NEW SS:OPEN KISSES..last part 5 updated! pg 29

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 Holla!! people!!  i am happy to announce that i will be starting a new ts or may be ss...don't know it yet...though i have the prologue and a chapter ready already... 
About the ts ...the poetry of pablo Neruda : drunk as drunk on turpentine from your open kisses.  and a story i read once inspired me to write this... i hope you like it...will continue if you people want to read on further... so here's the prologue... 

happy reading- 

urja.  

                                          DRUNK AS DRUNK ON TURPENTINE 
                        FROM YOUR  OPEN KISSES


Neither of them knew how they fell into this.

 Just minutes earlier they were teasing each other when they got out of the car... making way for the door to the khan mansion'

And now they were kissing their way to glory against the wall next to their door...

Both fighting for dominance as they deepened the kiss...

Ravaging each other's mouth ...they lost track of time and kissed for god knows how long'not wanting to give up the feeling.

    He held her secure in his arms...  lifting her up to gain leverage and make up for zoya's shortness' Instantly her hands went into his hair and entangled her fingers with the soft hair on the back of his head...                                     

  "Someone might wake up" she said.                    

                             "Yes" he agreed, but continued whatever he was doing.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                "Asad ...bedroom!" zoya urged...                                       

 He picked her up and hoisted her on his shoulders and made a beeline to their bedroom... Placing her on the bed... He quickly went to her mouth and continued what they were doing...

     "You-make -me - go crazy-" he said as he placed open mouthed wet kisses on her jaw, going down towards her throat...he kissed her at the spot between her shoulder and the neck... She moaned with delirious pleasure...         

                                             "Mmm...moreee". She pleaded                           

                                "Patience, ma Cherie! " He whispered against her skin

And suddenly he flipped her on her front ... kissing her at the back,  slightly opening up the zip that held the top together...inch by inch...leaving hot trail of kisses down her spine...rendering her speechless as he progressed further down...                                                      

       Every kiss, every scratch of her nail onto his back marked their territory... They marked their skin with the profound love that they had shared. The proof left behind of the night they just had, making love to each other.                                                

          They lay there satiated ,while  basking in the post coital haze of love, snuggling closer to each other.. their ragged  breaths  now running at a normal pace and lulling Asad  into a sweet lullaby ...                        

"Drunk as drunk on turpentine from your open kisses " she whispered in his ears as she too drifted off in to a peaceful slumber.


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chapter 1 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87035457�

chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3651316?pn=13

chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3651316?pn=20�

chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87324580�

chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3651316?pn=29�

also here are the link to my other os's : 


 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86761065�

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3650250

and my another ss reminiscing mangalpur : 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3698914

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B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!! love it!! Make this an SS!!

so so hot!!

-Sharyn
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thank you 😃🤗
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Originally posted by: stellababes

B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!! love it!! Make this an SS!!


so so hot!!

-Sharyn


awww  thank you so much!!! will surely give it a thought ...everything depends on the way my wayward brain allows me 😳...

thank you for the B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!!  comment! will surely make it even more better then what it is now :) 

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Beautifully written. .add me in ur buddy list n pm me wen u vl updated
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Lovely.  👏  I do like a sultry Asya 😃
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Originally posted by: Xarina

Lovely.  👏  I do like a sultry Asya 😃


😃 glad that i presented you with that 😉
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Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Beautifully written. .add me in ur buddy list n pm me wen u vl updated


sure thing , i would definitely. glad you like it 😳