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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Eid mubarak...🤗

wahooo u give beautigul Eid gift...awsomeee & lovely song...they r in bed also...sooo lovely...I love Abhiya both feeling each other...u r amazing change my mind that people character which we see in our society like tabbo...I love ur creation...I'm look forward this story want more about their life😊


Thanks Kakoli. glad u like it. next Eid will get another gift as well. 😆 Thanks.. i like to experiment with the characters. its fun. glad u like it

Originally posted by: AbhiyaDewaani

Amazing update & beautifully written..Loved all abhiya scenes..
OH!!!felt bad for Pia..😔.


Thanks a lot Ishpa 😳 u might just feel terrible for Pia in future thn
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samwllms

not fare di! aapne updt kiya par pm nhi kiya...super updt...piya aur abhay ne milke dance kiya...kamse kam ab wo dono baat to kar rhe hai!


OOpss.. sorry if I missed. they will meet again soon.

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

this pia is a burning fireball, i like her the way she baffled at abhay... lovely update...


Thanks Trishna. yes both Abhay and Pia are very different here.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

amazing update
while reading abhiya scenes - its outstanding , I was smiling of pia sarcasm to abhay
love this pia which will give good medicine, if abhay behave wrong
poor pia in morning what she was thinking , but we know nothing happened b/w these people
waiting for nxt update
continue soon


Thanks so much. yes Pia is a very strong character here. you are right 😆 will update tonight.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

firstly belated eid mubarak tanzie.

amazing update
pia is way too hot here and i luv her sarcasm dipped replies to abhay. Both are way too charming...the party description was written too well.
really looking forward for the next update.\
this ff is way too interesting.
lvd it.


Thanks so much Megha. im really glad ur liking the story. yes she is smart and she is strong. she hate men in a way so she always makes fun of them.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

well written update tanzie ... its fabulous update 👍🏼
goshhh piya is beauty with brains ... poor for a living doing such a job
like the song ... wow abhiya on same bed 😉


Thanks a lot Beenish. glad u liked it and I love the song as well.

Originally posted by: _Jaan_

That was brilliant Tanzie as Usual😆 Pia hates her proffession but she's got no choice!

U always end ur ff's there haan! Can't wait to see what happens when Abhay wakes up😆


Thanks so much Sheena. next scene will be very funny 😆

Originally posted by: -Gauri-

Oh man, I am reading this FF for the first tym n I hv gone CRAZZY!!! Woah, amazing concept! Reminds me of some of the Twilight FFs on fanfiction.net! I loved the idea!! Pls pls pls PM me, I hv already hit the like button on the first page fr the PMs bt I am mentioning this incase u don't see my like! :p Cont sooon dear!



Thanks Gauri. ha this concept is pretty common and atleast this is what it will look like but the main story is revolving corporate world as a backdrop and thn its a lovestory. hope u like the story further. thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot everyone, the readers have decreased again. never mind 😆 I will update tonight. along with another poll and update schedule of all my ffs. since im really busy will give the schedule so that it becomes easier for everyone to follow 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wheee I am first I am first :D :P

Now then. Update was one hell of an entertainer. I do so love AbhIya's interactions here. Well written Tanzie :D
Good god, Abhay is persistent! I'm sure he'll be rewarded for it soon :P
As for Piya- I'm wondering if she's developing a real liking for him. From the way you wrote it felt as though she might...
Anyways, awesome update, I loved it, and I love Fire! Can we have more of her please ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

I am so sorry for unreserving late U know how busy I had been last few days. Tanzie its perfectly all right dear 😳 Take ur time. Update when u get the time. I understand how difficult it is to juggle between work and personal life 😭 Ur FFs are worth the wait 😃

Coming to the update, yes it was short 😛 but entertaining nonetheless 😃 I so loved the quote btw 🤣 True guys can't think much anyways 😛 You know how much I love dogs n thanks for having Fire in the story 🤗 Golden retrievers r my fav 😳 Even my friend's dog Scotch is a retriever n poor thing is so timid but ppl r terrified of it bcoz of its size 😆 But its such a beauty It was fun to see Pia being terrified of Fire 😆 I suppose Pia found it hard to overcome the shock that she had landed in somebody else's bed for the entire night when her job entailed her just to amuse her clients and go away from there. I am wondering as to why Abhay brought Pia to his parent's home 😕 And by the looks of it Pia wasn the first girl he brought. Abhay being the gentleman he was offered her breakfast but Pia didn't wish to break her protocol 😕 He also offered her money though unlike other clients he didn use her to satisfy his needs but he had taken her time. So it was only fair that her work hours didn go a waste.
I donno if I shd feel bad or get mad at Alina 🤔 But I do understand her situation. Reminded me of PC and Arbaaz in Fashion. She doesn exactly love Arnab as she in the relation only to reap the benefits but somewhere the woman in her is bound to feel humiliated when she realises she is nothing but a keep
I feel there's a lot unsaid between mother n son Donno y but I kinda have my doubts on Abhay's father. Am not saying he is bad but was he really the person he believed him to be? Abhay seems to despise Haseena but there could be more to the truth than what actually meets the eye or maybe its just me thinking too much 😛 Haseena mentioned Metz which means she was his first love and something has gone dreadfully wrong judging Abhay's reactions
Misha's restlessness was described very well 👏 She has been hearing abt Arnab's affairs but being a doting daughter she ignored them but for how long? 😕 She knows the pros n cons of being a part of the glamour industry n most of the times its just rumours but she also knows that deep down some part of it will always be true as its world of deceptions, lies and facades where everyone hides behind a mask either to shield themselves or cover up their misdoings. She is now doubting Kabir n I guess its only a matter of time before she realises that her bff is her dad's girlfriend
Whom was Pia sending the money to? I presume its her family 😕 I loved Abhiya's text chatting 😆 It was really cute. Loved the way he convinced her to come out with him. Pia agreed reluctantly though she ensured it was some sort of official meet up 😉 I am so eagerly waiting for next chapter 😃 The title is intriguing to say the least.
Loved the update as usual 👏 Dont stress urself. Write when u get the time. I am willing to wait 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome tanzie..
loved abhiya convo 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
abhay's displeasure was hilarious 😆

and wow they meet again, good good 😊

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