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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Loved it. She threw things. So poweful. I would have loved to watch this on screen. Hats off! Gives relief to my burnt dreams of a stronger Khushi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
This is the Khushi we all knew and loved, not the submissive one who cried at the drop of a hat and took all kinds of rubbish from Arnav.

Loved this one shot. Brilliantly written.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Just read the first one shot.
You are right.
Khushi atleast deserved one good rant.
Thanks for writing this.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Read the second one.

Khushi did forgive him too easily.
There was no redemption track.
That was the CVs biggest mistake.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

I am loving these small doses of ranting and venting of what went wrong and what should or could have happened because they echo my own raving.

If not every occasion, on the night of their marriage or on the night when Anjali tries to harm her child and Arnav yells at Khushi, blames her for coming his life and spoiling his sister's life. End of the day she is a human and can take only so much of pushing up the wall by everybody around her so she had to react but alas she didn't. 

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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
wow thats a powerful one...love that
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
All the three OSs are so brilliantly written. The first one was so powerful, the dialogues and it left me teary-eyed. The second one emanated a hopelessness , excruciating sadness, sadistically so, but it was beautiful. And the last one, I loved the most I think because Khushi fought back. That is always a delight to read! :D Do PM me when you write more, if possible. Thanks! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Loved all three OS's ... 
made us get a glimpse on how Khushi could have reacted otherwise ... 
Loved this Khushi ... at least she voices her opinion ... 

Thanks ... 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Superb one shots, especially Jar of Hearts. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Beautiful loved it...