Vrushan OS: Love makes you feel different

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Friends! I am back here with an OS and this time for a very special person.It is for one of my closest buddies/sister here. Its for my Pari 😳 Finally Jaani tujhe itna tarpane k baad I am here 😆 with the OS that you wanted so obviously its dedicated to you. I seriously don't have any idea how it went but still presenting to you my first Vrushan OS:

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P.S( I made the banner and I know its all baqwaas 😆 but still jesa bhi hai here it is)

It happens that when the person with whom you are bonded is not around you feel lonely from within. The emptiness eats you from the inside and the eagerness to meet your partner increases by the day especially when you have just confessed a few days back. Similar was the case with our Shantanu he was pacing in the rehearsal hall anxiously from here and there waiting impatiently for her just to catch a glimpse of her. It was definitely Shantanu and not Swayam who wanted to see his lady love,grab her in his arms and stay there for eternity.

Shan in mind: Oh God!! Why am I thinking like Swayam? Phew won't it be too unrealistic? But what can I do? It's just that I can't control myself..my feelings when she is around. No even when she's not around I can't help but miss her like hell. God! Aj tak aesa kabhi nahi hua but Vrushika Mehta has something in her that's for sure!! I miss her so much there's so much to talk about I want to share everything with her but pata nahi kahan reh gayi.

Finally the desperate wait ended and there she came with her enchanting smile making her all the more beautiful. Her hair resting on her shoulders and she being her usual self entered the sets with all the energy in her. Whereas Tannu oblivious of her comeback was thinking hard how to welcome her or was rather rehearsing what to say when some loud voices made their way to his ears that made him happy or rather surprised. The voices said:

Hey Vrushii. Woho

So happy to see you back.

Missed you sweetie

How are you

Welcome back.

'OMG!! She is here. What to do now? Ab kya karun? Relax tannu relax' He was panicking of course he would after all she was back after two weeks!! He was confused what to say because nor he had any dialogues nor he did any rehearsal. Uff dialogues for what man? Behave like your real self! He instructed himself repeatedly but of no use. Poor soul he was his true self but this feeling was new to him..indeed quite new! He had no idea what to say to his new girlfriend especially when she came back after becoming unwell. His personality has changed for sure..from a shy teenage boy he has transformed into a talkative and fun-loving adult but still somewhere deep he was the same shy boy who used to be media shy and confuse during his interviews. He felt as if he was going for an audition or an interview for the very first time. It was so difficult for him!

He was still in his own dilemma when Maccy came and told him that Vrushika is here. He felt his heart beats rising. God! Why all this is happening to him?He tried his best to compose himself atleast he tried. Coming out of the room Shantanu was eager to see her but bad luck strikes again, Palki Ma'am asked him to get ready for the shoot as Vrushika as already gone to dress up. Poor soul walked to his vanity changed the clothes,got his script and went to the scene location.

So Shan ready? asked Palki Ma'am

Yeah but Vrushika?

After a small laugh " What happened to you today? This scene is not with Vrushika.

But you told me that she's getting ready.

Haan but for another scene.

Another scene?

Yeah which you have to shoot after this. Ok now guys get to your positions.

Roll…camera..sound…and action!

After 5 minutes.

Shantanu what happened?

Nothing Ma'am I am perfectly all right.

Kuch tou hua hai.

Nahi ma'am.

Then aik shot dene mein itni mistakes.

Sry ma'am Let's do it once again.

This was his 7th take. It was surprising for Palki Ma'am as Shantanu never did so many mistakes in a scene. He tries to give his best but today something was not right. So she asked him to take a bit of a rest and they'll continue after sometime but Shantanu was adamant to continue and promised to give his best as always. So Palki Ma'am without much ado continued.

This time he was at his best. Finally the scene was done and now Shantanu was all excited to shoot the next scene with Vrushika. Ah damn he missed her so much that he can't even explain to himself. He was reading the script when his eyes fell on her face. She was looking no less than a princess. In a white dress and her hair left open though it was a wig but still he even liked her in that avatar. After all true love is a heart to heart connection, it binds two souls together so the question of artificial beauty is secondary.

