~ DakshNa FF~Pehla Pehla Pyaar ~

Posted: 10 years ago
Hello ..Dakshnan's๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

So Here comes clg series of DakshNa..  wait wait ..daksh and naina ??..hamare Dakshna woh bhi college main?..lol..aisa kabhi hosaktha hain ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..of course hosakta hain !๐Ÿ˜‰.FF main kyakuch nahi hosakta...socha ki AT par ek ek part post karna ,phir uska kahi peeche ghum hojaana its hard  for you and me to keep track ..so to avoid further confusion..I am gonna post all 20 parts right from beginning to till date ..yaha par ...aur aage ka bhi will post here .๐Ÿ˜Š.

So lets jump on ..


                                         


Back ground( Same as SSBN( Sapno Se Bhare Naina)..

Tho milye hamari hero se๐Ÿค—

                                                  Daksh patwardhan


A disciplined guy belonging to a Maharashtria middle class family ..jis ke liye apne family aur padayi hain duniya ,Little tough from outside but total swt hrt for those who know him..Known as very serious guy, man of few words who rarely smiles..college ki ladkiyan marjyaae mitjaaye uss par..usko koi farak nahi padta ๐Ÿ˜‰..that doesn't mean he hates love and all ..bas ab tak woh pari๐Ÿ˜ณ nahi aayi... jo who could make his hrt go dhak dhak ...โค๏ธ.

And then comes ...hamare hero ki dil ko dhadkaane๐Ÿ˜ณ

                                           Naina Bharadwaj

 Does she even need a intro ??..full of life ..chatter box but has been deprived of love from childhood .lost her father at early years ..grew up not knowing y her mother always keeps her away..moves on from Darjeeling to Mumbai for further education ... young, vibrant and positive character. She has her share of hopes and aspirations but at the same time is a reserved person and has a lot of anguish. It's a complex character. She puts up a brave face in front of the world but only a few people who are close to her are aware of her pain.

Destiny brings them together ..a simple college love story with it's own share of masti mazaq, love, pain , jealousy , hrt brks ..what not .??..so Lets Start off๐Ÿ˜Š


Edited by lucky.m - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago

                                                   Pehla Pehla Pyar

                                               Part -1

They were walking hand in hand twined..her head leaning on his shoulder and his head slightly tilted leaning on hers.

In his other hand he was holding their books..while she has her hand bag resting on her shoulder..

Taking a brk from long walk they settle down  on beach  lil way from disturbance...feeling the sound of waves and water touching their feet...

They look at each other..with lil smile๐Ÿ˜Š

No words..but still silence speaking with them..she squeezes his hand genlty and then. rests her head back on his shoulder..

Naina; I love u daksh...

Daksh

fEW DAYS BACK HE WAS READY TO GIVE AWAY HIS LIFE TO HEAR THOSE 3 WORDS FROM HER AND TODAY THEY BOTH ARE TOGETHER ...FOREVER..he WANTED TO BELIEVE THAT ITS TRUE..

Daksh;phir se kahona..

Naina; moving more closer ..and holding him tight; I love u daksh..

DAKSH ; phir se..

Naina lifts up her head looks at him..their eyes get locked.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.and then she again says those words which he was dying yo hear from her again & again..

Daksh ; tumhe pata nahi naina tumhare mooh se ye teen sahb sunne ke liye main kitna tadap gaya tha..mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki hum dono ab ek saath hain..I love u too naina...bahut payr krat hoon main tumse..I love u..๐Ÿ˜›

he drops a loving kiss on her fore head...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Naina; mujhe khud yakeen nahi hota ki...isse ek mahine pehle jab main mumbai aayi  thi tho kisi ko nahi jaanti thi..koi nahi tha meri zindagi..naa koi jaan pehchanwaala..na payr ..na koi parivaar..aur aaj..(looks at him )..sab kuch hain mere paas..sab kuch...tum mile mujhe aur sab kuch milgaya..

Daksh; hmm..Tho yaad hain woh din jab hum pehli baar milte hain

Naina; bilkul yaad hain .uss din ko kaise bhool sakti hoon ja meri mulaqat Mr KP se huyi ho...

Uss din clg main ...

flash back...

contd...

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                                                          part 2

xxx clg...

Naina bharadwaj

Naina; Oh god..clg  4 din late join kiya upar se first day late hogayi main...aur  ye first year ka cls kaha hai?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Running hurriedly in the corridor of clg...looking out for her class ..she bumps into guy and her books drop down on floor..

Naina (picking up her  books).I am sorry..maine dekha nahi...woh mujhe na firstyear ka cls nahi mil raha..(as he handovers  one of her book) thank u ..and then she lifts up her haed and looks at him as he says

HE;  its ok..

 looking Simple & handsome in white t shirt and Blue jeans ,holding books in one hand..specs making him look even more smarter..  Whats missing ??..yes a smile would make him..look๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š

comes back into the world...when he says

HE;  clg main nayi ho.??..first day?...

Naina; Haan ,.aaj hi join kiya...(pause).. If u dnt mind kya tum mujhe first year ka cls dikaha sakte ho...

