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Posted: 10 years ago
shhyam ko 4.00 pm..

naina in canteen ..; ye daksh kaha haina bhi tak nahi aaya..looking at watch and walking here & there ..phone kar leti hoon ..she calls daksh..
from other side daksh syas ; hello

Naina ; daksh ..kaha parho tum ?Main canteen main tumhara wait kar rahi hu .
Daksh ; Lekin..
Naina ; lekin wakin kuch nahi ..jaldi aavona pls...b4daksh could react naian cuts off the call
Daksh  soching soching  pauhucha canteen naian ke paas ..naian table par betke wait kar rahi hain..

Naina ;hmm shows him watch and says ..u are late  ( looks at watch and acts as if calculating time)by 15 min10 se caur mujhe late aanewaale log pasand nahi ..πŸ˜†( smiles)😊

Daksh ; Sry ..LEKIN BAAT KYA HAIN YAHA KYU bulaya?

Naina ; kaha tho tha !   treat dene?

Daksh ;treat ??lekin kis liye?

Naina; kis liye matlab ?kaha tho tha arey aaj assignment ki marks mile hain ,clas main top kiya maine ..

Daksh ; with a broad smile πŸ˜ƒand happiness ;wow thats thts gr8 congrats

 Naina ; thanks aur pata hain aur chaturvedi sir tho itne impress hogayr itne impress hogayr hain ki ..stops for a while and says ..aur ye sab hua tumare help ki wajah se daksh 😊...nahi tho main tho itna darr gayi thi ki ..thank u so much and 
b4  he could react

naian ; aur main un main se nahi jo sirf thanks kehke chod de ..tho bolo kya trtae chahiye tumhe?

AUr ye daksh ko bolne ka mauka tho deπŸ˜† ..nahi mam khud chalu hain 
..
Naina ; hmm coffee? ya ice cream ya kuch aur ..ya ( stops looking at him) ..woh woh sry ..main bhi na hamrsha ki trah shuru hogayi ..tho bolo

Daksh ; iski koi jaroorat nahi ..

tho iss traah dakshu syaing no naina saying yes ..fianlly naina dakshu ko convince kar hi leti hain and daksh says kuch bhi chalega

Naina; sochlo ..ek baar choice meri haath main aajaye tho main jo khilavu woh khaana padega..πŸ˜‰

Daksh ; chalega..

so naina le jaa rahi hain dakhsu ko paani puri khilane ...πŸ˜›

pani puri waal ke paas khade hain
Naina ; tuhme(lil doubtful) ..panipuri tho pasand hain na..I mean😲

Daksh ; pani puri khila rahi ho   baad ai  ye mat kehna ki dakshu ne itna khaaliya ki paise kam padgaye and and main udhaar nai dene waaala ,treat tumhara hain ..sochlo..

Naina; smiles nad says soch liya, bhaiyya do late pani puri dena
..Daksh ; mere liye meetha aur inn ke liye 
Naina ;meetha aur theeka
tho dono start off ..naian gives up dakshi still on .
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Naina ; Tumse kuch poochnatha

Daksh ; signalling pani puri waala just one more ..;  kya??PP waala ne pani pauri diya dakshu uko mooh main rakh ke khha rha hain ..

Naina with a serious look says chintu .
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Daksh chokes off pani puri in his mouth listening to this ..he looks at naian whose looking at him very focused and lil serious πŸ˜²πŸ˜²

Daksh ( within himself) ..oh god kahi iss pata tho nhai chal gya ki main hi chintu hu ?😲😲

Contd..

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LUCKY  YEH  DIL  MAANGE  MORE  YAAR,  JALDI SE NEXT  EPI  DALO NA.HMMM


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Posted: 10 years ago
yea eagerly waiting for next parts...
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Originally posted by: aditya151

yea eagerly waiting for next parts...


are u reading ff adi ,tho kams ekam like tho daalo secret  member ho kya??πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: sitakshi

LUCKY  YEH  DIL  MAANGE  MORE  YAAR,  JALDI SE NEXT  EPI  DALO NA.HMMM




kal miljayega😊
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Contd..

Daksh ; with lil cho nazar ; chintu ? kaun chintu?/

Naina ; arey yahi tho pata karna hain ki chintu kaun hain?

