Surprising Poetic Corner 4- Coast to Coast - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

528

Views

34603

Users

147

Likes

1325

Frequent Posters

uluvmg thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Congrats for New Poetic Corner 4...👏
Happy (belated) Janmashtami.. lovely  poem..!!
keep it up...excited for next..thanks for pm..!!
Edited by uluvmg - 10 years ago
TANVI_SEXY thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#62
🥳congrats on the new thread🥳
amazing poem😊😊
loved it❤️
beautiful👍🏼
and thanks for the pm😃

soni19sweet thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: surprising

Message for my 3 devoted readers

salooni:

Dear,plz don't mind.I'll give replies of ur comments in previous corner.But m already late to give Janmastami special update.so-----wait a little more.😊


Roxxy47:


Dear,I'll surely clear ur doubt regarding the last poem of previous corner.But u too,plz wait a bit more.😊

Radhikarani:


sweet kokli,tor comment r o uttor debo,but plzz ektu wait kore thak.😳




hey dont talk like this i understand everything without you saying 
i know you 
take your time 
i will wait 
as answer if possible 
there is no complusion😃
soni19sweet thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: surprising


Happy Janmastami to all🤗
Have a marvelous day my dear buddies.


this makhaan  chor stole my heart
lovely pic
same to you dear
soni19sweet thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#65
congo for new thread
soni19sweet thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: surprising

 

Advent of Someone Extremely Auspicious

 

A very beautiful moment is what?

When you smile?

Or weep out of blithe?

 

The earth is an affectionate mother,

But being so loving & pure

She can't destroy her own off-springs...even if they turn devil!

 

So, what's the solution?  

Lamenting like a spineless stalk?

Or creating someone uniting all good powers?

 

Whenever there's hailstone of evil seeds to contaminate soils,

Here appears A GODLIKE FIGURE to devastate the devils

Just like a mightier thunder-storm.

 

Marvelous care for untouchable persons,

Awesome nectar for every suffering soul,

Merciful indulgence for all having loving hearts---

 

This is our Lord Krishna...the riddling child born today.

 

But day-by-day where's gone the heavenly essence?

The wicked smell blows everywhere--!!

How can we remain near God? How can we...!!

 

Search in your own heart.

You will surely find a little baby"

With very cute smile having handful of "noni";

 

This sweet entity lies in every heart.

Just needs an excited desire to awaken it.

Don't squeeze your childish mind in the dilemmas of life.

 

Our Krishna being Almighty loves inherent hearts.

 


wow so beautiful journey of god to earth 
to defend the evil and relation killer devil 
and give the world a new identity 
with reforms and knowledge 
the ma krishna enlighten our path
his naughty and sweet childish things add
color to our life and 
aalso a beautiful boundong of love os establish 
of radha an krishna
and of mother ans son 
who give his name to yashoda 
not being h
she his blood own mother 
all depicted so well thanks for it 
is aesome
P4rveen12 thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Congrats on the new thread,

The poem was amazing and brilliant,

A fantastic read,

Thanks for the PM xx 
ITS_LEENA thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#68
awesome one
 
loved it
swaron_arshi_07 thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#69
nice poem
I loved it
Posted: 10 years ago
#70
love your poems dear, you are immensely talented. 👏