ARIYA SS:Tum yahin ho...*COMPLEPED*

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TUM YAHIN HO...








HIII FRS New ariya story...
one more ss:cantaing three ya four part...
this is a chalenge given by my litle sis...
hop u like..
its a lv story but in different angle n style...

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piya...
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ARIYA SS:TUM YAHIN HO...




TUM YAHIN HO...PART=1

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TUM YAHIN HO...PART=2

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TUM YAHIN HO...PART=3

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TUM YAHIN HO...PART=4
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TUM YAHIN HO...Last PART

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TUM YAHI HOO
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SCENCE:---IN AIRPORT---UK AIRPORT

One man is waiting for his flight...
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HE was sitting in one corner ,waiting for his fight...his flight is two hours late, so he start talking with himself...
Ohh god Arjun, ye TIME bhi na...kabhi to hum ese nachhaten hain or kabhi ye hamen channai express ke taraha ghumata hai,
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Aaj he ke din fight ko late honna tha,pata nahi kya huya poore do ghante late hai,
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Sudenly his phone vibrate...he smiled n look toward the meg...
in text--Hey come soon...I m waiting for u...

He dialed one no...
In call-Hey I m coming baby...I can't tell u baby, main yahan kaise wait ker raha hoon,
On the other one girl-milane ke jaldy mujhe bhi hai,Akhir etane saal ho gaye...tumhen etane saalon baad dobara dekhongi...
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Ar-i know baby, but what can I do, flight delay hai,
Ok buy baby sabse kehana arjun is coming..., ya offcouse miss u ok buy...
After that he cut the call...




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Again start talk to himself-----
Kitane saal beet gaye,but phir bhi ehasa lagta hai,ke kal he ke baat hai...
Jab tum pehali baar...
Vo tumhara pehali baar mujhase college main takrana----------------
White top or blue jeens main tum kitane beautiful lag rahi the,
Or takraker mujhe kahana...
He lost in FLASHBACK------------

Excused me... apko pehale bhi kahin dekha hai, one girl says to arjun very sweetly..

