Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet
it came out beautiful hun.. i hope ur prrsonal and prifessional problems both get sorted out.. u know whrn im stressed its u geetians ff writers that give me strength to forget my problrms.. maybe even face them.. as for the update, hmm i thought maaneet already did the deed.. was this their first time? but glad maaneey r together again and maan realised.. fab hun.. cont soon.. write to relieve urself of ur problems..
Originally posted by: mirror1521
nice story..
loving it alott...
jst came accross today in daily update thread offcourse...
n ur doing good wid it..
wanna comment on each part..bt time is not permitting...
n pls count my like too 😉
not yet finished wid all chapters...jst done wid 8...
bt great story...loved itt 😊
Originally posted by: maanland
Hey you edited the update with pic
made it even more beautifuldear it was such a lovely updatethe first partMaan's different state of mindfrom feeling his reservoir of peace and contentment to his denial to his desperationeach state was beautifully writtenI am sure every reader could feel his loss or his desperation to reach for his lifeand then what a wonderful line it was maan felt as if he was caged in the walls of corporate brothel👏what a thought and what a linemaan saying sorry and wiping her nose with his hands was touchy momentloved his truthfulness abt him not liking geet talking to Jaitheir whole talk was so full of loveand then geet drooling on shirtless maanshirtless maan ke charm se bachna mushkil hi nahin namumkin hai😆😉and then breaking her self imposed limitsoh it was so sweet and their whole intimacyonly talking abt two people deeply in loveonly caring for otherI can't believe that you dedicated this wonderful beautiful update to MEoh dear I am honoured and humbled😳😳THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AND FOR THIS AWESOME UPDATE🤗
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