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Dona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

part 15

awesome update

geet n shonu waiting for maan

maan scolded geet..

loved it

like is nt working

nice teaser

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usha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

awesum updt and teaser...looks like they r getting married...continue sooon

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

hi js read pt 15 nw~! Geet is so innocent n sweet! Maan admires her! Lovely teaser! update soon

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chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

no dont stop i love this
what happened in his office
did his staff say something to her
they better not have
wait are they married now
wow thats some teaser

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928699

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

wow so cute

love it .love geet she is just like a cute baby

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_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Awesome update
here geet was waiting fr maan tht she'll have dinner with him she even made shonu to starve fr his daddy n maan scolded her fr tht very bad maan

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latecomer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Oh dear geet is sooo adorable here...who wud not fall for such a delicate yet strong girls...so loving it and teaser turning me impatient..
waiting..Edited by swarnakanak - 10 years ago

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suhaaana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

**MENDING HEARTS**

part 16

the next moment she burst out crying and he looked suddenly worried and petrified with her cries.. She was looking at him with her accusing eyes throat filled and it was going to be a hard time with him to look after and greater manofy his baby princess.. She glared at him and later went away leaving him alone in the room.. Maan looked at the discarded food she had not even touched guilt filled conscious made him to go and search for his cutie.. She was sitting and crying folding her knees since it was slight cold her nose had turned red and she was sniffling and wiping the traces of tears..
maan looked at his darling who was cuddling to herself and was getting sleepy and crying he felt bad and looked at her she completed ignored him..
geet looked at maan and she made a cranky crying face..
geet cryingly..
geet: go away... I dont want to go with you and will not talk to you.. Kitna daanta even shonu is upset..
she was deadly cute and her snifflin more to add guilt was making him to desire for her..
maan didnt said anything he just scooped her in his arms and without looking at her made their way to the room.. She was fretting and fighting with him to leave her.. Hitting his rock hard chest with her soft hands maan could even dared to stop her least he knew that she will burst out crying again..
maan : geet stop jumping warna lag jayegi..
geet : nahi aap bahut hi bure ho.. Kitna daata mujhe .. Itna bura laga mujhe pata hai.. Even baby is scared of you.. Mere baby ko dara diya..
he softly made her sit on the couch and dipped the chapati in the curry and started feeding her she was still crying and eating .. Maan got to know that she was damn hungry and maan started making her eat she was making faces and didnt even noticed what she was eating he tricked her and made her eat the recommended diet of the doctor along with the food she eats.. Geet who was a dire eater of green chillies suddenly is deprived of the same but she some mangaed to get her food spicy by tricking nakul... And even nurse couldnt get a hold of this little child woman who was going to be a mother..
maan when tasted the food he looked at her with skeptical eyes but she was least bothered if she wants to eat chilly then she will no one will deprive her off that and even if she wants to taste what maan wants to eat then she eats even restricting him to even touch those food items since they were not appropriate for him.. Well according to our child woman..
maan : geet you made this food.. He could easily make a difference .. Even he cant tell her that how tasty and finger licking food she makes... Now his senses were making him to apologise to her .. She had waited just to eat with him starving herself and the baby and even she claims that she had made the baby understand and he is also fine...
maan : wait from where does this he comes he know that they are going to have a little and chirpy doll just like her mama and geet is actually making the baby and addressing a boy.. Butdont he want a boy to suceed him.. A heir to his property and his empire then if she also wants to have a little boy than what's the problem after all listening to her being pregnant the first thought that crossed his mind was of a baby boy who would be his heir then why he wants a girl now... Many questions and no answer.. First she , the girl who is living with him with no relation.. Why so.. Who is she whats her existence... Doesnt he is deaf who wouldnt listen to what his servants will talk.. Their ear piercing talk was actually something that made him alert about his relation with her...he knew who is she.. Why she is here but do they... No and the society will talk about her and he cant just shut their mouth just because she is with him...

A DAY BEFORE OR SAY YESTERDAY ONLY
maan was going to the office he had an important client meeting and his presence is must or he will have asked his staff to handle the same.. Maan actually never attends meetings unless and until it is too necessary.. What are staff for.. He just sometimes visits sites and one of his encounter with her was during those visit only she had landed in his life just like a calm storm..
the cook who actually assists in making the meal with nakul was saying some abusive to him about geet..
servant : nakul kon hai ye ladki jo sir ke saath unhi ke kamre me rehti hai... Kitne log hain iski dekh rekh karne ke liye.. Shadi shuda bi nahi lagti... And i have heard from nurse that she is pregnant.. Na jaane kon hai.. Aur sir ki kon si galti hai iske aanchal me..
servant didnt looked at maan who was listening to him .. His eyes were filled with anger knuckled white ready to knock him off but he stopped to listen more...

rest in next part... Will edit at night...

