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lakshmisalvadi

@lakshmisalvadi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#581

😉 Hey sweetheart

Awesome update. Love the way they both love each other. Dono ek dusre ke liye had se aage gujar jane ko tyaar hai.

Love u dear. Plz update more frequently.

Lakshmisalvadi

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Awesome update...

Anu, kya likhu? Bahut hi achha update hai...

Dev ka Maan ko tease karna aur Maan ka shaadi 6 mahine baad hogi ...jo haal hua ...achhi tarha se likha gaya hai...mujhe laga agar Dev nahi aata toh humein kuch jyada romance milta na!!!! Dev ki entry galt time pe ho gayi!!!

Ab Maan aur Geet ke baarein mein jo bhi likhu kam hi hai...pyaar ko dono ne jo izzat di hai woh bahut khub hai...dono jo karein achha hi lagta hai...chahe woh baatein ho ya romance...kahi bhi aisa nahi lagta ki yeh umr mein aisa nahi hona chahiye...yeh tumhari writing ka jadu hai...bahut sahajta se tum sab likh pati ho ki padhne mein kuch galat nahi lagta aur sab sahi lagta hai...tumne meri wish puri kar di ki ek update sirf Maan aur Geet hi chahiye...ab ek aakhri baat hai ki story ko sirf shaadi tak khatam mat karna par honeymoon hamein chahiye...dogi na?

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#583

awesome update. this is a wonderful story.

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Mohabbat barsa dena tu saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka mausam aaya hai
Sabse chupa ke tujhe seene se lagana hai
Pyaar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyaar kisi pe pehli baar aaya hai...

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

just mindblowing dear

maaneet marrige heey i soo much excited

maaneet romance their understanding each other

all teasing maan lol he is soo desperate to marry

living in same house it wish of my too

waitnf for next

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vidyaniru

@vidyaniru

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Very beautifully written. I loved all Maaneet dialogs. Both of them don't care about the structural house, they just want to be with each other. I'm glad that she is not insisting that they should live in KM. Maan would never be comfortable. He explained that also very well to her. I really really liked the way you wrote that whole conversation.

So shaadi in a week...

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anuradha.nandam

@anuradha.nandam

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Mohabbat barsa dena tu saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka mausam aaya hai
Sabse chupa ke tujhe seene se lagana hai
Pyaar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyaar kisi pe pehli baar aaya hai...

meri update ko tabhi asli swaad atha hai jab thum isi shayari jodethi ho ,.. loved it ,.. meri essence of love ki asli essence thumhari shayari dethe hai ,.. beautifull dear thank.u very much

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anuradha.nandam

@anuradha.nandam

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Awesome update...
Anu, kya likhu? Bahut hi achha update hai...
Dev ka Maan ko tease karna aur Maan ka shaadi 6 mahine baad hogi ...jo haal hua ...achhi tarha se likha gaya hai...mujhe laga agar Dev nahi aata toh humein kuch jyada romance milta na!!!! Dev ki entry galt time pe ho gayi!!!
Ab Maan aur Geet ke baarein mein jo bhi likhu kam hi hai...pyaar ko dono ne jo izzat di hai woh bahut khub hai...dono jo karein achha hi lagta hai...chahe woh baatein ho ya romance...kahi bhi aisa nahi lagta ki yeh umr mein aisa nahi hona chahiye...yeh tumhari writing ka jadu hai...bahut sahajta se tum sab likh pati ho ki padhne mein kuch galat nahi lagta aur sab sahi lagta hai...tumne meri wish puri kar di ki ek update sirf Maan aur Geet hi chahiye...ab ek aakhri baat hai ki story ko sirf shaadi tak khatam mat karna par honeymoon hamein chahiye...dogi na?

glad u loved it ,..,. its all ur love yaar that i too became comfortablewriting like this ,.. its all ur encouragement ,..mai jobhi ho ye sirf aur sirf thumhari waje se hu ,.. meri soulmate ho thum ,.. jobhi likhu mujhe achhe tarah se samajjathi ho ,. thank.u dear ,.. be always with me like this ,.. love u,..

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Mind blowing update!!!👏👏👏 👏👏Wonderfully written⭐️⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️Maaneet Marriage😃eagerly waiting for it...Loved Dev teasing Maan😛😆Loved Maaneet Romantic moments ☺️☺️😳Geet wants to live the same house Pari gifted her with Maan😊...Loved the way they are understanding eachother is so beautiful❤️❤️loved it so much...waiting for the next update