VIRMAN FF:DEVIL HOUSE Discountinue

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Posted: 12 years ago
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❤️ Hiii Sweet Girlies, u all thought I'm crazy and i says u all right.
Actually an idea popped in my mind so though to give it a shape. Hope I'm successful in it. ❤️


Devil House


I'm scared of Dark
I'm scared of Loud Sound
I'm scared of being Alone cause I'm alone 4rm very beginning and now
I'm Scared with the name of his, he came to in my Life,
And Now I'm Scared to Live My Life


People says, "Just because you're scared for life doesn't mean you should be scared to Live."
But it never applies in my life.

I thought, "Scary with you is better than Scary without you."


So how is it, tell me

Okie tell me clear you one thing I'll continue when I get proper response.

I only wrote my other two stories cause of my some friends and ofcourse for me also.

And won't send pm to anyone, I send it to whom who like or make comment on it get pm.
Plz don't mind if my words hurt anybody. I didn't say it intentionally.

This story is 4 u gals & for my buddies also and I mold story accordingly, what the response is... I don't complaint for other stories but If I didn't get response I won't continue it further.
Feel free while making comment, criticism also appreciated, tell me frankly.
If u like it than hit the like button and make comment :)

Love you all
Jannat ❤️



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Characters or Main Characters

Virat: A Rude, Arrogent, Handsome, Hot, Sexy DEVIL, He Get what he want by hook or crock.
Every girls want him but never get him as he is so rough.

Manvi: Sweet, Bubbly, Beautiful at the same time hot and sexy, her only family is her lovely Biji.

Viren: Handsome, Hot, sexy, jeevika's husband and Virat's brother.


Jeevika: Viren's wife, beautiful, attractive, sweet like she is in serial.

Nikhil: Virat PA and Virat trust him blindly

Character may added as the story proceed ❤️
Edited by jannat89 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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❤️
Prologue


In a temple a boy take vermillion & fill it in a girl partition and tied a magalsutra on his neck, both get shiver at the contact but shrug of their thoughts they proceed and take seven phere's around sacred fire and a boy take snaps for the proof and after that both signed a paper for officially marriage proof, other person left the place leaving 3 persons left.


Boy:- Don't take this marriage as a real one. This marriage i do only my Dada's wish.
Without looking at her once and if you think in future you may come and claim me as your husband than I swear, I'll make your life living HELL. You better got it Now.
And one more thing after a year I'll need you for your signature in Divorse Paper.
Is it clear to you, he said rudely

Girl: I need money thats why i agreed for this marriage and I didn't came and never show my face in this whole year and after signing that papers i'll go back far away from you, she says placidly.
Saying this she take her money from his PA and left him as soon as possible without looking back.

Boy:- Smirk then Laugh Virat get it what he wants by hook or crock.
It my lovely Dada Ji will cause of he play this Drama.
He wants my marriage, I do it as per my wish not his and nobody come to knows about it, i'll never happen or i won't let this happen.

And From now I can solely claim of my share of Industry, Property and Money.
A big laugh echo that place.


Edited by Jannat94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow jannat a new story I've fell in love with this new story jus with the prologue it sounds damn interesting- do continue plz wud love to read it im getting all excited about reading this so plz continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good CS and story and i love devils update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue
nice cgaracterbsketch
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice CS N Interesting Prologue..Waiting for the Update..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Appi cool prologue & cs
Update Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept.
nice cs.
plz continue soon.
do pm me.

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