Ariya SS:Incomplete without You.(ch1,pg1)updated

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Ch1.

Location:ETF Hdqrters,Mumbai.
Time: 09:00am

All the team members assemble in the conference room.

Shree and Chotu watching a film in Shree's laptop.

Ayesha and Liza having a girl talk about recent issues.

Rathod,as usual,sipping his coffee and reading the morning newspaper,

and,

as usual,

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte,busy twirling his pen and lost in thinking about the recent happenings that happened in his Life.

Suddenly,the phone buzzes..

Shree gets up and answer the call.

Shree gets the biggest shock of life after what he heard from the other end.

The receiver fell from his hand,which made the others' look at him with questions...

Rathod(breaking the silence):Kya hua,Shree?

Shree didnt respond.He was in a state of shock.

Ayesha called him,but in vain.
Chotu also called him,but no response.

At last,Arjun got up from his chair and went up to Shree.He held Shree by his shoulders and shook him vigorously.

After the constant shaking,Shree responded.

Shree(still in shock,stammering and tears flowing from his eyes):Ss..i..rr... Rr..ii..ya k.k.ka b.bo.hh.ut bb..ba...ra acc..i..dd.ent h..ua.. hh..aa.ii... Sshh..imm..la k..k..e Mount Ana H..ossp.iital.. mm..eein hai,Life support mm..ein...

After hearing this,everybody gets the biggest shock of their lives.They couldnt believe that Riya had a big accident.Arjun was the one to get the biggest jhatka of his life...

Rathod(in a broken,shaken voice): We are all going to Shimla,by tonight's flight.Leave for your homes and pack your bags.Meet here at 6pm,sharp.Tab tak,main DIG sir se baat karta hu aur tickets ka intezaam karta hu.Dont worry.Humari Riya ko kuch nahi hoga.

Chotu and Shree lived in a single appartment and near to ETF,thats why,both of them left first.

Ayesha and Liza also followed them..

At last,Rathod and Arjun walked out of the office.

As Arjun was driving the car,Rathod,meanwhile had a talk with the DIG,telling him not to give any cases to ETF for 2 weeks,and,also,informed about Riya.DIG agreed to them.After finishing his talk with DIG,he called the travel agent and booked 6 emergency tickets for Shimla.

After a while,Arjun and Rathod reached their house.They parked the car quickly.After parking the car,they went inside their home and finished their works quickly.They took shower very quickly and had their quick lunch.After the lunch,Arjun cleaned the table and the dishes very quickly and went inside his room to pack clothes.

As he was packing his clothes,he took out a picture frame,which had a pic of Riya and Arjun,in a friendly hugging pose.

A lone tear drop fell from his eye on the picture.He quickly wiped his tears and saw the bracelet he wore on his right wrist,which was given by Riya.

He,gently placed a kiss on it and grazed his hand on it.As he was grazing the bracelet,he felt someone held his hand.He turned to see that an ever smiling Riya held his hand.Riya raised their entwined hands upto her level and placed a soft,wet kiss on it.

"Main aapka saath kabhi nahi chorungi,chahe jo bhi hojaaye."

Riya said these to him and vanished in thin air.

Arjun came out from his trance,when Rathod shook him.

Rathod: Jaldi karo.We dont have time,Arjun.Humein Shimla jaldi pohuchna hai.

Arjun just blankly nodded his head and packed his bags.

Both of them left their house,after locking the door.

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update zee amazing i always luv ariya wrk dey r my fav awww dey r frnds she giftd him a braclet so sweet der pic is wid him awww n wht she met wid an accident and on life support omg i hope she'll b f9 soon n hope arjun n etf team reach shimla soon bt hey wht riya's doing in shimla? Continue soon waitng :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice start Zebbie .
waiting to know what happened with her
I feel sad for Arjun
continue soon
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Within 4:30pm,everybody reached ETF with their bags.Ayesha,Chotu and Shree were continuously chanting the "Maha Mrittunjaya Jaap",while,Liza,was reading the Verses from the Holy Bible.

Seing them praying so much,Rathod and Arjun's eyes' welled up..

There was more time for them to leave for airport.
So,everyone gathered in the Living Area of ETF,infront of the Ganapati Mandir,which,Riya got made.
Ayesha steps inside the Mandir and lights the Diya and everybody folds their hand to pray for the Sunshine of their Life,Riya.

Yes...

Riya was the sunshine of ETF and of everybody's Life.

She was the one,who took the initiative to revive the old,strong friendship of Arjun and Rathod,which was off for some professional reasons. And,here are the results...

Riya's patience and prayers brought fruitful results.Rathod and Arjun are friends,again.
The same old chaddi buddies...

She was the one who made both Ayesha and Rathod realize about the feelings they developed for each other.Infact,after a month,Riya talked with both Ayesha and Rathod's parents' and got them engaged.

She was the one,who changed the Love-Hate relationship of Shree and Liza,into a beautiful and ever cherishing Love-Friendship relationship.

