Asya ss..The Truths Out..part 5---30 sept....note - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: kabhiasya4ever
IT WAS AWESOME YAAR...😛😛😊😊


I SUMTIMES WONDER KI FORUM KE WRITERS ITNA ACCHA KAISE LIKH LETE HAI...


THODA GYAAN HUME BHI DIJIYE GURUJI...??!!!</f


THANKS 4 THE UPDATE YAAR WAS WAITING 4 THIS SINCE SO LONG😊😊


PLS UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOONER...


ALL THE BEST👍🏼

Thanks a lot u liked it...
Part 5 in under construction...maybe updated by monday...

Love u
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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: awesome
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sonia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Sorry guys i couldnt update part 5 on monday as i had promised...

I had typed evrythng but coz of power cut everything was lost...

I hv again started typing and my be ill update in tomorrow or day after tomorrow...

And i promise it will be a long one...

N thx for all ur likes n coments...

Sorry...

Luv
Sonia...

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Iman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊

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sonia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

HEY GUYS...
HERES MY PART 5...SO SRY FOR UPDATING LATE...ALL INTERNETS FAULT...
N THANK A LOT FOR UR LIKES N COMENTS...

N YA HERES A LONGER UPDATE...HOPE U LIKE IT...

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RECAP...ASAD TAKES CARE OF ZOYA...SHE GETS HER NIGHTMARE..

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AFTERNOON 12:00 pm...

AYAN HUMERA AT KV...

ZOYA RESTING...

AYAN...asawalekum bhaijan

ASAD...walekum ayan...tum dono yaha?

HUMERA...bhaijan wo zoya bhabhi kaisi h? Wo mujhe unse ek bar milna tha...

ASAD...wo ander rest kar rahi h...tum dono mil sakte ho...

INSIDE ZOYAS ROOM...
ZOYA IS TALKING TO HER APPI ON PHONE WHILE LYING DOWN...

ALL ENTER...

ZOYA...appi mai apko badme call karti hu...
Mr khan?Ayan humera?

SHE TRIES TO GET UP...ASAD HELPS HER...

ASAD...Ayan aur humera apse milne aye the...

AYAN...mona darling.
ASAD ANGRY LOOK...
I mean mona.
abb tum kaisi ho...common mona tum to kitni kamzor hogayi ho...bilkul sukhi mirchi ki tarah.
uff*with a sign*

ASAD..angry..Ayan tum kaunse pakke hua aloo lag rahe ho...sade jale bengan se bhi zayada karab halat h tumhari.

ZOYA...smiles a little...mai thik hu...

AYAN..Bhaaaijan...aloo? Seriously?

HUMERA...bhabhi wo mujhe apse kuch bat karni thi...

ZOYA...bola humera...

ASAD N AYAN GO OUT...

HUMERA...wo bhabhi..mai janti hu ki app mujhse naraz h...

ZOYA...humera mai tumse kyu nazar hungi?

HUMERA...wo jo bhi mere ami aur abu ne kiya wo...apki ammi...

ZOYA...humera pls..jo kuch bhi hua usme tumhari koi galti nahi thi...

HUMERA...par app mujhse nafrat karti h na..

ZOYA..common humera..maine hamesha se tumhe apni choti bahen mana h..u remember fashion show me?

HUMERA...Alla miya..wo app thi bhabhi..

ZOYA...ya...

HUMERA..par app burkhe me?

ZOYA...wo tumhe to pata hoga na tumhare princi ne mujhe college se ban kar diya tha..so mai chup k ayi thi..

HUMERA...bhabhi? App wo?..apko pata h pure clg me apki bate chal rahi thi..ayan to apke piche pagal ho gaya tha..keh raha tha abb mai iss zoya se milkar hi rahunga...

ZOYA...i noe..

DER ASAD N AYAN WERE LISTENING TO THEIR TALKS...ASAD WAS SURPRISED N AYAN SHOCKED TO HIS FEETS...
ASAD LOOKS AT AYAN AND SMILES..

