyes popped out. "What did you say Mr. Khan?? Please repeat!", she said not being able to believe the words that left his mouth. 
"Let's. Go. Out. For. Some. Ice. Cream!", he repeated.   
"You are not Mr. Khan... Mujhe mere Mr. Khan waapas kijiye!", she shrieked. 
Asad smirked at her statement.
   "Mere Mr Khan? Aapke Mr. Khan kaise hain?", he asked with a smile playing on his lips. 
"Uhh.. wo.. Sadu hai.. akdu hai.. boring hain aur emotionally challenged insaan hai!", said Zoya with a grin. 


"Ummm.. This is yummy-licious!", she moaned in delight. 
"Stop it Miss Farooqui..", he said curtly.   
"Mr. Khan.. You should try this.. It's with chunks of strawberry! I love it!", she said extending her cone to his lips.


Asad's Room   
He went to his cupboards and took out Zoya's Ammi's Earring that he had kept with himself. 
"The best day I have ever spent! Why can't I see her hugging her friend and I wanted her to hug me today! I just keep thinking about her all the time! I just want to be with her. Smile with her, laugh with her. And damn... I will make sure I cancel all the planes from Bhopal to New York.", he spoke to himself unknown that a pair of eyes were looking at him and listening to what he said to himself.   
 
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Chapter 5:-
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Mine

Read... Will edit tom

Have been yawning for past half an hour as I was waiting for the update

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Editing-

Najma heard everything... Yipee
Loved the way she teased Asad
😊

Oh gosh... Zoya in bathwrap...
Asad was feeling so embarrased
😳 

Then Zoya entering in Asad's room
Six packs and her usual ranting
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And yup the shayri by Zoya
It was superb


The ranting related to names
Totally enjoyed it
πŸ˜ƒ 

And the kiss on the cheek


Update soon

Luv ya

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Fav Dialogues:-

"I will make sure I cancel all the planes from Bhopal to New York!", said Najma repeating her bhaijaan's words to which Asad looked away. 

He walked over to Zoya's room and knocked. When he did not get any reply, he carefully opened the door and peeped in.   
He heard the shower run and close. He waited. After a few minutes the washroom door opened. Zoya came out wiping her hair, wearing a bath wrap.   
Asad stared at her.   
"Mr. Khan! Aap jaiye yahan se!", she shreiked which got Asad back into his senses. He quickly turned around and walked out of the door shutting it.   
Asad's POV   
"Ya allah! Ye maine kya kar diya! Zoya mere baare mein kya soch rahi hogi! And what was wrong with her left arm?"   
Zoya's POV   
"Allah miya!!! Mr. Khan ne mujhe iss haal mein dekha!!! Agar mere haathon ko dekh liya ho to? And he saw me in a damn bath wrap! WHAT THE HELL!!!! Ab to mujhe lecture milega hi milega.. Par galti unki thi... Sorry bolna to unhe aata nahi hai.. Upar se mujhpar hi chillaenge!" 


She barged into his room as usual and turned around immediately after looking at the sight of Asad in his jeans and white shirt with his buttons all undone. His six packs showing.   
"I'm sorry.. Maine kuch nahi dekha! Apki chest bhi nahi aur aapke six packs bhi nahi!", she squealed.


"I mean.. I thought ke aap mujhe tameez aur tehzeeb pe lecture denge and also me wearing a bathwrap.. I thought you would shout at me for all that!", she said sincerely. 
"It was an accident Miss Farooqui.. And bathroom mein aise kapde nahi pehenengi to kya salwar kameez pehenengi?", he questioned indending it to be of a slight humour. 
"Mr. Khan??? Aapne joke kiya?", she questioned in a shock.   
"Joke nahi tha Miss Farooqui.. They were sheer facts! And waise bhi.. You're my friend now! Dosto ke saath to joke kar sakte hain right?", he asked.   
"Well.. Of course main aapki dost hu ab.. But I didn't expect you to pull off a joke!", she said. 
"I did not pull it off Miss Farooqui.. You didn't laugh at it did you?", he replied.


"Isi baat pe ek sher arz hai..", she squealed. 
Asad rolled his eyes as he smiled and she narrated. 
"Butter ke saath Jam hota hai.. Jam ke saath hota hai Toast! 
Butter ke saath Jam hota hai.. Jam ke saath hota hai Toast! 
Ab to Miss Farooqui chhodiye.. Zoya bulaiye mere dost!" 
"Shukriya Shukriya!", she squealed feeling proud of herself.


"Wah wah kahiye Mr. Khan!", she ordered. 
"Wah wah Miss Farooqui!", he said sternly.


"Maine uss sher mein kya kaha tha Mr. Khan?", she asked irritated. 
"Butter ke saath Jam hota hai.. Jam ke saath hota hai Toast! Ab to Miss Farooqui chhodiye.. Zoya bulaiye mere dost!", said Asad repeating her sher in a stern manner.   
Zoya laughed her heart out.   
"Aap has kyun rahi hain Miss Farooqui?", he asked confused. 
"I told you to call me Zoya Mr. Khan... Ab aap mere dost hain! This sher was for you!", she replied controlling her laughter. 


"You know what Zoya.. I have a name.. It's Asad!", he said as a matter of factly in a husky whisper.   
"I know your name is Asad Ahmed Khan!", she replied in a low whisper.   
"Even I know my name Zoya.. But now that we are friends and I have to call you Zoya.. Then you have to call me Asad!", he whispered in her ear sending shivers down her spine.