She was the one who helped Chotu find his 11:30 wali,Madhu.

And,last but not the least,

she was the one who melted down the ever rising anger of ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte,her best friend,and LOVE OF HER LIFE.

SHE WAS REALLY VERY SPECIAL FOR EVERYONE,INDEED.

After a while,DIG Coelho came and handed them the tickets for Shimla and also the hotel accomodation papers for them in Shimla...

DIG Coelho wished all of them,"All the best",and escorted them to the car.

After the final goodbyes,the six of them left for Chhatrapati Shivaji Domestic Airport.

After 25 minutes,all of them reached the airport.Policemen saluted all of them and they went inside.

They quickly got their boarding passes and tickets checked,and sat in the waiting area and waited for the announcement of flight.

After 10 mins,the announcement for the flight was done.They went towards the boarding gate and got their boarding passes checked.
They proceeded towards the aircraft and went inside the plane.The air hostess helped them to get their seats.

Shree-Chotu,Rathod-Arjun and Ayesha-Liza,sat in pairs on different chairs.

The air hostess helped them to keep their bags on the top.

After a while,they heard that the flight for Shimla is going to take off right now and the cabin crew requested them to tie their seat belts.

At last,after tying the seat belts,the flight for Shimla took off...


Location:Mount Ana Hospital,Shimla.
Time: 05:30pm.

Riya was lying on the bed of ICU,in a half lifeless state.Her petite body was connected to so many wires of many machines.Her soft hand had the needles of IV drips.
And a long,white pipe,connected to her nose and throat,giving her Life Support.

A lady,in her mid 70s,looked at the half lifeless form of Riya,her mooh boli grand daughter.

Riya used to call her Dadimaa when she used to stay in Aradhana Orphanage and Old Home.Riya was her favourite.

That lady,named.Mrs.Vandana Shergill,whose son and daughter-in-law left her here in this old age home and orphanage,to rot.

She really felt very sad and heartbroken.She was depressed.But,at that time,little Riya Mukherjee,started to call her Dadimaa and made Mrs.Shergill forget all her pains and sorrows.

As these memories flashed infront of Mrs.Shergill,a lone tear drop fell from her eye.
She remembered Riya's words,

"Dadima,aap kabhi bhi dukhi mat hona.Aapki Riyu jaldhi police officer banne wali hai.Phir aap aapki Riyu ke saath hi rahengi.Main aapko chhorke kabhi nahi jaungi,Dadimaa.I love you a lot."

mrs.Shergill was brought out of her trance when Dr.Malhotra placed his hand on her shoulder.

"Mrs.Shergill,Riya ki halat bohut bigarti jarahi hai.Humne usse life support mein rakha toh hai,par,lagta hai woh jeena nahi chahti hai.Mujhe maaf kijiyega,par,humein uska Life Support kholna hoga," Dr.Malhotra said to Mrs.Shergill,with a heavy heart.

"Nahi... Usse Life Support mein rakhiye.Usse jeena hoga.Mere liye,Sameer,Ayesha,Chotu,Shree,Liza aur khaas kar ke,Arjun keliye,kyunki,Riya Arjun se bohut pyaar karti hai.She will have to live for everyone.Hum sabko uski zarurat hai," Mrs.Shergill said to Dr.Malhotra,in a broken voice.

Dr.Malhotra nods his head in a YES and left from there,parying to Bhagwaan Shiva for a miracle which will cure Riya.

To Be Continued...

Precap: ETF in Shimla's Mount Ana Hospital.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start i hop riya thik hojae plz cont soon
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haye didu!!! app ne toh mujhe maar diya enna sohna update karke...
luv u n ur story
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Originally posted by: ...amanvirdi...

haye didu!!! app ne toh mujhe maar diya enna sohna update karke...
luv u n ur story


thanks...
Ek twist aaraha hai...
So wait and watch.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504


thanks...
Ek twist aaraha hai...
So wait and watch.




oh my godness !!! twist???...
riya ko marna maat bas plz nhi toh na mera kaam ho jayega...pm kardena remember se... 😊
Posted: 10 years ago
amazing start :) loved it
poor shree was so shocked after that phone call
oh no poor riya got into an accident :(
whole team went to see riya in shimla
awww arjun is wearing the bracelet given by riya
and arjun kissed it <3
how sweet choree, liza and aisha were praying for riya
glad that sam and arjun are friends again :) all thanks to riya for that :)
wow rathore and aisha are engaged :)
even riya changed shree and liza's relationship :) and even helped chotu :)
She indeed is so special for everyone in the time
finally they reached shimla
oh no doctors are removing riya's life support
dadimaa really loves riya a lot 
hope riya gets well soon
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...amanvirdi...




oh my godness !!! twist???...
riya ko marna maat bas plz nhi toh na mera kaam ho jayega...pm kardena remember se... 😊


riya ko mardia,toh,mujhe jootiya parengi.
Twist is going to be revealed in the upcoming chapters.
Riya wont die.
Arjun wnt let her die.