Nokjhok/Love Series Pg 26 OS:The Chocolaty Scene Reloaded!! - Page 3

Hey superbly written...loved it
pls do pm me  when u next update


Love ,
Kiara.

Edited by lakhy - 10 years ago

kya pada tha kuch yaad nahi  ,...bas  ...😆😆😆

it was  that awesome  ..i m lost ...im dizzy  ❤️


-        I know you will never tell me what you feel for me, so I am asking you to show me.

OMG i love ur kumud...

then


His hands remained on the wall behind her. He knew if they came off the wall they would explore every inch of her.

lord have mercy ... i can totally see that.its the great saraswatichandra vyas  ... jo galtiya bhi apne limit me rahke karte hai 

all the name  ...Mr Hulkchandra ,
Mr Belly Button 🤣 🤣 🤣

ohh i love u janu 🤣

i think cv will give us  hulkchandra very wala soon  😆
loved it loved it ...

and  most important line ...''ah dill mange more '' 😳😳😳
pelezz tellzz me more  😭

Edited by -B.N.K- - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiara_angel

Hey superbly written...loved it
pls do pm me when u next update


Love ,
Kiara.

Thank u kiara!!
Sure I will. 😃
With love
OSJ

Res
Interesting name dangerous game 😉
Edit:
Janu🤗
Omg..from where should i start?😛
It was cute..no not only cute,Romantic..no not cute nd romantic only...erm words hi nhi mil rhey yar...🤔..
Was not it brilliant?😃
Yes its Brilliant janu..
The complete pleasure of samud romance i want😳
Just love it yara..each nd every Inch of it was written beautifuly..👏
Mind blowing,Mind blasting..😆 ek dum jeni ishtyle..😆
I loved it how she used to call him by diffrnt names "Mirchi chandra" "Hulk chandra"
Realy enjoyed it to the core plz keep writing..
Janu personally when i use to write i never get flavour of romance in Hindi Dialouges..But whn u write..it has a different charm..I realy enjoy it dont knw why ...i use to enjoy ur english romance also..❤️
bt its true U r very talented writer..Keep writing such beautifuly..love u..M sure We writers would never let any one bore by serial..Madmud 😭
Hope u'll like my late comment..sowiee for late 😛
Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 10 years ago

updated  😛😛😛

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Bornu done!! My next one will b Married wala SaMud!! The one on page one will b - Dangerous Game coz it's 75% completed.

wow super duper dear loved it
and mee too waiting for married samud

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

kya pada tha kuch yaad nahi  ,...bas  ...😆😆😆

it was  that awesome  ..i m lost ...im dizzy  ❤️


-        I know you will never tell me what you feel for me, so I am asking you to show me.

OMG i love ur kumud...

then


His hands remained on the wall behind her. He knew if they came off the wall they would explore every inch of her.

lord have mercy ... i can totally see that.its the great saraswatichandra vyas  ... jo galtiya bhi apne limit me rahke karte hai 

all the name  ...Mr Hulkchandra ,
Mr Belly Button 🤣 🤣 🤣

ohh i love u janu 🤣

i think cv will give us  hulkchandra very wala soon  😆
loved it loved it ...

and  most important line ...''ah dill mange more '' 😳😳😳
pelezz tellzz me more  😭

Old Toni is back with old Saras!!🤗

Good grace Toni u r hilarious!! Believe me i dont like to read my work a second time!! I feel so embarrassed!!
But i am so happy u love it!!
Well dil manhge more wud b in a couple of days!! Bornu ke story par kaam karna hain!!😉

Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel

Res
Interesting name dangerous game 😉

Par ke mujhe bata na if it was dangerous!!😉

Mat hai yaar...