HUMERA...bhabhi..wo..mai..app mujhe apni choti bahen accept karengi?

ZOYA...choti bahen k sath sath best frnd bhi..accepted?

HUMERA N ZOYA HUG...

HUMERA...thank you bhabhi..i mean bajji..i luv u...

ZOYA..aww my sweet lil sis...i luv u to...

DER WERE TEARS IN HER EYES...ALL SHE DID WAS THANKED ALLA FOR FINALLY GIVING HER SUCH A SWEET FAMILY...BUT SHE MISSED HER AMI A LOT...

IT WAS NIGHT...HUMERA N AYAN HAD LEFT AFTER A TALK WTH ZOYA N ASAD...
ASAD COULD SENSE TAT ZOYA WAS STILL NOT COMFORTABLE WID EVERYONE..HE DECIDED TO TALK WITH HER...
DILSHAD WAS PREPARING DINNER...SHE ASKED NAZMA TO CALL ZOYA...
DER WAS ALL SCILENCE ON THE DINNING TABLE...ASAD COULDNT TAKE IT ANY MORE ZOYA BEING SOO QUIENT...HE WAS ABOUT TO SPEAK WHEN NAZMA STARTED..

NAZMA...Zoya..actually hame kuch project diya h..luv story k upar...to mai soch rahi thi ki apki aur bhaijan ke bare mai likhu...
ASAD WONDERS...

DILSHAD...Wow nazma..idea itna bura nahi h..

NAZMA...ha ami..zoya mujhe apki aur bhaijan ki luch pics khichni thi..app dono ko koi problem to nahi h na?

ASAD...nahi.

ZOYA...tamatar im sorry par mera mood bilkul nahi h..tum sagai k..yar sangeet k eid k pics lelo..

NAZMA BECAME SAD AS SHE COULDNT MAKE ZOYA HAPPY...DILSHAD SIGNAL NAZMA SAYING ITS OK...

NAZMA...Its ok zoya..

ALL HAVE THE DINNER QUIETLY N LEAVE TO THEIR ROOMS...
ASAD GOES TO ZOYAS ROOM...HE FINDS HER MISSING...
THINKING THAT SHE MAY BE IN DILSHADS ROOM GOES BACK TO HAVE A SHOWER...
AROUND 11...
HE COMES BACK N KNOCKS ON HER DOOR BUT SHE IS NOT DER...HE GETS TENSED...HE HURRIEDLY RUNS TO DILSHADS ROOM AND ASKES ABOUT ZOYA...NOW EVEN DILSHAD GETS WORRIED...
THEY EVEN CHECK IN NAZMAS ROOM BUT SHE IS NOT DER...ALL SEARCH AROUND THE HOUSE ONLY TO FIND HER MISSING.
ASAD AGAIN CHECKS ZOYAS ROOM N SEARCHES IN D GALLARY...

NAZMA POINTED TOWARDS A PAPER ON ZOYAS DRESSING TABLE WHICH WAS STUCK ON HER DRAWER...

NAZMA...never open this...

DILSHAD...Asad ye kya likha h Zoya ne? Never open this?

ASAD LOOKED AT THE PAPER AND TRIED TO OPEN THE DRAWER BUT IT WAS LOCKED...HE FIRST THOUGHT OF FINDING HER...
ALL OF THEM SEARCHED HER AROUND THE HOUSE BUT COULDN'T FIND HER...ASAD WAS SHOUTING BUT NAME AGAIN AND AGAIN BUT ALL IN VAIN...

HE SUDDENLY REMEMBERED ABOUT THE BENCH IN THE BACKYARD...HOW SHE USED TO SIT THERE WHENEVER SHE USED TO FEEL UPSET OR USED TO MISS HER MOM...