He;ya sure..main bhi ussi taraf jaa raha hoon..

Naina

Oh...so he's a junior as well...cool..koi tho mila...

walking through the coridor along wit him

Naina

BTW main darjeeling se hu ..aur kal hi mumbai aayi..aur tum..??..no response!..aur acha hua tum milgaye warna maintho dhoondti hi rehjaati...

No response

.waise maine suna hain ki yaha ragging bahut hota hain..tumhe kuch pata hain iske baare main...

No response

Hello main tumse baat kar rahi hu..kab se boli jaa rahi hu..kuch to kaho...aur

HE; woh raha tumhara class...(pointing at a room few steps ahead of them)...

Naina; tum nahi chaloge ?..oh...(with lil grin)  junior hokar abhi se bunk maar rahe ho..kya baat hain !//abhi mujhe na thoda time lagega..first day hain na aur  ( stops her blah blah looking at his expression)...

HE; main junior nahi senior hu..

Naina

 .senior??.oops!..

Naina; oh..I am sorry  woh muhe laga ki ..Anyways I am naina ..naina bharadwaj...(strching out her hand)...AUR TUM?

HE: maine poocha kya tumhara naam aur Mera naam jaan ne se jyada imp hain tumhara cls main jaana..U are already late( looking at his watch ) by 20 min 10 seconds).

Naina

 10 seconds???..seconds bhi count kar raha hain..ye tho...

He; Wiase bhi mera naam se tumara kya lena dena..cls main javo...

He starts leaving from there...looking at hin;  how rude!ajeeb insaan hain naam hi tho poocha itna pose kyu de raha hain..

He truns back and says; ek aur baat..thoda kam baat karo sunnewaalo ki sehet ke liye acha ho tha hain

saying this he laeves..

He ;  uff KItna bak bak karti hain.ye ladki.๐Ÿ˜†.

Naina; grr๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก...akudu kaika..isko tho main dekhlungi...khadoos no 1..

                                            Beach

Daksh ; kya kaha tumne mujhe akudu aur khaodoos no 1...hmm..

Naian;woh tab tha!.

Daksh; aur ab??...(lil curious)

Naina; ; ab??..ab thoda teek hain..khadoos tho ho ..lekin usse kahi jyada sweet ho..pulss his cheek..; and smiles..as he rubs his cheek..saying

Daksh ; ouch naina.!...

Looking at her smile he pulls her cheek back..

Naina; kya daksh??..(rubbing her cheek)...

Daksh tu kam sweet ho kya?..iss liye..(smiles naughtily).

they share few smiles...

Daksh ; phir kya hua??...

Naina; phir ..Main cls main gayi aur phir sab se jaan pehchaan ..phir..riya aur nisha se dosti..wiase tumhe yaad hain jab tumhae clsmates mujhe rag karne waale the tho..

Daksh; ..haan agla din

contd..

Posted: 10 years ago
                                                                       part 3

HOSTEL

RIya and naina togehther in one room and nisha lil away from both of them..al dinner and sharing of BG info..

Naina; 4 din main bahut hua hogana...mujhe  na notes chaiye

Riya ; kuch jyada nahi hua..3 din tho introductions aur ragging main hi chale gaye

Nisha; acha kiya tumne late join kiya ..bach gayi tum...

Riya; nisha..tu bhi tho bach gayi.

Naina; kaise?

Nisha; woh actually senior cls main ek family friend tha...tho usne thoda handle kiya...

Naina; tho iska matlab ragging se bachne ke liye kisi senior ko jaan na jaroori hain,,,hmm

Nisha; tum kisi senior ko jaanti ho kya?

Before naina could answer...

Riya;agar seniors ko pata chal gayi ki nayi ladki ne join kiya tujhe chodenge nahi..naa pata chlae tho acha hain..

Nisha; ab tak tho pata chalgaya hoga...hamare cls main kuch aise log hain jo senoirski favour main kaam karte hain..

(with lil attitude).anyways ab main sone jaa rahi hu...goodnight girls..

After she laeves

Naina; Ye mujhe teek nahi lag rahi hain..

Riya; sahi kaha naina ..I ams ure yahi hain senior ki chamchi ..issi ne bataya hoga ..aur koi jaan tha nahi kisi senior ko...bahut jyada bhav deti hain..

Naina; dikhraha hain..

Riya;  chalo ab soaajte hain kal clg bhi tho jaana hain...

Naina; goodnight

Next day  clg main...

In the brk time...

3 friends...

Riya; iss taraf kyu?..waha par senior gropu hoga...naina hum iss taraf jaate hain..

Naina; itna daar mat yaar...main handle karlungi

Nisha; oh really!...itna confidence!

Naina; woh tho bcahpan se hi hain...smiles looking at riya..nisha faces banati hain...ignoring that they move on ..

aur pakad liya seniors ne...sab corridor main bete huye..

senior gropu main total 4 guys ..hain jo rag ki guru's hain..

No 1; Naam kya kaha.??.naina...aur darjeeling se...kyu darjeeling main koi dang ka college nahi hain kya?..๐Ÿ˜†

Naina; ..nahi hain sir..lekin kisi ne mujh se kaha ki ye clg bahut acha hain..iss liye

No2; kaun?

