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Well at least Khushi didn't hate the first day...that's a start right?
Arnav is again, wonderful - great vocab knowledge!!!! Insecure though...is Khushi's relationship with her colleagues, like the guy from a family of poets and journalists going to cause trouble for him? Or is that just a casual response that any besotted boyfriend would have?
Garima is the quintessential mother wanting to make everything right by feeding her babies. ๐
Though you've gone only 5 chapters I feel like I know the characters pretty well, but there's much to learn, I'm guessing. Will Arnav's insecurity become a problem? Will Khushi forgoing her passion for her parent's wishes eventually come to a head? Or will she find some other avenue to write? Will Payash continue to indulge in cheesecake in the dead of night?
Interesting...my mind is full of possible directions you can take this story - that's a first for me.
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