HE SAW HER SITTING BACK THERE AND OPENED THE SLIDING GLASS DOOR AND WHAT HE AND OTHERS SAW WAS A HUGE DOWNPOUR AND SHE SITTING THERE ON THE BENCH AND CRYING...

HE WAS ABOUT TOO GO AND GET HER WHEN DILSHAD STOPED AND SIGNALED HIM TO WAIT...

SHE WAS WEEPING AND SOON CONVERTED INTO A CRY...
SHE WAS LOOKING UP IN THE SKY...ALL DRENCHED UP IN RAIN HOPING TO FIND HER MOM THERE...BUT ALL SHE COULD SEE WAS DARK BLACK SKY...

ASAD HAD TEARS IN HIS EYES...DILSHAD COULD UNDERSTAND HER PAIN...A PAIN OF MISSING A MOTHER AFTER GETTING TO KNOW THE CRUEL PAST WHICH CAUSED THE DEATH OF HER MOTHER...SHE WANTED TO GO AND HUG HER TIGHTLY AND WHISPER HER...
Here I am sweetheart...always there besides you...I would never leave you and go...please stop crying...I can't see you in tears my baby...
SHE WANTED TO CONSOLE HER...TELL HER THAT EVERYTHING IS OK...BUT SHE KNEW THAT ZOYA WOULD NEED SOME TIME TO COPE UP WITH THIS AND SO SHE HAD ALSO STOPPED ASAD...

ZOYA TO HER AMMI...

ammi...app kaha h ammi...app kaha h...?..apko pata h mai apko kitna miss kar rahi hu...par apko to apki beti ki yad bhi nahi aati...i know app mujhe kabhi galti se bhi miss nahi karti...i know mai bahaut buri hu n isiliye right? Mujhe pata h that im a bad girl...mai hamesha galtiya karti hu...par ammi meri galtiyo ki iti badi saza kyu mill rahi h muje?? Kyu alla miya ne meri galtiyo k karan apko mujhse chinliya...maine kabhi apni zindagi mai nahi socha tha ki apke sath itna sab kuch hua tha...apko bahaut dard hua hoga jab razia bi ne apko...ma...mara...tha...haina?
But i know app bahaut strong h...bilkul apni beti k tarah n upon that alla miya bhi to apke sath h na...
Apko yad h ammi jab me choti thi tab school mai mujhe sab bache chida te the ki zoya tere abu nahi h...and mujhe bahaut bura lagta tha n mai fir rat bhar roti thi and alla miya ko kausti thi ki apne mujhe abbu kyu nahi diye...but ajj mai kush hu ki mere abu nahi h...aise abu hone se better h ki ho hi na...
Mai hamesha se chahti thi ki meri ami ho...jo subhe mere bal bana k de...mera tififin pack karke de...mujhe school drop karke de and...
jab mai school se wapis lautu to mujhe puche ki ajj kya kya padaya...meri studies le...jab me college jau to mujhe wo nayi nayi hairstyles sikhaye...dressing styles bataye...but aisa kuch nahi hua...appi thi ye sab karne ke liye but ammi apki kami meri zindagi mai koi puri nahi kar sakta...
Apko pata h Jab mai india ayi thi na...tab phuphi me mujhe app dikti hi...wo bikul app jaise hi h...mera dhayan rakti h...mr khan n nazma kitne lucky h na...unki ammi unhe samjti h...wo unki best friend h...apni sari problems wo unke sath share karte h...
Ammi sirf mere sath hi aisa kyu hota h...mujhe bhi ammi chahiye...bilkul phuphi ki tarah...understanding...caring...friendly...Whatever it be...par mai day one se mr khan aur nazma se jealous hu...y cant i have a mother like them..?? Kaunsi itni badi galti ki h maine ammi?? Sach to yhe h ki zoya bahaut buri h...sab usse nafrat karte h...and isliye sab mujhe chod k chale jate h...koi mujhse mohabbat nahi karta...koi nahi chahta ki mai unki zindagi mai rahu...app bhi issliye hi mujhe chod k gayi thi na ammi?
Mai ja ti hu ammi app mujhse nafrat karti h...but apne ek bar bhi apni beti k bare mai nahi socha...app bas usse chod k chale gaye...kya farak apko ki wo zinda h ya nahi...apko apni beti ki koi chinta nahi h na...apki beti yaha ro rahi h n app waha alla miya ko apne hatho ka yummy khana bana ke khila rahi h...right? But ammi apko bata du..that food is meant for me...alla miya ne pehle meri ammi chinli...abb wo apke hath ka khana chin rahe h...par apko kya farak padta h...app unhe khana khilayiye...mai khud khana bana sakti hu...n khud kha bhi sakti hu...
Ammi please..please aisa mat kijeye na...please come back...i need you the most...please...apko meri kasam...please ammi...mai apko order deti hu...app abhi k abhi firse mere pass aa jayeye...mere aasu pochiye...mujhe apne lap pe sulayeye...kahani sunayeye...khana kilayeye apne hato se...
But please aa jayeye wapis...i need you...please ammi...apko meri kasam...please ammi...ammi...