Naina; looking around ; dhoond rahi hu..

No1; kya?..

Naina...; milgaya ..woh...pointing at a guy standing far away from them

No 3; Kaun?

Naina; wahi green shirt

Everyone ; kaun daksh??...

Naina ; oh daksh...hmm(in mind)

Naina (nods her head innocently)

No 1  Kya tum daksh..patwardan..ko jaanti ho...kaise?

Naina; framing story in her mind; haan woh  patwardhan's aur hum family friends hain ..hamari family mumbai se darjeeling chale gaye..but still u know hamari families  touch main hain..tho daksh ne hi suggest kiya ki main yaha aajavu clg main...woh aur main saath saath...u know๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

No2; matlab tum daksh ki girl friend ho...

Naina; nahi nahi ..daksh ko aisa kehan bikul pasand nahi hum tho sirf dost hain sirf dost..

No 3; daksh aur ladki??..kahi match nahi ho raha hain..kya yakeen ki ye sach kehrahi hain..jhoot bhi bolsakti  hain..daksh ko bhulakar poochthe hain...

Naina; OMG ..ye kya hogaya main tho gayi agar usne sach batadiya tho...ye log mujhe chodenge nahi..pls bhagvan ji bachalo mujhe iss baar...just then something strikes in her mind

when the no4 is about to call daksh...

Naina; woh...main khud jaake baat karti hoona warna mujh pe gussa hojayega ki maine aap ko batadiya...kyunki woh nahi chahtha ki kisi ko pata chale..aap pocheng tho yahi kahg ki ..main usse kal corridor main thakragayi..aur phir usne mujhe class dikhaya.bas..usse jyada woh mujhe jaanta hi nahi...

No3; chal jaane de...ekhte hain kya hota hain...

Naina taking step towards daksh..thinking ; ye meri pol na kholde ..kya kahungi main iss khadoos se...

No1 ; arey jaane kyu diya usse..daksh ko yahi par bhulatena

No4; kyunki agar woh sach main daksh  ko jaanti hain tho..chod denge..nahi tho hame kuch karne ki jaroorat nahi,mr.daksh patwardhan hi band bajayega iss ladki ka...

sab log dekh rahe hain...

contd...

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                                                          part 4

Daksh kisi se baat kar raha hain..naina moving towards daksh...by th time naina reaches near daksh..woh baat khatam karke he gets down ...without paying attention to anyone..

Naina; ye tho chala gaya..(she turns back and she sees seniors who are lil away from her..without secong thoughts.she runs down...behind daksh.. acting as if calling him

Seniors; arey ye kaha bhag rahi hain...chalo...all follow her

Naina;.running behind daksh...daksh already seedhiyon utar gaya...naina getting down..steps...hurriedly  ; excuse me ..hello  daksh ...daksh patwardhan..

He turns back and looks at her  who is just about to get down last step ..she slips down and is about to fall down..daksh instantly lifts up his hands holds her in his arms and stops her  from falling..almost an hug..but not an complete hug...


๐Ÿ˜ณ

Both stay in hug for few min..naina trying to come out of shock of falling, daksh trying to recollect what happened..

Just then jo seniors peeche bhaag rahe stop at turn of stairs. ye scene dekh kar

Senior 1; yaar ..pakka.ye daksh ki GF hi hain..dekho kis tarah ek doosre ki bahon main...

Senior 2; haan yaar..ye daksh tho bada chupa rustum nikla..๐Ÿ˜†.

senior 3; rukhna yaar ..achi LS waali scene hain..

Jsut then she slowly comes out of hug..looks at him...their eyes get locked..hawa  se dono ke baal udd rahe hain..sab slowmotion main chal raha hain...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

aankhon ki gustakiyaan maaf ho.โ˜บ๏ธ..lol

Senior 4; hai kya scene hain ...

senior 2; abey saalo ab chalo bhi ..cls ka time ho raha hain ..confirm hogayana ki ye jhoot nahi keh rahi hain...chlo chalo..

evrybody go from there...

Next min..

Daksh  brks eye lock ; (just like in ssbn when they hold the book)and says; hamesha girna jaroori hain kya dekh kar nahi chal sakthi...! 

Naina; looks back and finds picture clear...

Daksh ; hello...tumse baat kar raha hu..naina turns to his side..aur tumhe mere naam kaise pata chala..?

Naina heaves asigh of relief ... looks at daksh and says; woh chodo..pehle thanks u so much..thanks a lot agar tum nahi hote tho...thanks ..mujhe pakadne ke liye aur bachne ke liye..aaj gar tum time pe nahi milte tho..

Daksh; bas  bas shuru hogayi bak bak...bahut hogaya.! (puases fr a while).dyan rakho aage se...he starts leaving from there..

Naina; thank u ..(shouts from behind)..he turns back an she waves hand saying bye..

Daksh ; ...(just lifts up hand) bye..leaves from there 

Naina; uff thank god aaj tho bach gayi..tho bolo khadoos daksh patwardahn ki jai..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.hmm naam tho acha hain...

