Mission manafying My mr Angry Shekhawat Swaron part 5 updated pg 16 - Page 8

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

varshi,

sorry yaar, late ho gayi---so i read both the parts together 3 and 4.

i loved the gang secene...and swaron 1st day.

kiss was marvellously written.

but the last scene was too much for me.

i loved the way swayam was guilty...loved how sharon stops him from blaming himself, saying she is equally enamoured of him.

but i did not somehow, want them to have sex right now.

brilliantly written and all varshi, but somehow i told u, its just a personal , rather conservative aattitude of mine.

but even then i love  the innocence in all of it, and the true love.

i guess when u actually meet your match...and u know that he will never hurt you----then the heart wants to give him everything you have, mind body and soul.

anyway, loved your writing.

love--medha

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

hi medha i actuallu dont reply to any comments but i wanted to say...ur comments make my day...😊

When ever i update an Os i wait for ur comments...ya even iam conservative in mind...even i dint want them to have sex this early...but i thought y not go with little practical approach...😊😊  im sorry if i have hurt ur feelings in any way😊

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

hi medha i actuallu dont reply to any comments but i wanted to say...ur comments make my day...😊

When ever i update an Os i wait for ur comments...ya even iam conservative in mind...even i dint want them to have sex this early...but i thought y not go with little practical approach...😊😊 im sorry if i have hurt ur feelings in any way😊

Originally posted by: sadafarsha

It was awsum amazing

I luved it alooot

Haaye swaron

Really it was sooo romantic

Plzzz update next part soon and do pm me

Thanx for the pm