Arjun-(in mind)-Haan kyun nahi, same section main jo padte hain,
Girl-kya hum pehale bhi kabhi mile hain,
Ar-(in mind)-thousand times to mill chuke hain, short term memory loss
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Girl-vaise naam kya bataya tumne...??
Ar-(again in mind-kal he to bataya tha, infact one hundred twenty TIME bata chuka hoon,
Ab kya gale main name plate laga ker ghumon...
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Girl-achha tumne bataya nahi ,kya ker rahe ho yahan...??
Arjun again in mind-kerna kya hai upper library jaa raha tha,but by default tumse takra gaya...
Ya yun kaho...poore college ke students ko to tumne kha liya,
Or etane dino se mujhe khane ke koshish ker rahi hoon,
Vo to pata nahi god ke daya se abhi tak sahi salamat hoon,
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Girl asked continusly many question but arjun didn't answer any single question, all he think in mind...
At last girl asked arjun with pouted her face
Girl-wait,kahin tum special need vale student to nahi..(her meens hearing impaired)
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Thodi bahot sign languse to mujhe bhi aati hai, let me try...
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Finaly arjun spook..
Ar-no thanks, I m getting late,leave me...
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He steped inside the libray n she to come inside,
Girl-ok ok wait just kidding-------;-kadi hus be liya karo(laugh some TIME)
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He glare n answer-hansane ke liye reasion bhi hona chahiye miss...
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Girl-ok baba , gher nahi jaana arjun,
Ar-noo mujhe kuch notes banane hai,
Tum jaa sakti hoon,
Girl-but sab friend wait ker rahe hain, thoda TIME dena banta hai,
Ar-yahh by default, kabhi kabhi kuch thick bolati hoo,but I hav some work...so nahi jaa sakta...
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Girl-so when will u free...??
Ar-no idea..
Girl-so get an idea sir g..
Arjun was totaly fed up with the girl he yelled loudy,forget he was in library...
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Riyaaa..!!!!!!! Leave...or ager sath main rehana hai ,to don't disturb me...
(All student looking toward both)
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Riya-kuch log na kabhi, ne badal sakte, pata nahi tumhari poor girl friend ka kya hoga,..???
Ar-(without looking her, his full focus on creating notes)wahi hoga jo tumhara ho raha hai or kya.????
By defualt ek tum hi ho,jise hamesha mere sath chipakane main maza aata hai,
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Ri-(with anger)-excused me mr arjun ,by default , vo aap hi hain, jisane by default , mujhe proposed kiya tha,
Or by default, jo abhi tak mere sath chipka huya hai,
Other wise, I don't think tumhen ye batane ke jarorat nahi, ke main kitani beautiful hoon, or college ke sare ladke mujhper marten hai,
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Ar-(still ignoring her n full concentration on his notes)-yeah, kaise bhul sakta hoon us din ko,
Kaise tumne exam se ek din pehale mere, sabhi final notes ko, petrol main dooba ke,aag lagane ke dhamki deker, by default mere munh se nikalvaya tha--------
Riya I need u ,don't leave me ,main tumhare sath hamesha shadow ke tarah sath rahonga,thik vaise jaise mere notes mere sath rehaten hain,
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Bhala kaise bhul sakta hoon,vo din,jab tum mere bachho(meens his notes) ke jaan le leti,
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Ri(getting angery took arjun's note in her hand..n act as ,as she was tore in many peices...)
Tum kehana kya chahate ho,ke tumne mujhe proposed bus apne notes bachhane ke liya kiya...
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Ar(scared)-nahi nahi jaan, I m just kidding,I know how much beautiful u r,
Hamari four years ke friendship tum kaise bhul sakti hoon,
Now give me back, my notes...plz jaan
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(He was warried for his notes lolll)
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Ri-ohh u right,evening ko birthday per aa jaana,yaad to hoga nahi tumhen, sooncha tumhen yaad dila doon tumhen,
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"LIKH LO AAJ KE DATES NOTES MAIN"
Bez by default tumhen hamesha ke tarah,next years tum phir bhul jaoge,
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Last TIME petroled ke jagah tumhare notes sirf water tank main dobaye the,per es baar pakka petrol main dobba ker aag lagana nahi bhulugi,
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Bye take care see u evening,
Ar-(not looking her)by the way
Ri-yesss sss sss
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Ar-HAPPY BIRTHDAY
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Ri-sory kuch kaha..??
Ar-naughting now leave, mujhe disturbance nahi chahiye,
Ri-ohh thank u thank u..(bez he wish her birthday)
Ek tumhari voice he hai, jo tumhare face se match nahi kerti,
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Ar-kya kaha tumne...???
Ri-i m going, aa jaana bhulana mat,
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Arjun snnaped out his thought...

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SCENCE SHIFT--- AGAIN AIRPORT
anaouncement-
India jaane vali flight ready hai, this is last announcement plzz
Ar-ohh god ager aaj main late ho gaya,yah ye flight miss ho gaye,
Riya mujhe maar dalegi,


WISH U A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY BABY..I m coming...


TBC-
Mast ya bore..??
Plz gived ur feedback...this is a challange , given by my litle sis...


Edited by ll_piya_ll - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome start di
thanks fr d pm
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awesome start...
cont soon
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No comments... me still angry
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awesome update di
loved it
ariya flash backs was cute,lovely,beautiful,mindblowing...
amazing concept
riya is great...simply loved her
arjun  notes confeesed his love...great
thnx 4 pm and such a wounderful update
waiting 4 next part eagerly
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely one...
 
 
 
Love Ariya talk.. heheh Arjun is studyholic person...
 
 
uske notes ki kitni firk hai... pata nhi clg ke baad us notes ka kya kiya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow Piya a nice concept again Piya
really very nice
Riya really a chatterbox, she never quite
Poor Arjun
love the FB
Continue soon
I am waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice concept and an awesome start 😃
Ariya's talk in the phone was really sweet
Loved the flashback
Arjun saying in mind about Riya having short term memory loss was funny 😆
Aww Arjun is so studious
Riya's way to make Arjun confess his love using his notes was really good
Wow Riya talks so much
Really want to read the next part
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Leki

No comments... me still angry


But i wanna ...verna????
uff...ome time check ur scap...