VIRMAN FF:DEVIL HOUSE Discountinue - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
loved the update.
update soon.
and plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
awesome update
loved rishab and maanvi's part
plz cont soon
thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
nice update jannat...
so u started a new story again...
i really liked it...
i really wonder how des ideas pop into ur head...
really a vry nice start...
do continue soon n thanx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
nice update he feel jelous to see her with another guy
but no one that she married with him not even her bf
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
wow this is very interesting cnt wait for manvi to start her job soon now continue as quick as u can plz 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
wow awesome start jannat loved it. The bond between manvi nd rishabh was fab. Nd their convo was really funny to read. Feeling bad for manvi that she is suffering nd on the other hand virat is enjoying his life. Ahan jealous virat. Plz try to update soon this time really wanna read more. Thanx for the pm tc ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Thank you sooo much sweet girls who like and love this story and make comments
it really means alooot to me
thanks you for each and every comment




its has been A year while i join this forum
so thanks for making my joueney so beautiful...
thanks you so muccch and love you all from bottom of my heart




love Jannat ❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Sorry Appi for late, I was busy in adm procesure
update was awesome
virat jealous but why, he himself told her don't cross his path
looking forward
thank you so much for PM ❤️

PS: congratulation appi
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Hello sweet girlies….hope u all are fine…here next part.. Happy Reading

DEVIL HOUSE

CHAPTER-2

Virat glared at them, anger rose up with each passing second and his eyes was red with rage, nobody know what he capable to do.

It ain't that in his start feeling for her at the stop But the things which belong to him won't belong to others whether they like or not. And she is her Wife, he himself not accepts the fact but now he don't like that she let her touch t other.

The marriage was for his sake or them but now he can't see his legal led wife is touched by other.

She was his and only he has a right to touch her, no one else.

RK excuses from other and takes Manvi with him.

Manvi: So u is happy now, she is gone and surely angry with me.

RK: She can't, she is angry with me and babes that I want.

Manvi: but why you did it intentionally.

RK: You forget tomorrow is her b'day and I planned special things to her.

Manvi: I won't but question is same WHY??

RK: Manvi u had a brilliant in business but in other thing u r such a TUBE LIGHT.

Manvi: she pout her lips and says you called me tube light again, I'm not gonna talk to you (in fake angry tone)

RK:you are such a sweetheart manvi. U looks so cute when u pout like this. . . Someone gonna eat u as raw.

Her eyes is popped up, listening to his comment..

RK giggle and stopped when she again do same antic

And added, "She directly went to home and in her angry she forget her birthday and then i'll give my surprise, you know Manvi, she like surprise and give million dollar smile and I can die for that smile."

Manvi: She knows very well RK loves Madhu so much without any doubt.

Smile and giggled while looking at RK.

So what's ur plan.

RK: I arranged everything at farmhouse, after this party, I'm gonna kidnap my Wife and u don't wanna heard details What I Gonna Do With Her with a Smirk.

Manvi is totally red due to embarrassment, why she always asked wrong question to the wrong person.

Manvi: abruptly no I don't, she is looking everywhere not him.

RK laughed on seeing her like this.

Here Viren and Jeevika are talking with each other and try to talk with Virat but he is least interested in it.

Virat saw her giggle, red face, her pout, her every antics and he drank 2 or 3 shots on seeing them and his anger increasing with each passing second and now it is uncontrollable for him.

He gestured someone and he nodded.

Scene shift

A waiter came to RK & Manvi and offer drink, RK takes it but Manvi refuses and accidently drink fell on her Sari.

Waiter: Sorry Mam and startled when RK glared him, again say I'm..m so..sor..Sorry Mam.

Manvi: It okie

Waiter left from there as fast as he can.

Manvi excuses herself and went to washroom.

She cleaned her sari and came out.

When someone pulled her towards him and pinned her nearest wall, smashed his lip on her and kissed her fiercely or wildly, nibbled her lips

Manvi was shocked, shunned what was happened in just a few seconds, she is too shocked to react.

After a minute she feels his bite on her lip, she moans in pain and tears continuously came out from her eyes.

She gather all courage and try to pushed him but he was too strong for her when he saw her wriggle in his arm, his anger rose at peak.

Manvi tried to push him again and this time she succeeds in it and he stumbled 2 or 3 feet. He tighted his hand into fist.

Manvi: Who the hell are... ? She stopped when she knows who he was. Her heart beat increases, she heard her own heartbeat.

She was too shocked to react...stands there like a statue, she don't understand what to do. Her legs fixed at the spot and eyes are wide open.

She want to run from there but her legs betray with her and she stand like a statue.

After seven month he confronts with her again.

I know it was short but can't make longer than this

Hope it is okie

And hope I do justice with this story

Sorry for mistakes

Love jannat 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Enjoyed EVERY bit of it
Plzzz continue soon.
I'm loving your story :-P
Edited by rashi246 - 12 years ago

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