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HEYY I AM SO SORRY FOR COMMENTING SO LATE
JUST READ BOTH THE CHAPTERS...
IT'S AWSOME
DO PM ME!!
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Oh MY gudness..wat an awesumt chapter to readLoved itHaaye Arjun ji in his hot n happening khadus avatarn i loved Shree Chotu 's side commentsayana : My god ..this gal stole d update for meloved her from d very first chapterLoved d dialog's u wrote for hern d last one:"Tumhein sudharne k liye"...LOLliked the research she did alreadywaiting for morecontinue soon TahiLoveTani
Originally posted by: sips_crazy
Suprise would be a understatement ...
I am shocked that u updated soo soon..pakka se phele hi likha hua hoga !!ππComing to the update Bombastic ...i can so imagine Elena when u described her...The killer reminds me of Yin and Yang wala psycho onaly a little more sinsiter ...π‘π‘..But i am actually wondering how will you build a story around the scarred ...and of cousre Arjun ji ko sudharna bhi toh hai ...I already love this one ...and much i do the others ...Brillant again LoveContinue sooner
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