Levaes from there...

Naina back to cls...prof nahi aaya..

As soon as she comes and settles down...riya aur nisha

Riya; naina aagayi tum ..jaldi jadli batavo kya hua hain..jyada tang kiya kya?

Naina; nahi yaar jyada kuch nahi...kuch details poocha bas..chod diya

Nisha; kya?..idnt believe this...ais kaise chod diya

Riya; lagta hain tmhe bahut dukh horaha hain ki naina ko jyada rag nahi kiya

Nisha; nahi aise baat nahi hain..main bas...kaise manage kiya tumne

Naina; maine kaha tha na ki main handle karlungi...bas...karliya...

just then prof comes aur discussion bandh..๐Ÿ˜›


contd...


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Canteen...

Daksh lunch kar raha hain...just then his freinds join him ..)includes batch of 4)..also.

Friends; hai daksh

Daksh; hai...aagaye tum log

.all of them they decide to pull his leg

nO1; kya baat hain daksh..akele lunch kha rahe ho ..jab teri woh aagayi hain tab bahi..

Daksh ; kya?..meri woh??...(question mark face)

No2; bas kar yaar ab hume pata chal gaya..aur acting karne ko koi jaroorat nahi..

No3; kya yaar pehle hi batadeta tho hum uss ko tang nahi karte na...

Daksh ; kya pata chalgaya hain?? aur kiski baat kar raha hain???

No1; chodna yaar ye aise nahi batanewaala hain...saara Love story uss se hi jaan na padega...

Daksh ( lil irritaed);  saaf saaf kaho ki baat kya hain...

No 4; hum darjeeling waali ki baat kar rahe hain...

Daksh .   darjeeling waali??..his mind starts racing. kaun?..naina bahradwaj...??

No1; dekha ab aaya na track pe...haan haan teri naina

daksh ;(WTH EXP) what rubbish?..meri naina?...tum logon ko ho kya gaya hain...

Just then naina makes an entry with her batch into canteen...

No2; lo aagyi woh...

sab log including daksh looks at their batch...naina looks at daksh..and waves hand looking at him with lil smile..daksh waves back for courtesy sake...

Naina after looking at batch around him becomes tensed...aur smile gayab..

Daksh notices this...

Daksh ka table;

No1; ek tarf usko hai bol raha hain ..aur doosre taraf aise behave kar raha hain ki tu usse jaanta hi nahi...

Daksh ; main nahi jaanta usse ..matlab jaanta hoon lekin..woh bas uss din main usse corridor main thakragaya .aur phir maine usse class dikhaya.bas..usse jyada  main usse jaanta hi nahi...

sab remembers naina's words...ki daksh aisa hi kahega..

No3; pata hain ki tu yahi kahega...

No4; acha! tho kal steps ke paas..hua woh kya tha..?

Daksh steps ke paas??...woh!!..oh god ,woh steps se neeche girnewaali thi..

No 3; aur  tune usse pakadliya...

Daksh ; exactly!..(looks at all of them for few min who are looking at him with doubtful faces)..kya hua?..aise kyu dekh rahe ho ..yahi sach hain...aur wiase bhi tum logon ko aisa kyu lag raha hain ki...

No4; hume sab pata hain..kyunki usse hame bataya ki tum dono..

daksh ; kya kaha usne ki hum dono kya?..(lil gussa )

No1; ki tum dono bahut...

.just then no4 stops him and says; tum dono sirf ache dost hain.

Daksh; aur kya kya kaha usne?.(lloking at naina with lil gusaa)..

No2; ki tum dono family freinds ho tere kehne par hi usne clg join kiya.,tum aur woh ..u know ..kitna close hain ye tho humne dekh hi liya...

Lookinh at daksh 's expression..one of the senior (no 5)in btach.(lil serious).;  daksh sach main agar tu usko nahi jaanta hain tho.bol .woh tho gayi...tu bas ek baar confirm karde ki

daksh still looking at naina..naina on her table sitiing tensed and nervours ..looking at them in between..

No4;agar usne hame ullu banae ki koshis ki tho...usko hum nahi chodenge aisa sabak sikhayenge ki ssare juniors...tu bas bata..kya tu sach main usko nahi jaanta...batana

No 3;..usne humse jhoot kaha kya...

no5 ; woh zindagi bar yaad rakhegi ki seniors se panga lena ka kya natiza hota hain..tu bol...mujhe tho lgata hain usne ullu bnaya inn sabko...

Looking at all of them...hearing all their words he was   wrd  but for her????  where did all his anger go??

no1; l(ooking at some one )jaake usko bhulakar laa...abhi uski bajayenge

as soon as person starts leaving ...daksh just stops him  and says

Daksh;  rukh iski koi zaroorat nahi

No1; kya nahi..sab saaf hojayega...tu jaa

Daksh; maine kaha na rukh.(lil serious)..

.looks at her  tensed face .usne jo kuch bhi kaha(looks at all of them)... and says ; sach hain...

