Arhi SS| The Games That Play Us Ch.4 pg 25

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

The start is very unique. Khushi is on her way to seek revenge, somehow Ajay is to be part of it. Arnav and Ajay are not in good equation but Indira is stuck between the father-son duo. The policatical background reminds me of another FF by Kalyaani but I'm sure yours is different in your own way. I can't wait to know further. Great start, all the best!!

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hello Shiza and Emm,
first of all congratulations for this new joint ventures of yours...
I am sure this is gonna be a rocking journey for us with two extremely talented writers together..
coming to the story...the start was just awesome and perfect..
it had everything to capture the readers attention and interest...
Khushi set out for taking a revenge with that much strong will and determination and Arnav coming from a political background but having his own sets of ideas for his life...
and off course a dreadful past behind all of them to connect... i am already hooked!!
a brilliant start and cheers to both of you for thinking of this story and sharing this with us... 😃

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soppy

@soppy

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Very interesting!...sounds like a heavy duty emotional ride...and i am all set for it!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I love the beginning, very mysterious! So Khushi has a score to settle, with Ajay Singh Raizada...? Did the Raizadas do something to Khushi's family?

Will she wreak her revenge somehow through Arnav?

I feel for Arnav's mother; her husband sounds awful and yet she is it feels duty bound. There aren't many incarnations where the senior Raizada is a good father or husband, so I expect him to act as is assumed - like an underhanded ass. 😆

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hey!!!
Shiza and Emma
congratulations for the collab and thanks for giving it to us i mean writing it for us
coming to update
i have always seen khushi bubbly,chirpy and childish type but this is first time i am seeing khushi who feels no simple emotions but wants to make someone her pawns and then manipulate them it's more like she is in india for revenge not to live happily moments here
ajay singh raizada seems the short tempered but a confident politician who subsides his fears within himself
and indra is the mother and wife who is proud of his son but can't leave her husband
and arnav seems more in his world rather than joining politics and wants his mother all with him
Would love to know more about this arhi pair and i think they are somewhat connected to each other with their past
Best of luck with this new story!!!!
thanks for pm and buddy me

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Pavina

@Pavina

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

The title itself pretty much says the concept..a very intriguing and intersting...
So the family affair showed a lil abt two families...there is a connectn defnly whic wl b xplrd later i guess...
Khushi seems to b in revengfl mud since sumthn has hapnd in past...lil kainat seems to b free spiritd though...so amidst bitter past, revenge, politics arnav n khushi r goin to meet...loved the bond betn arnav n indira...arnav loves her a lot n to me he is least interstd in politics...i may b wrng though...and his eqn wid his dad is lil doubtful...this has made me curious
Very intersting start...continue soon...

Edited by Pavina - 12 years ago