MG FF- is pyaar ko kya naam du./th#2added

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"PYAAR"-khne ko adhura sabd,
Pyaar ka phla akshar adhura hota hai,
Fir bi apne me kitna sampurn(pura) hota hai
Zindagi me aa jaye , to khushiyo se bar de,
Aur dur ho jaye to dard de jaye,

Isi tarah pyaar ki kashmaksh me fasse hai maan aur geet,
Jo chahake bi apne pyaar ko naam nhi de paye,
Aur jb diya
To halato ne un palo ko jine nhi diya,

Asi hi kahani hai maan aur geet ki,
Jinhe takdeer ne milaya,
Pyaar ki khubsurat dhor me banda
Pr fir,
Halato ne unhe ek dusre se juda kr diya,
Kya vishwaas ki dor itni kamjor thi,
Ki vo tufan ko sh na saki,
Jisne unki pyar ki neev ko bi hila diya,
Kya maan geet ki ankho mein apne liye pyaar ko bi na dekh saka,
Uske dard ko bi nhi smjh saka,
Kya koi sach,
Ya phir koi jhoot,
Jo halato ki wajah se kbhi kaha gya,
Jo ek sach sa bn gya

Ek rishte ko ase mod pe lake khada kr sakta hai,
Jha bs judai hai,
Ek dusre tk wapas puchne ka koi rasta na ho,
Kya taqdeer unhe fir se mila payengi,
Kya maan geet ke us sach ko samajh payenga,
Jis adhure sach ne unhe juda kr diya,
Kya wo pura sach jahir hone pe,
Unhe fir se mila payenga.
Aaj wo sath hai,
Pr wo judaai ka dard,
Un haseen bare palo ko kho dene ka dard,
Khi na kahi
Aaj bi zinda hai,
Un yaado me,
Jinme wo ek bi huye,
Khuda ne unke is rishte ko tohfe ye nwaja bi,
Pr taqdeer ne,
Ya kahe naseeb ne,
Us tohfe ko unse chin liya,
Kya wahi khushi,
Wo fir se apni zindagi me la payenge,
Is pyaar ko naam de payenge?
 

Hey friends ...

This story is not new...many of you already read it till last update of this story...(but it's not complete)

But I started again this FF with some changes'...

Restart isliye kr rhi hu...i think kuch kmiya rh gyi thi phle is story mein...past puri tarah show nhi ho pya...so I discontinue the story...

I hope you all supported me again''...

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part 2 on page 5

part 3 on page 9

part 4 on page 16

upcoming on page 19

part 5 on page 22

part 6 on page 28

part 7 on page 33

part 8 on page 41

part 9 on page 48

part 10 on page 55

part 11 on page 61

part 12 on page 69

part 13 on page 74

part 14 on page 80

part 15 on page 89

part 16 on page 91

part 17 on page 97

part 18 on page 103

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Part 1

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Geet : maan please ek baar meri baat toh suniye

Maan : kya sunu...tumne mujhe dokha kaise diya hai

Geet : maan I know I hurt you

Mujhe aapko sch btana chaiye tha

Pr maan

Maan : kaunsa sch geet

Sachai toh tumhari ab mere samne aa gyi hai

Tum khud jaana pasand karongi ye mein tumhe bahar tk chodke aayu

Geet : maan

.

Maan

Annie: aakhen kholiye bhabhi

Bhai ko hi bulana padenga

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He enters in room hurriedly and takes her into embrace...she snuggled close to him...

Geet : maan mujhe chodke mt jaiye

Maan: sshhh

Mein khi nhi jaa rha hu

Yhi hu tumhare pass

She opened her eyes and see towards him...

He caressed her face...

Maan : dekha mein yhi hu

Geet :hmm

Maan : tum aaram kro mein abhi aata hu

Geet : nhi

Mein yha room mein bore ho jaati hu

Mujhe aapke sath chalna hai

Maan : geet

Geet : kh diya na

Maan : ok

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He stands near window and sees towards sky...and lost in thoughts...

 Geet : maan phle aapko delhi jaana tha

Wo program cancel huya toh

Ab London jaana hai

That's not fair

Maan : mishty ye kaam aur koi handle kr pata toh mein jaroor ruk jaata

Tum smjh rhi ho na

Geet : hmm

Maan : geet jaise mein London se wapas aayunga

Sbse phle mein daadimaa se tumhare mom dad se baat krne ko kahunga

Geet : maan mujhe aapko kuch btana hai

Maan : misthy hmm bolo

His phone buzzed...

Maan : geet hum baad mein baat krte hai

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Daadi placed the hand on his shoulder...he turns and hugged daadi...

Daadi : bte sb thik ho jayenga

Dekhiye geet phle se kitni thik ho gyi hai

Maan : daadi sb meri wajh se huya hai

Daadi : nhi bte

Apne jaan buzkar thode na kuch kiya hai

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Geet : maan bs kriye

Mujhe nhi khana

Maan : geet tum apna bilkul dhyan nhi rakhti

Geet : jaise aap bhut rakhte ho apna

Maan : geet

Geet: maan

Maan : geet maine kaha na

Geet : maine bhi bs kh diya

Maan: tum itni ziddi kyun ho

Geet : aap itni ziddi kyun ho

.

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Annie : daadi tom & jerry show kitna mast chl rha hai na

Daadi : hmm

Annie : hume to TV ki jaroorat hi nhi hai

Live dekhne ko milta hai

Har din

Daadi maan bhai tom hai ya jerry

Maan : annie

Daadi : draiye mt unhe

Shi toh kh rhi hai

 

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
priyanka it's a great concept. i think first part was divided into two part. in one part maan was angry with geet and in second maneet are very happy. i am waiting for next dear
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thanks dear...
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Originally posted by: nishamna

priyanka it's a great concept. i think first part was divided into two part. in one part maan was angry with geet and in second maneet are very happy. i am waiting for next dear


yes dear,...maan angry scene related to past

thanks dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part...

waiting to read more..

pls cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
cool you started it again
at least this time i can start and comment on it
so what had happened
why was she so afraid
and where did he leave her
guess all shall be clear and soon huh
cheers for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

it was right to start it again

i was so confuse...

b/w nyc start

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Posted: 10 years ago
gr8 start..
cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear,,