Hello guys!! my name is urja and here i am with my first os! hope you like it. would love your comments on it.. aahhh dont worry constructive criticism is more then welcome. hope you enjoy reading it!
she is my star
zoya pov
I see him from across the room. The tension on his face palpable as he reaches the bed's edge . He looks at the figure on the bed , that makes his brow cease to crease and he breathes out a sigh of relief . And gradually I see him smile. That very rare smile he has kept reserved for the very few... His special, one of a kind smile. That curve of his lips that can illuminate an entire nation without even a smidgen of effort. His dimples marking their territory on his cheeks...ohh how I love those dents on his cheek always Urging me to caress his face with my fingers and run them onto his dimples, to reach to the depth of it..I can go on describing his smile in million ways possible and even that won't be enough to prove of how precious his smile is to me. Coming to the present, though I did not see his eyes but I knew they would be full of love, filled with care and concern. His Concern for her.
He squats down and reaches to touch her face, to feel her milky white soft skin which now looks a bit paler, he gently takes a curled strand of hair that was visibly upsetting her and puts it behind her ear.
He looks at peace now, his inner demons at bay..erased from his mind for the time being as he sees the subject of his tension sleeping peacefully snuggled in the duvet on her right side with her left hand over the right one hanging in the air next to the beds edge.
He knows she is safe. Safe Back home. With him. And the happiness he feels is indescribable. His happiness holds promises probably in thousands and to love her for forever is one of them.
But what I don't understand is why is it that the very sight of him looking at her gets my heart fluttering? Why does my heart do that particular stunt I simply don't understand ! In spite of seeing similar kinds of scene play in front of her for so many times. How can a man look so beautiful? Is he an angel? If not..then why does he have that aura that surrounds him ? The dark yet mesmerizing aura beckoning her to take a dive right in. He has to be an angel. Ohh why am I even arguing, hasn't he proved he already is and a lovable one at that? Yes lovable! Funny I wouldn't have described him as lovable when we first met. Tch tch forget even that I wouldn't have ever looked at him twice the day his car banged right in to me making me lose my balance and flying across the mud covered road. Despicable! Yes that is the word I chose back then for him. But deep down In my subconscious mind I was aware of the effect he had on me..How my breath hitched when he came closer... And at that very moment she knew her life would never be the same.
Asad. pov
She is here. Here. At home. She is fine. Sleeping peacefully on the bed with her innocence and a cute pout. Wishing that his heart quits running in the pace of a marathon race . He finally breathes out a sigh of relief. And allows himself a smile. He hardly ever used to earlier before his angel came into his life. Ohh how she changed him he has no clue. He squats down and checks if she is fine. Checking , if any wounds that run too deep. Are there Any cuts or scratches? No he doesn't find any. Good. But he can see that the curly strand of her hair is distracting her from her peaceful slumber..And so without thinking much he tugs at the strand and puts it behind her ear. There. She looks fine now. No distractions, no sudden waking up due to the little imp of a hair strand.
He knows he is being watched. The figure leaning slightly on the door frame Watching all his movements intently. Getting up from his position he turns around to look at the figure.
Zoya.
He stands up turning around looking at me with his piercing gaze. The chocolate pools of his eyes make me want to drown in them never to rise up on the surface taking away all his pain away from him. I know he wants to know what happened with her. How do I tell him he does not need to worry? It was just a minor accident. And she is fine just with a minor bruise on her leg. Thank you allah miyaa! At least for the time being it wass covered with the duvet.
His gaze was getting even more difficult to ignore I told him' "Don't worry, she is fine. It was a minor accident. she was hit by a bike and fell on the pavement. Escaped with just a bruise on her leg, the doctor said she needs to give her leg a little bit of rest and she would be fine. She has taken her medicines too. "
Anger flashed in his eyes and something else too. Guilt. Ohh my god is he feeling guilty for not keeping his word for picking her up? And is he angry at the person riding the bike , will he go after him? I have to do something, fast..!
"Listen before you think of doing anything let me tell you, the person who was riding the bike wasn't at fault it was her mistake as she was distracted and banged into the bike unknowingly. She herself told me this. Also the person riding the bike...umm whatszisname ...oh yes Aryan ! Quite a handsome guy I must say and charming too. He dropped her here himself and also made sure she was fine before he left."
At these words I saw his anger mellowed down and he visibly relaxed unclenching his tight fists.
Asad.
