ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 2 [Completed]

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ExpectoPatronum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

read it in one go!!!
y am I so attracted to ur writings!!!

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Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

If sum1 would have told me dat i will b reading a thriller on Arshi ' i would have actually titled dem as insane'
and den after reading dis one i am totally a goner. Dis was just soo bloody brilliant!
D title is really gud!
And d way d story was started and den all d characters wer described just perfectly.
Also at one point around chapter 11 I actually believed dat arnav might b d punisher and later It was Shyam. I had chills wen i found out about Shyam & Anjali. Also d game was d best part in d story, wer dis all started and wer it finally came to an end.
Unique and a reallly different story!
Hats off to ur writing skills.

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tamara.O.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

You. Are. A. Genius.
Seriously how does one even come up with plots like these??
Enjoyed throughout the story... I am a sucker for happy endings but the closure of this story didnt leave me feeling empty...which means this was one hell of tale...
Thank you for coming up with something brilliant like this...

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

What an absolutely amazing story.

Each layer peeled back to reveal another one!

How did you manage to make us question the sanity and motive of each character?

I stopped thinking about A & K being together after the first couple of chapters. It was like it was irrelevant.

My mind is still trying to assimilate all that I've tried to comprehend.

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zainza

@zainza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Wow...I'm speechless!

This was mindblowing, I dont know how I missed reading this. I mean I have read Gravity and Lonely under the Sheets and you were brilliant in both, but this is just better than your best RockBarbie. I have to look at your works to see what else I have missed.

Can't praise your writing enough, you're brilliant! HATS OFF to you!!!

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mrin0709

@mrin0709

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

amazing.. one hell of a story...

cant say loved it.. i am so overwhelmed with it... its like my brain is in a daze.. btw.. i read the whole story in one sitting...

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zooni

@zooni.blue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

such a thrilling tale u have weaved.. a salute to you RB

You rock and your writing style is fabulous... couldnt let go of this story even for a minute.. read it all in one go!

off to reread now!

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ButterFly

@ButterFly77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

It's just unic...really mindblowing...
shukla=winner
khushi=looser
all r victims

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

That was mild blowing. Oh all my assumptions were trashed. You should take up writing as a profession.

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Wow this was one complex Labyrinth!!

Just say this, don't know who was what!!!

Just that, due to a Psychotic Tara,

Arnav, Khushi, Akash, Shyam and ACP Shukla, all had their lives destroyed,

and the woman continued to haunt them even after their deaths!!!

Scary and too complex, had guessed Shyam was Punisher, reading all at once, clears story easier,

but who was the mastermind, could not guess!!!

Still amazing job!!

😊

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