No4; sab sach hain..?ki tu aur woh

Daksh ; haan haan sab sach hain.ok..aur hum sirf dost hain..ab main jaa raha hu.starts leaving  from there

..thinking

 Y is he scared ki these ppl would hurt her..but y l.knwing she lied to his freinds  y !y he wanted to protect her from all of them ..y  he wanted to shout at them to leave her alone...y??..y did he support her lie..y and y he wants to say...

He comes back and says; tum log ab usse pareshan  ya tung nahi karoge..aur kuch sawaal bhi nahi karoge ..aur kisi se kuch nahi kahoge..ok..

No2; tu tension matle...ab aur tang nahi karenge...

he laeves from there still thinking..over the questions running in his mind...

Naina

Whtas happening there?...y he is leaving and y did he come back ...what did he say?

no3; fianlly isse maan liya...

No1; dekh ab sach main inn dono ke beech kuch hain tho woh iske peeche peeche jayegi dekh...

just then

Naina

..I have to tell him the truth ...abhi issi waqt..b4 things get worse...

Naina; (to her batch) main aati hu  abhi...leaves from there...

No4; dekh dekh jaa rahi hain...

No1; maine kaha tha na...tho agar naina bharadwaj daksh ki "woh "hain tho hamari kya hain??

All of them; bhabhi...LOL..

Naina daksh ki peeche..

Naina; daksh ...daksh ek min...

Daksh turns back..she comes  ..looks at him..few min of silence..

CONTD...

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Posted: 10 years ago

                                              part 7

Naina; actually mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain...

Daksh; gussa)๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก..kya kehna hain..yahi ki tumne kitne safai se jhoot bola ki hum dono.(pauses)..ya phir ye ki tumne seniors ko kis tarah ullu banaya.(lil more gussa).tumne jhoot kehne se pehle ek min bhi nahi socha ki uske baad ke consequences kya honge?...

Naina listening to him like a kid jo teacher se daant khaa rahi hain

Daksh; agar maine sacahayi batadiya hota tum soch bhi nahi sakti ki tumhare kya haal hota?...tumhe kya lagta hain woh log tumhe chode dete?.unki baatein sunkar main dargaya tha ki kahi tumhe kuch...naina lifts up her face & looks at him. as stops for while realising what he was about to say...

Few min of silence again

Naina;  I am sorry daksh...mera intention kuch galat nahi tha..woh main tumhare alava aur kisi senior ko jaanti nahi thi na..tho uss din corridor main tum dikhe tho..bas tumhe dikhadiya..aur..phir ..I am really sorry...veru sry ki maine..(pauses)..to take abrk..

Naina; bina tumse kuch kahe tumhara naam le liya aur.tumhe is main involve kardiya (with a feeling of gulit)

.main abhi jaakr unse kehdungi ki  main ne jhoot kaha tha..kyunki main nahi chahithi ki meri jhoot ki wajah se tumhe koi problm ho...I am sry once again...

she's about to leave

Daksh ;kisi se kuch kehne ki koi jaroorat nahi...

Naina; lil question mark face); kyu?..

Daksh; woh maine unse kehdiya ki jo kuch bhi tumne kaha woh sach hain..

Naina; kya??...lekin kyu?

Daksh(looks at her for fe e seconds and thinks)

kyu??..Even I am trying to answer that question ..Y?...

after few seconds ...

 Daksh; kyunki main nahi chahta ki meri wajah se koi problm main phas jaaye..ya kisi ko taklif ho...iss liye maine..

Naina; how sweet!

Daksh ; kya?..kuch kaha tumne?

Naina nods her haed saying no...

daksh;lekin tum ye mat samajhna ki main tumhe support kar raha hu.ok...pehli baat mujhe jhoot se nafrat hain aur jhoot bholnewaalo se bhi

aur doosri baat..tum kisi se nahi kahoge ki tumne story banaya..hum dono ke baare main.nahi tho bada problm hojyega..ok..aur ye story kisi aur ko mat sunavo...samjhi

Naina ; ok...

Daksh good...aur dyan se suno jise tumhe kaha hum ost banege

Naina ; sach!

Daksh; nahi...sach main nahi hamare beech sirf jhootmoot freindship hoga..dikhave ke liye..woh bhi jab koi dekh raha ho aur sirf aise situations main jo hum avoid nahi karsakthe..ok.maximunm ye koshis karenge ki hum dono ek doosre ki saamne naa aaye...ok.

Naina (lil disappointed)..but hiding it up; ok..

Daksh;  looking at her face and sensing she wants to say some thing) tumhe kuch kehna hain?

Naina; nods her haed saying yes

Daksh; kaho!

Naina; thank u..meri madat karne ke liye..

Daksh ; thats ok..aur kuch??...

Naina nods her haec saying no...

Daksh ; aur kuch nahi...bas

and in next sec he thinks..

Damn ! did i sound like I want to continue the conversation)...

Naina; nahi...kuch nahi...

Daksh;  tho yaad hain na hamara deal 

 Naian haan..its  a deal and I promise ki meri wajahse tumhe koi problem nahi hogi..

Daksh ; ok phir  ..he starts leaving

Naina; bye bhi nahi kehta ye..

just then he turns back and says; bye...