AND SHE BROKE DOWN...WITH THAT IT STARTED RAINING MORE HEAVILY...SEEMED LIKE EVEN GOD FEELT HER PAIN N WAS CRYING...HER TEARS MIXED WITH THE RAIN...
EVERYONE HAD TEARS...ASAD REALISED HOW MUCH SHE HAD MISSED IN HER CHILDHOOD...
SHE WAS SITTING ON THE GROUND CRYING HER HEAT OUT...ALL WET FROM HEAD TO TOE...
HE WENT TOWARDS HER AND PLACED A HAND ON HER SHOULDER...SHE LOOKED UP...
HE HELD HER AND MADE HER STAND UP...SHE WAS LEANING ON HIS SUPPORT...HE WIPED HER TEARS BUT FRESH TEARS MADE THEIR WAY AGAIN DOWN HER CHEEKS...SHE HUGHED HIM...DILSHAD KNEW THAT AT THIS POINT OF TIME SHE HAD TO BE WITH HER...
HE TOOK HER INSIDE AND ASKED HER TO CHANGE...

HE GOT A HOW CUP OF HOT COFFEE FOR HER...HE MADE HER SIT DOWN ON THE BED...WIPED A TEAR THAT WAS ABOUT TO FALL FROM HER CHEEK...SHE HAD HER COFFEE...DILSHAD ENTERED...ASAD WISHED HER GOOD NIGHT AND LEFT...DILSHAD SAY BESIDES ZOYA...
MADE HER LIE ON THE BED CREASED HER HAIR SOFTLY...

ZOYA FELT A SLIGHT ELECTRIC CURRENT THROUGH HER...IT WAS SOME STRANGE FEELING...SOME SWEET...CARING...
SHE MISSED HER MOM...
DILSHAD...zoya...rona band karo...kya hua...mujhe batao...

ZOYA...Phuphi...mai apni ami ko bahaut miss kar rahi hu...bahaut yad aa rahi h unki...

DILSHAD...Zoya...tum mujhe apni ammi manti ho na...mai tumhari ami jaisi hi to hu...

ZOYA GOT UP AND HUGGED DILSHAD...

ZOYA...phuphi app iss duniya mai sabse acchi h...

DILSHAD...Wo to hu...akhir zoya ki ami jo hu naa...

ZOYA SMILLED...
DILSHAD MADE HER LIE DOWN ON THE BED AND RAN HER HAND AROUND ZOYAS SOFT HAIR...

ZOYA FELT LIKE SHE HAD HER AMMI WITH HER...AND THIS TIME SHE WOULD NEVER LET HER AMMI GO AWAY FROM HER...ALWAYS BE WITH HER...NEVER LET ANY ONE HARM HER...

DILSHAD FELT THAT ZOYA WAS OK...BUT SHE KNEW WHAT A MOTHER MEANT IN SOMEONE'S LIFE...

