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Edited by -Delilah- - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Edited by -Delilah- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow,,, that was incredibly beautiful... a fabulous one shot, that has nailed it in few words๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...

Awesome OS...

Loved how Khushi spoke up and she didn't add ' Ji '...

Loved the end lines...

.Do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg
the first shot was superb
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nicely written! I am looking forward to reading more of this!

I absolutely loved the last few lines though! Loved it!


In fact I am gonna recommend this on my blog! :) Shall send you the link when I do! :)

~K
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved d last very much
fabulous os
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Posted: 10 years ago
If you call this rant, then you should rant on and on. ;) very well written. Absolutely loved. There was coldness and melancholia..
I had read your Dictation before this. You have superb way to tell a story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my thank you so much for this piece if only the Khushi in the actual show could utter those exact words that you so beautifully made her say here things would have been so much better! Man as much as I loved Arshi, this whole business of Arnav's treatment of Khushi had annoyed the crap out of me and the fact that she never really properly stood up for herself made me bang my head against the wall! So thank you for this! Khushi's rant was absolutely beautiful! Arnav's reaction unexpected but well thought of, he laughed because he didn't want to show how her words affected him! Take a bow Ma'am! ๐Ÿ‘ 
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow continue soon dear lT's AWesome