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Tora...🤗 thanks..n dear you did it! Yes..yes..you did!!! The opening is extremely engaging...thrilling...n breathtaking!🤗👍🏼 just the way it shud b!! Infact the effect was far more intense..than the prologue had suggestd!👏
first of all i loved abhay's dialogues.! Especially the way he calls her thief! And the way he Calls her desparate...and then the way he said "dnt you dare.." n "the nerve of the girl" when pia slappd him , was completely amazing...the way u described was fantastic.. superb!!! ⭐️choice of words...Abhay's dialogue delevarance here was 2 2 good! I mean the timing were just apt!..and the formation of sentences..pia n especially abhay's were just mindblowing!!⭐️
i lovd the forest part n every line of the chap!! Abhay sitting infrnt fire,luking at pia..noticing her bruises..then pia aquising hm..saying sorry..takn by hs handsum built..each n every scene was beautiful!!! 👏 and oh..yes the part where aftr saving her pia tries to free herslf n abhay tells her nt to by holding her..was the topmost moment of ths update!!! Simply marvellous!
So luks like pia has lost her parents n hence has a painful past whereas abhay doesnt let it show much bt hs past isnt any bettr. He lovd sum grl namd ananya i guess n i think she lied to hm.
and chand..well again here i feel there's much mre to hs character than just being plain villain! I feel there are reasns for what he is nw! Mayb i am wrng bt he definitly has sum mre to tel us! His story dsnt end nly wth woman trafficking or murdering haseena! Am already feeling the mysteriousness of the tale n ya suspence ofcourse!! Want to see hw u take dis story forward as its totally new and deals wth far greater n serious issues.
Plus ya one mre thing..i forgot to mention..that is the faint glint of the comic element tht i noticd.its quite well and justly used wthout hampering the romence of the situation! Rather i wud say,it gave it an additional superiority! Yes..Becoz though every genre has its own difficulties bt still mixing humour or comedy wthin a story, yet keeping its essence romantic isnt a joke! Its the most difficult thng infact, yet u pulled it brilliantly.!! Awesum!!👏
and the thing i most lovd here was pia's bold character u know...! here she is in a total new avatar n am very very much intrigued by dis pia!!
just one question nw, are u going to make it a satire?
And tora amar ki din shesh hoye elo? Eto mathay charachs jey...😆😛 Joking! On a serious note-thanks very much dear...it means a lot! you are one of the sweetest person n friend..to have..thanx..🤗
p.s. Plz cntinue asap..nw! Cnt wait to see hw their journey shapes..and hw they tackle chand,who at the moment seems hell bent on capturing pia..
thanks a lot for the pm n update quick. 😊Edited by Bleak_House - 10 years ago
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