Daksh heaves a sigh of relief ...; matlab isko nahi pata ki main hi chintu hu..thank god 😊..brings out his normal attitude and says ; ye chintu kaun hain😲 aur tum usse kyu dhoodna chahitho ho??😲

Naina ; actually ek lambi story hain iske peeche .πŸ˜•.(.looks at him and  says) .aur khaana hain pani puri ..daksh says no ...I am done.. naina pays the money and they leave from there .

.both r walking..

Daksh tum kuch kehrahi thi ..chintu ar kuch lambi stiory ..

Naina ; haan wohi ..she explains daksh the whole story ..about she saving ayi ..phir all that)

Daksh ; oh tho ye baat hain ..😊

naina ; haan mujhe tumhari madat chahiye usko dhoondne main ..I mean ye pata karna hain ki tumhare cls main koi hain jiska nick name chintu hain ..tho?

Daksh;  dhoond ne ki kya jaroorat jab usne kaha ki woh khud aayega tho..

Naina;(with lil gussa) haan ayega mera marne ke baad ,then saysalready ek hafta ho chuka hain lekin abhi tak ..I mean clg main main ek hi tho  hu naina bharadwaj ki naam se...kitna watq lgata hain ..lekin nahi,,  iss mahaan ka tho koi ata pata nahi ..stupid diot kaika.aur ..

Daksh ; bas ..bas ..itna bhura nahi hain i MEAN USNE TUMHE BOUQET DIYA AUR THANK YOU CARD BHI ..tho(pauses)  sweet lagata hain..( waiting for her reaction)

Naina ;haan ..(pauses for a while and says)sweet tho hain chintu .(daksh ki chehre pe chotu sa smile😊. and it becomes wider)πŸ˜ƒ when she says   naam bhi pyaara hain..😳

dakshu apne aap main khush ho raha hain just thenπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Naina  ; lekin mujh ko lagta hain uska screw thoda loose hain 🀣🀣..(giggles).actually  thoda nahi  poora loose hainπŸ˜†

Daksh ;

 screw loose ?? 😲aur main?😑😑😑 how dare she call me loose ..;(with gussa he says) kya kaha tumne screw loose  aur chintu??..arey tum usse jaanti kitni ho ..ki..

Naina ; relax relax ..tum itna react kyu kar rahe ho ??maine tumko thodina kaha..

Daksh realises situation and holds back tries to gain back his normal composure..tumhe aisa akyu lagta hain ki uss chintu ka??😑

Naina ; aur nahi tho kya?? ek taraf aunty se kehta hain ki main naina  ko leke aavunga .address batane se mana kiya surprise hain bolke aur na aunty ko bolne deta hain na mujhe lene aata hain .(.longingly she says)πŸ˜• tumhe pata hain kitna maan kar raha hain mere aunty ko dekh ne ka uncle se milne ka...lekin ye chintu tho .(lil disppointed).

Daksh ;  not liking that sound of disappointment in her tone with lil gulit ; says ; naaraz ho kya ?

Naina ; bhaut jyada 😑😑looks at daksh and says pata nahi khud ko samaajta kya hain ?(folding her fists).ek baar daksh, bas ek baar mujhe miljaaye,phir main uski aise haal karungi na ..

(aur phir khud ko bolti hain) naina shaant hojaa..tension mat le.. ( takes a deep breath and says)...ab ek hi raasta hain ,,usko dhoond nikalna hain..tho bolo karoge meri madat ??

Daksh ; thinks for a while nods his head saying yes ..

Naina ;wow .gr8!πŸ˜ƒ haan ..lekin tumhe free main kaam karne ki jaroorta nahi hain ..treat dungi main .πŸ˜†.hmm coffee treat chalega ??

daksh ; daudegaπŸ‘πŸΌ

naina ; tho ab teeno agents milke dhoondenge uss stiupid chintu  ko πŸ˜†..

daksh; 3? looks around ...lekin yah par tho ..

Naina ; woh riya ko n maine alreday laga diya kaam main ..tum seniors ko handle karo, hum dono juniors ki ..aur har shyam ko teeno agents milenge aur boss ko ...(points at her self)aani mujhe report dena hoga πŸ˜†..haan lekin ek baat yaad rakhna  (comes closer  to daksh and in small tone)ye undercover operation hain ..secretly dhoondna hoga ..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Daksh ; kyu??😲😲

Naina; offo CID nahi dekhte kya?🀣..agar chintu ko pata chaljyaega ki hmu usse dhoond rahe hain tho .woh alert hojayega iss liyeπŸ˜†

Daksh; ohhh.πŸ˜†

Naina ;  (hoding her shirt ka collar)smart na

Daksh ; hmm very smart

Naina ;  sab clear hain na koi confuison tho nahi ..

daksh says ; no ...lekin ek doubt

..naina says poocho

Daksh ;  usko dhoondna kaise hoga?? I mean tum kya jaante ho uske baare main?