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suhaaana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#479

**MENDING HEARTS**

PART 17

the servants were talking and maan was just listening he didnt want to interrupt them strangely he was listening to each and every menancing word which was actually disgracing his and moreover geet's name and dignity.. Eyes having a blazing fire if maan wanted he would have destroyed the person but hearing his next set of words maan left from their immediately..
servant : we cant say anything to them since they are possess a respectable position in society nakul bhaiyya but isnt it disgracing the girl her culture who is going to be a unwed mother... This girl looks very innocent nakul bhaiyya but who knows how many are there like her whom sir had left...
the truth is always right and the most bitter to swallow maan had heard what he said UNWED MOTHER no wonder the girls who are either cheated and trapped or even if they have been betrayed by their own love were considered and still in the mentalities of people and the society are considered a BLACK MARK...
Maan remebered her saying that she is a black mark on her family.. When she is not even familiar the true meaning of the words and will the society accept her and his kin as legitimate.. She is not at fault and not him practically the culprits are living in high pleasure and the victim,Geet is made to suffer .. Just because she is VULNERABLE , UNDERAGE , TRAPPED AND FORCED .

his reverie was snapped by her melodous and fearful voice she was still sniffling and was now having his bland pasta but today there was something different in that too.. It was having lots of cheese and a sprinkle of fried onions which was a total mismatch combination that he couldnt even eat but she was relishing least he knows that her cravings have already started...
geet : aapko khana acha nahi laga...
maan : geet itna spicy.. And you are eating aur why did you troubled yourself .. You should have asked nakul agar kuch chahiye tha tho...
for the second she had forget that she was angry and he had shouted at her.. She made a baby face and continued having her food.. She with the baby had became a big foodie.. Maan was amused she was having everything without even complaining..
they had their dinner with her having two chocolates stating that one is for her and one for their baby.. He was actually living with a baby girl but most important thing to know about her family was still missing..
maan : geet first answer me why did you stressed yourself and prepared dinner mana kiya tha maine...
maan was holding his anger and cooling his senses which were for sure worried for his child woman..
geet : aapne kaha tha that i will work for you aur kitne din ho gaye hai did you give me any work nahi na.. Islye maine nakul bhaiya ki help ki.. Wo deepak bhaiya nahi the aaj so i helped him.. Aur waise bhi i am just like your employee so i can do any work that they do.. She said stubbornly.. Maan was getting amazed by her sense and frustated by her attitude...
maan under his breath...
maan : dammit she is careless and too naive to manupulate not actually safe to ler her stay here... But what she will do. Ye apna dhyan rakh le wahi kaafi hai ..
geet when find him getting lost she had already eaten her choclates which was now melted on her fingers and face.. She was busy licking her fingers and was now sitting so close to him that her feminine scent mixed with rose and chocolate was looking so delicious.. Maan wanted to take her right them he wanted to explore her fully play with her assets but more he see her more he found an urge to tease her and kiss her senseless this was a total new feeling he never had a proper kiss with any of his girfriends they just meant business and with her its different urges mixed with temptation having the cherry of her innocence and childlike purity.. She is like a deep ocean with which she actually hunt her preys.. And right now he was the one..
maan took her one finger in his hand nad very slowly licked her finger the pinky finger she was feeling jitters her breathing was getting heavy as his other hand went under her shirt techically his.. Caressing the soft flesh which was covering his child.. Still his thoughts considers the baby to be his only was much prominant.. Geet was new to this kind of treatment maan now took her forefinger licking it completely the choclate smuged face was looking too tempting but he pulled her petite form in his arms making her settle on his lap.. Maan looked into her eyes which were partially open as she was breathing heavily.. He soon left her fingers and wiped the chocalte with his finger licking his finger.. She was now looking at him with her doe shaped wide eyes..
geet: ye aap kya kar rahe ho...
maan : you wanted to work hai na..

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socho socho kya kaam...
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next parts pt 18 and 19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3655318?pn=86

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#480

awesome update and teaser...

Maan ne Geet ka dil tod diya...

dheere se and pyaar se bhi tou bol sakta tha na...

he very well knows that she is very innocent and timid...and more over he didn't disclose until now that how come he is father of her child...

now what Maan is planning...

is he going to marry her...

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