As I look at the figure I saw that she was tired. Probably the day was a tad bit heavy on her but he needed the answers nonetheless. She saw me looking tensed and gazing at me knowing my patience level she started speaking about the accident. Minor? She said minor * phew* saved. But when she mentioned the wound he felt his insides go queasy, no! Yet again she calmed him with the doctor's words and telling him she would be fine in a couple of days. Ohhh thank you Allah miyaan! Wait he used her words again. Gosh!! This woman will be the end of me. He smiles mentally. But he was still angry. Angry at the guy ...hmmm Aryan it is. Yes he will find him and make him pay for his mistakes...but then surprise surprise! the guy turns out to be a good soul who helped her. Hmmm goodness still does exists , doesn't it? Well he can see one do - gooder right in front of him. Talking animatedly and calming him and his nerves.
He slowly unclenches his fists and nods slightly, indicating he understood, And beckons her to come into the room next to him. His eyes speak volumes. Speaking of the love he holds for her And gives her a tiny box wrapped in paper and ribbon...
" Here , take this and give it to her when she wakes up, and tell her I am sorry I wasn't there to save her from this mess". His voice pained and hurt evident in his voice.
He looks up into her eyes ... That very doe eyes of her's. She looks so beautiful so very serene as she silently takes the box from him... Almost untouchable ... As a tear rolls down her cheek ... She suppresses a sob... And was just about to move when he catches hold of her wrist and brings her close to him... Wiping her tears of.
"What happened ? Why are you crying ? Is something wrong?" He asks her.
"No" came the reply.
"then what is it ? ". concern latched onto his every word.
"I... I I can't see you like this, the pain in your eyes, it's not your fault you know stop blaming yourself. And she is fine..You cannot change whatever happened can you? So please, just let it go! ".
"But she is my responsibility, I should have been there". He replies exasperatedly
"she is my responsibility too, I should have also been there but I wasn't, was I? Do you want me to blame myself too for not being there? "
At this he realized that what she said was true. He smiled at her thinking how he can ever thank her enough... Every time there is a problem she finds a solution. She digs him out of his misery when he feels low. Holds that blazing torch of light in his dark and all black world and shows him the light. Spreading love and laughter on the dullest of the days .His personal star shining ever so brightly,... Making his insides melt with just a smile... Ohh how can he forget her dimples... they are surreal and my god extremely lethal for his heart and brain.
Blessed, he feels so blessed having her in this house...making it a home... He is blessed to have her ... All of her for him.
Her being his wife. Mrs. Zoya asad ahmed khan.
"I love you Mrs. Khan".
"I love you more Mr. Khan! ".
As she is about to peck him on his lips' They hear muffled sound of laughter.. Turning to look at the figure on the bed... They see she was awake and caught them being all mushy on each other...
Getting up slightly she says "ummm mum dad can you get a room please, someone's trying to sleep here" with that her laughter echoes around the room... Looking at her Asad tickles her and says. "So Miss. Ziya khan has become so old that she orders her parents around?
"Hmmm just you wait".
He tickles her more and she cries outta laughter..." No, no, no stop ! dad please , stop my sides hurt from laughing..hahahaha dad no..okay okay sorry, sorry sowiieee".
Asad stops tickling her and says " there that's my baby". And places a kiss on her forehead and puts her to sleep...
"Goodnight sweetheart".
"night dad, g'nite mum".
"Goodnight my baby".
They close the door of the room and make way for their room...together with asad's hand on her waist'
Zoya: Asad she has so much of your attributes.. I love her dimples... They are definitely from you!
Asad: nooo! They are like yours!
Zoya: nooo! They are like the ones you have! I said it first!
Asad: what's I said first got to do with that! Mad female!
Zoya: hawww. What did you just say?
Asad : okay okay am sorry you win, her dimples are like me.. But she has your laughter definitely...that tinkle of your laughter I can recognize it anywhere...
Zoya: is it ?
Asad: yes.
Zoya: well she has more of your genes for sure though...
Asad: well I am happy with that! I guess I should help you with getting a baby with more of your genes then..
Zoya: and how is tha...? *realizing* and turning crimson at the cheeks instantly. Ohhh my god! Mr. Khan! * And hides her face at the crook of his neck*.
Asad: (started laughing and then places a kiss on her forehead and mumbles in her ear) we will Mrs. Khan, we soon will have someone with more of your genes in our little world'I will make sure of that!
With that he kissed her with all his love'Surrendering to their need of being one . Falling on the bed in each other's arms and giving into a night laid out with pure passion.
The end.
hey guys here's the link to my second os! do check out :)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3650250/asya-os-my-anam-cara-soulmate
and a link to my ts : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86951063�
another ss reminiscing mangalpur : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3698914/ss-reminiscing-mangalpur-updated-ch5-pg29-23-09
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