A romantic sequence has to be shot and it was done though there was awkwardness as they haven't talked face to face since more than two weeks. Shooting a scene of this genre was difficult not because they were uncomfortable or something but because they haven't talked by being themselves. It was though for them to start the conversation by being Sharon and Swayam. But they were bound by the chains of professionalism and as per their nature they didn't back out rather finished all the scenes with full determination.

After pack up they were hell tired but still it was necessary to talk and spend some quality time with each other. So without wasting this opportunity Shantanu asked her if he can drop her home and Vrushika readily agreed as if she was anxiously waiting to be asked. Both passed a gentle smile to each other after which they began walking towards the parking area. When Shantanu spoke.

Missed you. Missed you a lot in fact.

Really?

You doubt that?

Yeah coz you didn't even once tried to talk to me.

I tried but because of the hectic schedule today as you noticed I just couldn't.

Well, I understand that and Shantanu honestly I missed you too.

I knew it (smiling)

I missed our laugther.

Our silly talks.

Our cracking jokes.

Playing pranks.

Doing scenes.

Dancing together.

And most importantly being with you.

This was surely what they missed the most being with each other. No matter what they do but just by being there with each other was the most important. They couldn't help but smile widely at their craziness. After which both hugged each other tightly ah how much they missed it.

I feel alive again Vrushika.

Me too.

Thanks for being there always.

Thanks for coming into my life Shantanu and making it all the more beautiful.

Beautiful nahi Khoobsurat (both start to laugh)

Yeah yeah wohi Khoobsurat

You know when you came I never thought that we would be this close.

True but you know what it was meant to be.

I guess is thank you k quotay ko yahin roktay hain and let's have a cup of coffee.

Wow Monsoon mein coffee who bhi tumhare saath super amazing.

Let's go.

Both of them went to sip hot hot coffee in a nearby coffee shop while their chatting continues. Vrushika was telling him how much she was bored staying at home,missing him,watching D3 especially to get a glimpse of him,listening to songs and reading some articles. He was surprised that she was still bored of course she was because she missed doing masti and sitting all day at home was not at all an easy task at least not for the bubbly Vrushika.

Whereas Shantanu told her about his hectic schedule,shooting and dancing was what he did in his absence with enjoying with the team but still his lips couldn't get that warm smile that he had today after talking to her specifically and Sunday was the day where he slept nearly all day.

They already knew all this as technology has binded them in one way or another but still sharing experiences again was fun and refreshing them with each other was like cherry on the cake.

It is a truth that love definitely makes you feel different!.

please do read and leave your valuable comments and suggestions.

Pari I don't know if its up to the mark or not but still will be waiting for your comment.

Was it good, bad or just unreadable?

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pehlanasha. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Whoa, it was such an amazing OS! Loved it totally! :D

The sense of simplicity and innocence was beautiful, truly suiting the personality of Tannu and the bubbly and shyness sort of essence gave a Vrushical magic! 😉


-Marium
Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Swthrt...🤗

Beautifully written...i loved the way u portrayed VruShan state of mind..its easy to write on characters ,...but on real people its difficult to write fiction...and u did it beautifully

His confusion..his desperation ...to meet her...the emptiness due to her absence ..his excitement ...to see her..to meet her ..after her break...those mistakes during giving shot..amazingly done...

Loved the way he offered her lift and she readily agreed ...blissful conversation...lovely OS 👏👏

Keep writing swthrt ..u are awesome

Love
Deepika
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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relly niceone , liked it to the core , once again super cute 😃
-spongy- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres

well it was really nice
i loved it a lot...
it was superb...
it was so simple and so beautiful
thanks fir the PM
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful OS :) Thanks for the PM
VruShan_MaNan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res.
Unres.😃

Wow it was such a cute OS.😃
This OS symbolizes the innocence of love.😳
I really liked this side of VruShan and I love reading OSs on VruShan.⭐️
Lovely work.👏👏
I just loved the title of the OS.👏

PS:- Do PM me when you write something on VruShan or Swaron.😊
Edited by VruShan_SwaRon - 12 years ago
AninditaSwaRon thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ...
Such a cute one ^_^
..Aishaa.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its simple subtle and nicely penned :)
keep writing :)
snehaswaron77 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear it was super amazing...Shantanu being totally restless & curious to meet her..His dilemma every emotion of his were perfectly penned...& finally vrushan spending some quality time together...As a whole beautiful OS...Loved it very much...& thnx for the pm...

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