Naina ..her face ltis up and waves back happliy and says ; bye...

both part their ways...after taking few steps forwrad..

Naina turns back and looks at him thinking ki; itna bhi khadoos nahi hain...aur bahut acha hain...cute khadoos...smiles and turns normally

phir daksh takes aturn looks at her..

Daksh;ab  tak samaj nahi aarha hain ki main isske liye ue sab kyu kar raha hu and thinks..and then turns back normally..

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Posted: 10 years ago

 Back to beach,...

Naina(lil surprised); tumne bhi..๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›.

Daksh;tumne bhi matlab?...tum peeche palat kar mujhe dekha??(really! exp)๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Naina nods her head yes excitedly and says; kyu dekha?..

Daksh looks at for few min...holds back the strands of her hair ...coming on to her face  tugs them back of her ear๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ  and says; na uss waqt ttumhare kyu? ka jawaab tha mere paas naa ab..bas itna jaanta hoon ki ..(hand on her cheek)...I love u...โค๏ธ

Few min of silence in midst of sound of waves as they both get lsot looking at each other...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณBreaking the silence

Daksh; tumne kyu dekha..palat kar..

Naina; jawaab hain mere paas...

Daksh; acha! tho batavo..

Naina; itni assani se tho nahi...

Daksh; cmon naina..pls batavona...naina thoda bahv khati hain..pls..(still naina showing lil attitude).. daksh ko thoda gussa aata hain; teek hain mat batavo..mujhe nahi jaan na hain..

Naina; agayana gussa.!!..hamesha nak par chada rehtha..pulls his nose...my cute KP...(Smiles looking at him)...Maine iss liye dekha kyunki...(daksh looking at her curisly)..kyunki tum mujhe ache lage..bahut ache..

Daksh ;hmm..tho iska mtalab tum mujh par fida hogayi..aur issliye itni jaldi promotion bhi dediya...

Naina looks at him with question mark face

Daksh; khadoos no1 se cute khadoos ka...

Both share few smiles...

Naina; uske baad hume kitne koshis ki ki ek doosre ke saamne naa aaye..lekim

Daksh'lekin..aisa hua nahi...kabhi clg main kabhi canteen kabhi lib ,main hamesha thakraate the...aur phir meri dost shuru hojaate the...

Naina; smiling; jab woh mujhe bhabhi bhabhi bulate the tho bahut mazza aata tha mujhe ..ek dum se royal treatment milne laga mujhe...

Daksh;(lots of attitude) royal treatment tho milega hi aakhir tum ...daksh patwardahn ki..."woh" jo ho..

Naina ;  pata hain .!

Daksh ; aur phir aayi freshers party!

Naina ; woh kaise bhooljayenge ,kitna special tha hamare liye...

Daksh ; Hmmm...special tho hain..kyunki uss din hum pehle baar jagada kiya..

Naina; hamara pehla dance

Daksh; pehli baar tumhe drop kiya apne bike par...

Naina; aur kitna haq jataya tha tumne uss din mujhe par..jaise ki main tumhari sach much ki ...(pauses_

Daksh ; rukh kyu gayi ..kaho meri kya?...

Naina blushes a lil and hits him playfully...

Daksh; pata hain naina ..shayad anjaane main hi sahi main uss waqt se hi tumhe apna maan ne lag gaya tha..iss liye..aur ab tho ..holds her hand lovingly...drops a kiss on her hand and says tum sirf meri ho...sirf meri

Naina; tumhari thi ,hu, hamesha rahungi...its a promise..(drops a kiss on his hand)...and says..uss din bhi tumne aise hikuch kaha  meri haath pakad kar ki

Daksh ; ki "ye meri hain"..

Naina; woh line meri sabse fav hain..

Daksh acha!.aur yaad hain kab kaha ye line...

Naina; yaad hain baba...

Flash back...

Freshers party...

Cntd...

Posted: 10 years ago

Cntd...

At freshers party...Venue par..all seniors busy with arrangements...dakshu bhi ..in full sleeve Light coloured  shirt on black pants with two buttons open..lol...freshers bhi aane lag gaye...all of them busy in their khaatir daari..

Sniors batch..(within themselves)..

 saare arrangements chk kiyana tum logon ne..sab teek hain na..

 haan sab teek hain..ab hum party shuru karsakthe hain..

Daksh ; tu jaake ek baar dinner aarangemts dekhle aur phir tu music chk karle..

sushant;; Lagta hain saare juniors bhi aagaye...shuru karte hain..

Looking around ...hall filled with juniors looking cloluful but  he'sleast bothered about them His eyes starts searching for her ..but she's missing from picture...

Daksh

Looking at riya and nisha...her freinds are also in..where  is she?...

convo b/w riya & nisha...

Riya;abhi naina ka phone aaya woh almost pahuch gayi...aur...

.Nisha; .daksh patwardhan hamare taraf hi dekh raha hain.kitna smart dikh raha hain..aur handsome bhi.

Riya.aur sabse acha hain...

Nisha; uff aur kitna hot!...aaj tho main uske saath dance karke hi rahungi..

