Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymousMG


"Dear anonymous"😳😳
Isnt it weird to hear smone call u anonymous...bt thts what i chose😆
firstly let me register my shock!! how come my story got the attention of one of those famous geet forum writers😳 Yayyy! i dont really think till now sm1 who has been writing so long on the forum has graced my thread. So yeah a feather in my cap😳

Thank u fr such kind words. Clearly overstated knowing how wndrful do u write urself. Bt thanks thanks a ton fr reading it so minutely. I suggest you to watch the movie whenever u can. U will see how much have I copied directly from there😉 I am not at all a creative person but yes I do have a thing to day dream and elaborate things. And this d manifestation of my personality. yes training was tough...bng a non IT prson thrown into software development kills you. I am using writing as a stress buster. Next part shud be up soon. I am just waiting for all my loyal readers from day one to read the latest chapter.

Thank u so so so much fr ur appreciation. Means a lot and motivates as well. You wud knw the feeling better bng a writer urself😆

Hope to find u here often.

Love
Anonymous🤣


beware
am gonna stalk this thread like hell from now. ya watched the promo on you tube quite similar but the diff characters make hell lot of difference in perception.
well... thank u dear
but i loved this... and i would be frank as well. u r just too good.
as far as anonymous goes... i dont know ur name..so thot of writing to ms anonymous😆
theres nothing to get shocked. ryt now am on a hunt for good buks ff or anything tht i can read,
so turned a deaf ear to mom and finished reading everything altogether.
so u r an engg passout??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


beware
am gonna stalk this thread like hell from now. ya watched the promo on you tube quite similar but the diff characters make hell lot of difference in perception.
well... thank u dear
but i loved this... and i would be frank as well. u r just too good.
as far as anonymous goes... i dont know ur name..so thot of writing to ms anonymous😆
theres nothing to get shocked. ryt now am on a hunt for good buks ff or anything tht i can read,
so turned a deaf ear to mom and finished reading everything altogether.
so u r an engg passout??


Do watch the movie smday. Thanks :)
yes I am a fresh engnrng grad..passed out this june. Wht abt u?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanland

Welcome back dear

Missed u so much
 
Loved the update so much
Geet and asad part was very nice
Maan and Dev part was also good
but I really wonder who was the taker for Raichand's underwear😆
 
and then came the much awaited Maaneet part
brilliantly written
don't know how do u write
u capture each and every moment so beautifully feels like I am there
Maan opening up to Geet and geet trying her best to take away all his pain
superb dear
 
both the emotional part and the necessary heat in the update was kept to the perfection
not overdoing anything
👏👏👏
 
though the length of the update was only disappointment
but u updated even when u r so busy that's enough for me
thanks so much dear
 
but next time a longer update
ok dear


My most awaited comment is here🥳

how are you dear??

M glad that u loved the part. I was kinda nervous wd this one as it had been too long and I was wondering if i have lost the touch with characters. Now I cn proudly say I haven't.

Umm..merging d pm reply here as well. Training...umm I am so glad that its over... seriously. They were killing me with all the pressure to perform. But bng  back at my place I am kind of missing it, espcly d weather...since my place is having biting cold winters😭
Even I am waiting fr mannet's union...dont wry...u aren't alone. It should happen soon I guess and hopefully it fulfills all ur expectations. i am sure nervous.

The part was short??😭 Everyone is complaining!! I guess it has to end here fr a proper closure. will try fr longer ones next one.

So hw has life been hun.
Waiting eagerly fr ur reply😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful nd emotional update 😛

Geet planning a romantic night, to make Maan feel good 😊 .

Luved the way she decorated the bathroom and made herself seductive just for Maan. And ofcourse it worked, Maan was totally mesmerized by the beauty infront of him. He felt so relaxed .

The bathroom scene was so 😳 😳.. And Maan taking about his father, and trying to take away his pain, was just super 👏 👏

Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Touching sensuous update 😳loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AnonymousMG


My most awaited comment is here🥳

how are you dear??

M glad that u loved the part. I was kinda nervous wd this one as it had been too long and I was wondering if i have lost the touch with characters. Now I cn proudly say I haven't.

Umm..merging d pm reply here as well. Training...umm I am so glad that its over... seriously. They were killing me with all the pressure to perform. But bng  back at my place I am kind of missing it, espcly d weather...since my place is having biting cold winters😭
Even I am waiting fr mannet's union...dont wry...u aren't alone. It should happen soon I guess and hopefully it fulfills all ur expectations. i am sure nervous.

The part was short??😭 Everyone is complaining!! I guess it has to end here fr a proper closure. will try fr longer ones next one.

So hw has life been hun.
Waiting eagerly fr ur reply😊
 

I am fine dear
Busy in my work and few weddings in family
 
great that ur training is over and u r back home
 
a superb writer like u can never go wrong with their writing
yes u had ur strong grip on ur characters
and the emotion in this update were the highlight
I can say u were even better with the emotional part
so ur training has surely improved ur writing as well😃
 
Yes u r right u had to stop ur update here only
( otherwise it would be difficult for maan to stop or control his feelings seeing his seductress geet😉😆😉😉😉)
 
waiting eagerly for the next part
waiting for more such emotional parts now
waiting for them to open up more , realise and confess their feelings for each other
 
 
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiiting😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part 
maan told heh about himself 
and she was not that much affected 
maan thinking something for her
waiting for more
plz update soon 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all parts
I have seen the movie still I enjoyed the story
Loving it in MG version
Loved your touch and little changes in the storyline
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
 
Me too want udpate😃