Naina ;   dnt wry kal tak main kuch na kuch clue tho jaroor pakdungi ..aur kuch??

daksh ; hmm ...agar for eg .tumhe ...woh chintu ..

naina (snaps at him); chintu nahi..stupid, idiot  chintu boloπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

daksh;; haan haan wahi woh... stupid,(struggling lil..lol.khud ko gaali dena tough hain na)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ idiot chintu milgaya tho    kya karoge tum ?

naina ; main...main tho ..she looks at daksh and says ; bahut smart samajate ho na khud ko😑😑 ..tumhe kya laga?? tum mujhe milne nahi aavoge tho main zindagi bar tumhar wait karti rahungi ??😑😑.galat soch rahe the tum ...aakhir dhoond liya maine  tumhe .mr .chintu😑😑.tumhari galati ye hain ki tum ne naina bhardawaj ko unders estimate kiya ..points a finger and says..dubara aisi galati mat karna in warning style).samjhe..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Daksh ; haan samaj gaya ..

Naina ;  comes back to normal tone and says ;arey tum nahi ..uss chintu ...main tho bas rehearsal kar rahithi .🀣.lekin kya pata tab mujhe jyada gussa aaya tho ..kuch bhi hosakta hain uska..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.sighs and says..bechara chintu ...

Daksh ; bechara meπŸ˜•

..Naina ; kuch kaha tumne?..daksh says no ..

naina ;tho lagjaavo mission chintu par( winks at him)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Daksh (within himself) misson chintu ???🀣 he imagines a scene

Naina in police dress gun pakade uske baaju main riya as assistant  .dakshu dauding naina gun le ke .usko aim kar rahi hain saying  aaj thiiss chintu ko uda dungi main ..🀣🀣

Daksh comes back into this world with naina 's calling ; daksh ..hello kaha khogaye tum .πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.chalo ab mujhe class ke liye jaan hain tk cr bye ..

Daksh ;ok bye ..

 

after naina leaves dakshu thinks  mission chintu ??sounds like I am some terrorsit..kahi ye meri encounter na karde..🀣🀣

daksh brks out laughing .remembering their convo at dinner  and then realises every body in pzoo looking at him ..

  Ayi; kya baat hain chintu ..itna zor se has  kyu raha hain

daksh ;kuch nahi ayi ..woh clg ki kuch baat yaad aagayi 

Rohini ;;jara hame bhi tho batavo ki aisa kuansi baat hain ki tum ..

Daksh ; kuch nahi vahini bas aisi hi ..

khaana jaldi jaldi khatam  and leaves from there

IN his room  ;..

within him self ; hmm misson chintu...stupid idiot chintu..(smiles)😊😊...khud ko dhoondna hoga mujhe ..huh ..undercover operationπŸ˜†πŸ˜† ..agent number 3.πŸ˜†.remembering naina's words warnings ..he becomes smiley smiley πŸ˜³πŸ˜³ saying paagal hain (smiles within himself) ..taking her name ;

since he being the part of plan she would never know who chintu is ..

hmm... lets see kaise pakadti hain  miss naina bharadwaaj..iss chintu koπŸ˜‰...

Naina in her room thinking

Ab tum mujh se jyada din chup nahi sakthe chintu ..

screen half half ..dakshna ..and here ends do episodesπŸ˜‰

.Contd...


Edited by lucky.m - 10 years ago
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hey  lucky  superb yaar. The  way  u r  scripting  the  plot  am  sure  u  wud  make  up  a  good  writer,  do   keep this  side  of  ur  passion  alive  forever.Way  to  go  girl.πŸ‘
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Originally posted by: sitakshi

hey  lucky  superb yaar. The  way  u r  scripting  the  plot  am  sure  u  wud  make  up  a  good  writer,  do   keep this  side  of  ur  passion  alive  forever.Way  to  go  girl.πŸ‘


thank you thank you ...πŸ€—πŸ€—
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next part will update to nightπŸ˜‰