Riya; tere sochne se kya hota hain..maine suna usne aaj tak clg main kisi ladki ke saath dance nahi kiya..oh god woh hamare taraf hi aaarha hain.

Nisha; of course mere liye hoga...

Riya;  really!...oh,..aagaya aagaya...

Daksh ; hai..tho enjoying the party.??.

Riya nods her haed and nisha; yes very much...

Daksh ; hmmm..woh tumahri friend...naina..woh dikhayi nahi de rahi hain...kaha hain woh.??

Riya; Naina?...bas aati hi hogi..abhi phone kiya usne kaha woh pahuch gayi hogi..

Daksh ; oh...ok...

Nisha trying out to spk something but ignoring her he leaves from there...

Riya; woh terliye nahi , naina ke liye aaya hain yaha..Nisha ka chehra utar gaya..

sushant; stopping daksh who 's going out; tu kaha jaa raha hain party chod kar..ohh bahabhi ko lene jaa raha hain..nahi aayi ab tak?

Daksh; tu pehle bhabhi bulana bandh kar.(lil chor nazar) aur  main bas ye dekhne jaa raha hu ki koi junior bhar na rehjaaye..ok..

sushant;.ok.ok...tu gussa mat kar .jaa..

Outside the venue...

sa log ander party main hain...daksh comes out side  chkd sround ..no one.

Daksh ; us ki friennd ne kaha pauhuch gayi hogi..

..he starts going inside...he turns back listening to  her voice

Naina; (to auto waala); kya bhayyaji..nahi isse jayada nahi ..nahi...nahi..just then her mobile rings...auto waala leaves...

Daksh ; lo aagayi mam(he says to himself)...

In phone Naina; haan baba aagyi main..pata hain paty shuru hogaya..aarahi hu..

Standing lil away.from her..Once she turns towrads him ...he's dumbstruck .looking at her in tht gold colour saree..loose hair flying onto her   hiding her beautiful face and once she tugs it back...looking at her face...he ' just lost...n lost

and next moment..he comes into sense listening his name from her mouth ; kya daksh ne mere baare main poocha..just then naina notices daksh

Hurriedly...tu phone rakh main baad main baat karti hoon...looks at him..

Daksh comes back to his senses and thoda gussa waala chehra banakar..as she is few steps away from him..he shows his watch..Signalling her u are late and asking her to make it fast...

Naina.; ghadi ko hatakar se waha par khade rehna chaiye.

..starts walking fast.almost near him..lekin saree ki aadt jo nahi hain hamari mam ko..pher pisal kar...she falls on him suddenly and both fall onto ground...

Neeche dakshu..upar naina...she lifts up her face from his hrt and looks at him..

aur kya ..

eye lock...dakshna hug BG score

.slow motion ...focus on both pairs of eyes,..phir dakshna ki chehre par... lost looking at each otherthis time Naina brks the eye lock...and gets up from him..hamara hero still lil lost..but manages to get up...

Naina; woh I am sorry ..saree hain na tho..

Daksh; .lagta hain sach main tumhe girne aadat hain wiase... tum teek ho na...

Naina nods her head saying  yes and in next moment her eyes fall on her lipstick mark o his whie shirt excatly hrt par..and then her eyes become wide...

Naina; oh god ..ye kya hogaya...

Daksh ; kya?...follows her eyes and looks at mark  and then..

Fighting mode on

Daksh ; ye kya kiya tumne?...trying to rub it off...

Naina; maine kya kiya..jab girgayi tab laga gaya hoga...

Daksh ; dekh nahi girsakthi kya?

Naina; dekh kar koi girta hain kya?...

Daksh ; ek kaam bhi teekse nahi karskthi..sab tumharii wajahse...ab ek aur problem aayaga...

Naina; meri wajahse ??...tum tho aaise baat kar rahe ho jaise main jaanbhoochke giri tumpar..

Daksh; .iss liye dhoond kar ussi jagah girti ho jaha main hu..

Naina; mujhe koi shuk nahi hain tum par girne ki..

Daksh ; aur mujhe bhi koi shuak nahi hamesha tumne pakadne ka...aur tum ladkiyon aur kaam nahi hain kya?..itna lipstick lagane ki kya jaroorta hain...

Naina; aue tume white shirt kyu pehna...kuch dark nahi pehensakthe...

 daksh ;aur ye ja kyu nahi raha hain(trying hard to rub it off)

Naina; itni aasani se nahi jaayega...

Daksh ab tum chup raho aur mera temper mat badavo..

Naina; kyu itna tesnion le rahe ho..mark hi tho hain..

Daksh ; (imitates her )..mark hi tho hain..

jab main bahar aaya tha tho ye mark nahi tha.ab ye mark hain aur uske saath tum ..tho ..ab log yahi smajhengana ki...hum dono yaha par(pauses)..aur mere dost.! (walking here & there)..hey bhagavan.aaj tho main gaya...pehli se hi itna pareshan kar rakha hain ..aur ab..