"Now you better continue to call me that Zoya!", he whispered and dropped a kiss on her cheek. He winked and walked out of his room leaving Zoya stunned at what just happened. 
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Chapter 6:-
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Res

Read but will comment tomorrow

Btw next update page 100... Pakka???
πŸ˜‰ 

Finally unreserving

First of all luv u Mina di



All hugs and kisses for you

This was the best part so far

I loved this a lot

Words are less to describe it



The shooting stars scene β­οΈ 

The flashbacks   πŸ˜Š 

The confession β€οΈ

The kisses πŸ˜³ 

Totally enjoyable

The dialogues πŸ‘ 

Perfect work



Half way through... Can't believe that its already here

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150 likes reached on prologue

I was keeping a taboo for it

⭐️ 

Yipee

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Finally time to select dialogues for chp 6

Ummm... Can I copy the whole chapter

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Chp 6-

Seriously can't choose

It will be the whole chapter for this

And I don't have too many colours too

πŸ˜ƒ 

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Realization just dawned me

That the number of posts I have on this thread of yours

Is definately more than the number of posts you have

😳

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P.s. I had the max comments after this chapter πŸ˜³... can't copy all
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Teaser for chapter 7:-
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Yipeee

Mina Di

I love you

❀️

πŸ€— 

I love the teaser

Looks like AsYa had a naughty night



Waiting for the update now

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Chapter 7:-

U played a trick this time

Next update on 130+

πŸ˜‰ 

Cheating

Huh

But I love you for this update 

I was blushing while reading it πŸ˜³ 



Well I don't have many words to describe it

But it was so hawt

So passionate

So AsYaLicious

But totally not what I had expected from you



Cause it was way better than what I had anticipated

I loved this side of Asad and Zoya

Intense Asad and Shy Zoya

πŸ‘ 



To be true

I know you are

❀️
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Some of my highlights before teaser of chapter 8:-
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and the most honest confession
 

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Chapter 8- New Thread

Its decided

Teaser around page 130 

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This is my 15000th post

I have covered 1/3rd of my path from Sizzlerz to Stunnerz

I am in love with Stunnerz colour

❀️

Waiting for you to come up this much way too 

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Heartbeat
Heartbeat, heart, heartbeat
Heartbeat, heartbeat
Heartbeat, heart, heartbeat 

But you're stealing my heart away
Yeah, you're stealing my heart away

Stop tryin' to steal my heart away
Stop tryin' to steal my heart away 

I don't know where we're going
I don't know who we are

I can feel your heartbeat
I can feel your heartbeat
(He said to me)
I can feel your heartbeat
(Running through me)
Feel your heartbeat 

I can feel your heartbeat
(She said to me)
I can feel your heartbeat
(She said to me)
I can feel your heartbeat
(Running through me)
Heartbeat, feel your heartbeat 

Stop stealing my heart away
Stop stealing my heart away
Stop stealing my heart away
You're stealing my heart away 

I don't know where we're going
I don't know who we are
Feels like we were floatin'
High above the stars
(Stars, the stars, the stars, the stars) 

Heartbeat
Heartbeat, heart, heartbeat
I can feel it, I can feel it, I can feel it
I can feel it, I can

I can feel your heartbeat
(He said to me)
I can feel your heartbeat
(He said to me)
I can feel your heartbeat
(Running through me)
Your heartbeat, feel your heartbeat
(She said)

I can feel your heartbeat
(She said to me)
I can feel your heartbeat
(She said to me)
I can feel your heartbeat
(Running through me)
Your heartbeat, feel your heartbeat, beat, beat 

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Finally comment on teaser for chapter 8:-

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Aap meri biwi hain.. Haq hai aapka!", said Asad with a smile. Zoya mustered courage and looked up at him with a gentle blush.


this scene came into my mind

how do you read my mind always

just today i was wanting an Asad shirtless scene similiar to yours in the show

but i got it at my favourite writer's story

just love you β€οΈ



can't wait for the new thread now πŸ˜³
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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Now I'm done consolidating my comments! πŸ˜›

Back to listening "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"  β€οΈ

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I wanted to consolidate all my posts but then god knows how many posts I needed to res

I-F would have banned my account πŸ˜†

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Don't be so shocked

It's all cause I love you big sister


Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 10 years ago
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mai aa gayiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Mahima..2 pages res????😲

Unres

Sholly sholly vely sholly about the late unres...I was busy reading your Arshi stuff and missed stalking this threadπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Badawala, dil se wala, from the soul wala..special wala thank you for the special shout-out!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..I am also very glad I found a friend in Mahima and you!! β€οΈ
I take an oath that I shall try with utmost sincerity to help your darling kiddo sis Mahima in her spamming missions!!🀣

Ok let me talk about Heartbeats update nowπŸ˜‰
Asad Zoya - Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein Ishaara Ho Gaya, Baithe Baithe Jeene Ka Sahaara Ho Gaya
and did Asad, THE Asad Ahmed Khan show Zoya what a kiss was??? ...*FAINTS*

p.s - I see that you did not say after how many pages you will update and left it on your mood!!😑
Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

mai aa gayiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Mahima..2 pages res????😲



13 posts to be exact πŸ˜‰

Kaam tha kucch πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima



13 posts to be exact πŸ˜‰

Kaam tha kucch πŸ˜†

I'm already excited to know what it is!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

I'm already excited to know what it is!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ

 
except first 2... remaining all unreserved

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