Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hi Richa...
Hope you are well
Congrats on the new story and Season 2 of Broken Dreams
Thank you for posting and for the pm
Part 1
Amazing update⦠greatly written
well Maan bought the mansion that belonged to Geet and her husband
now Maan hates Geet
so Geet still loves Maan
but he is no longer the same Maan she fell in love with
of cos Geet knows that Maan is back to punish her
Past well incorporated
they were so in love and happy
eager to know what happened?
was she helpless?
as expected Maan taunted Geet
how will she manage everything
Gosh Maan had an offer for Geet
alas she refused
not surprised with Maan's anger and comment
can understand that Geet does not want Maan to stoop low
she indeed knew what his offer is
Maan's frustration was justified
Maan is clearly determined to have Geet in his life even if by force
despite everything, he still loves Geet
Maan wants all information on Geet
he certainly does not want Geet to get any help
feeling for Geet
upset that both Maan and Geet are in pain and all alone
Maan believes that she betrayed him
however there is more to this than meets the eye
update soon
Thank you dear π
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