IT DIDN'T TAKE A LOT OF TIME FOR A SWEET SLEEP TO COME IN ZOYAS EYES...DILSHAD MADE HER LIE ON THE PILLOW...REMOVED A STRAND OF HAIR COMING ON HER FACE...
GAVE A SMALL KISS ON HER FOREHEAD AND SWITCHED OF THE LIGHT...BEFORE LEAVING SHE LEFT A SCILENT PRAYER LOOKING AT HER SLEEPING ANGEL...

SHE WENT OUT AND SAW NAZMA AND ASAD SITTING ON THE SOFA BOTH IN TEARS...SHE WENT AND SAT BESIDES NAZMA AND ASKED WAT HAPPENED...
NAZMA NIGHTLY HUGGED DILSHAR AND WHISPERED I LOVE YOU AMMI...
DILSHAD UNDERSTOOD WHAT WAS GOING IN HER MIND AND HUGGED HER BACK AND ALSO SAID I LOVE YOU TO...

ASAD ASKED IF ZOYA WAS SLEEPING?
SHE REPLIED WITH A NOD...

NAZMA...ammi zoya thik to h na? Wo apni ammi ko bahaut miss kar rahi thi na?

DILAHAD...ha nazma...use apni ammi ki bahaut yad aa rahi thi...alla kare sab jald se jald thik ho jaye...

They all wished good night and went to their rooms...

Nazma asked dilshad if she could sleep in her from today...dilshad understood and allowed her...Asad was stored about zits and checked her out in every 1 hour of she was ok...
Sleep was out of their eyes today...

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END OF PART 5

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PRECAP...
ASSAD IS TALKING TO HIMSELF IN HIS TO ABOUT ZOLA...SHE HEARS IT FROM OUTSIDE...TEARS START FLOWING...
SHE IS ASK UPSET AND WALKING AND REACHES NAZMA S FROM...

SHE HEARS NAZMA AND CHILDHOOD TALK ABOUT HER AND RUINS TO HER THOM IN TEARS...SHE IS ALL ANGRY AND KEEPS ON CRYING...

HER MIND STRIKES WITH A FINAL DECISION WHICH SHE DECIDED TO TAKE FOR THE HOUSE EVEN HOW DIFFICULT IT WOULD BE...HOW MUCH EAR IT WOULD HURT HER BUT FOR THE HAPPINESS OF THIS HOUSE SHE DECIDES...THIS TIME ALL FINAL...

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End and a biggg end...finally...

Guys so sorry for updating it also late...

How you like this part...

I wanted to tell you all about the upcoming track...

The next part or may the after that one will be finally everything ok as I didn't line aura separation or sadness coz for me it aha ask it away...

I wanted to end the ss after the happy moment...and then start with a new one related to the current track going in the show...

So wanted all your opinions...

Please do leave a comment and include a like even through I know this is all rubbish...

And also please tell about your opinions...

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Love...
Sonia...

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Afrin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

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awesome!but i didnt understand the precap😕😕😕

Edited by ....Asya.... - 10 years ago

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a.sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

heya sonia...

like always its a very beautiful part... i cried a lot 😭 hearing how zoya was talking to her mom... i felt like i was in her place 💔... truly painful 😔... and marvelously carved 👏... the way dilshaad understood zoya was absolutely brilliant 😊... i also feltt for najma ... her fear was depicted beautifully... lovely update... 👍🏼

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The.Targaryen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

A very emotinal update

very nice...continue soon😊

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

wow i read all 5 parts in one go loved it

plzzz pm me for next part

i eagerlly waiting for the next part

continue soon

plz pm me

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RAJ

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Beautifuly written. So emotional. When read i feel zoya's pain. Tears automaticaly flows from my eyes. U perfectly portrait pain of zoya. Hats off to u.Update next part soon.
I send u buddy req if possible acpt it and send pm for next part

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