Naina; dekho chikne chillane ne kuch nahi hoga..shant ho javo.socho ko isko kaise mitana hain..aur koi doosra shirt nahi hain kya?...

Daksh ; nahi hain...(takes a deep brteath).tumhe kya lagta main kyu laavu do do shirts ..mujhe kya sapna aayega..ki tum..

Naina; I am sry daksh...(lil mooh pulakar)

Looks at her faceand all his gussa melts away instantly...;.ok fine...mark hi tho hain chala jayega isme tension lene waali kya baat hain..main hi kuch karta hoon...already party shru hogaya..chalo...

They both start going in...

Daksh ; waise sarree main kaafi cute. lag rahi ho..

Naina; her facelits up)..sach!..nayi saree hain !achi hain na..aur phir mere bangles bhi nayehain dekho..(shows her both hands aur phir..mere ear rings..aur

Daksh; shuru hogayi bak bak...

Naina; kya kuch kaha tumne??...

Daksh nahi ..kuch nahi..

Phir naina goes on and on...daksh just smiles looking at her listening to her...finaly ander aaagye..

Frshers ka ramp walk chalu hain...

Daksh ; tum javo main.isko saaf karke aata hoon..

Naina; main kuch madat karu?..

Daksh ; nahi already bahut kiyana(points at mark)...ab javo..

naina nods her head  gayi ander aur daksh bahg gaya wash room main

 


Contd...

Posted: 10 years ago

Contd...

Back to beach...

Naina; kitan wqat lagadiya tumne WR se aane main...

daksh laughs out ...

Naina; kyu has rahe ho..??

Daksh; woh uss din wash room main mera circus yaad aagaya..lol..

now  we show dakshu jo poora wash room ko upar neeche kar raha hain.too remove lip stick mark .aur finally haar gaya...lol

Naina; tho woh daag ...stops as he says shhh with a finger on her lips..

Daksh ; daag nahi...pyar ka nishaan kaho...

few min of silence ..eye lock...

Naina; lekin uss waqt tho...

Daksh; baad main ehsaas hua...

Naina; kya?

Daksh ; ki nishaan shirt par nahi seedha dil pe lag gaya hain...

Naina blushes a lil...and then ; uss shirt ka kya hua.aur pyar ka nishaan gaya?

Daksh ; pyar ka nishaan koi mita tha hain kya??..aur shirt ko bahut sambhal ke rakha maine tho..itne khoobsurat yaad jo hain aur pata hain jab ayi laundry ke liye pooch rahithi tho ..laughs and says maine shirt ko jaldi jaldi chupa diya...

Both share few smiles...

Naina; mujhe woh shirt dekhna hain daksh...

Daksh; gahr aajvo ..dikhatha hu..

Naina; mujhe woh shirt chahiye...

Daksh; hmm..shaadi karlo mujhse..sirf shirt nahi hsirt ka owner bhi miljayega...kyu?..

Naina; very smart...ye koi offer hain kya

Daksh; life time ka offer hain sochlo...

Naina;kaafi acha idea hain  Mr.patwardahn GF ko propose karne ka..shaad ke liye ..bhaut hatke hain

Daksh ; tho kya khayal hain mam ka

Naina; lil aatitude ;  dekhungo sochungi kal pahrso kuch kahungi...

Daksh; main intezaar karunga..zindagi bhar..

Naina melts instantly and says; oh daksh I love u..aur iss kahdoos ko jhelna sirf meri bas ki baat hain tho..aur mujhe shirt hi nahi shirt ka owner bhi chahiye...

Daksh (happy)..tho shaadi kar rahi hona mujhse..

Naina nods her haed happliy and  they share  a hug.

Naina; tho phir kya hua?...

Daksh; samaj main aagya ki kuch nishaan kabhi mit the nahi ..iss liye give up kardiya..aur jab ander aaya tho ..mam ka ramp walk bhi khatam hogaya aur mam jeet bhi gayi...

Naina; tumne dekha.!!

Daksh;of course dekha!..kitna smil smile kar rahithi ..sab ko wavekarahithi..

Naina; pata hain maine tuhme dhoondh ra hi thi..aur tum mile nahi

Daksh ; pata hain..kyuni main tumhe hi dekh raha taha lekin chup ke ..aur ye bhi pata chal gaya ki tum mujhe dhhond rahithi..

Naina; tho saamne kyu nahi aaya?

Daksh ; hmmm shayad mujhe acha lag raha tha ki tum mujhe miss kar rahi ho...iss liye socha..thoda aur dhoond ne dete hain..

Naina; maz aaraha tha tumhe...

Daksh nods his haed aur naina do lagati hain usse..

daksh l waise thoda sa atitude bhi dikhaya na ramp par...

Naina; hmm freshers queen jo hu..

Daksh sirf freshers queen??

Naina ; nahi ..tumhare dil ki queen bhi tho main hi hu...

Daksh tho ye bandha apne queen ke liye kya karsktah hain..

Naina; bahut kuch ..lekin pehle aage ki kahani sunavo..

Daksh ; jaise aapki humkum meri dil ki rani.

Few more smiles...and then daksh suna raha hain pyar ki ye ek kahani...


contd...

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