Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 - Page 35

so the green monster is at work...hmmm... what is it in arnav's past that he doesnt want to share 

awesome update  dear  love it

Just love this story, so different than all the others out there.  I love Arnav as a cricketer and Khushi a journalist.  Fabulous the way the interview went, like pulling teeth, the walls still there of our Arnav Singh Raizada.  Our Khushi, I am sure, will crack that mortar and bring them tumbling down but I love how you have stayed true to the ASR character!  Brilliantly written and enjoyable. Looking forward to reading more!👏credit uploader

amazing update

Like the different storyline you are showing. Plus i might learn something abt cricket. ;)

Just read all the chapters so far and you write abt Arnav not liking the fact that Khushi is friendly with someone else. He seems to have forgotten abt Lavanya.

 HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR LOVED THIS SS LOVELY STORY LINE ITS COMPLETE DIFFERENT ARNAV AS CRICKETER WOW WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE 

the story is goig good...really loved the last two chapters... looks like khushi has already invaded a little of arnavs personal space...
i wonder why he was acting so aloof...
well...looking forward to the nxt part already...

very interesting .. something new .. I haven't read anything written on cricket .. I'd love to follow this story
plz pm me next update

book marking - thx for the link - will read and will comment

The comcept is great. I really liked it. And introvert superstar Arnav who hates journalists. The idea is fresh and different. Would really love to read more of it. Please Pm me for future updates. Would really love to read it.