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Next day morning...

Daksh on his way to library...

 Actually this is the time he prefers to visit library ,after the college..it would be calm & quiet ,free ...esp silent..

Inside library...Daksh looking for some book...he tries ti take out book from rack lekin  rack ke uss taraf se kisine book ko pakada hain...dono thoda time  book ko kheechte hain ...

Finally daksh wins aur book uske haath main aata hain aur other side kaun hain ??

aur kaun uski heroine Naina..

Both look at each other...

Dakshu ka face lits up..looking at herπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Lot of things to say( he himself not knowing what) come out in daksh mind as soon as he looks at her (kyunki subha se mam dikhi nahi hamare hero ko tho)..but only after ek  chotu sa smile..😊

but finally he says...

Daksh ; hi Naina (with a broad smile).πŸ˜ƒ.aur riya ko dekh kar bhi says a normal hi not as excited as naina ko kahaπŸ˜†

Naina ; hi( very normally) and gives back a casual smile..

Daksh feels lil odd bcos she's not in usual spirits whats wrong??

Daksh; tumhe ye kitaab chahiye??(showing out book)

Naina; woh kaunsa kitaab hain..??

Daksh;...(in lil surprised tone)😲😲 matlab bina kitaab ke naam jaane tum??

Naina; woh actually main ek kitaab dhoond rahi thi yahi par rakha tha(looking into racks) ...

Daksh ; kaunsa??...bTW ye kitaab he reads out book name & author..

Naina; nahi ye waala nahi..

Daksh; mujhe batavo kaunsa book ..main madat kardeta hoon..

Riya bahut excitely starts saying out name but naina stops her and says; thanks par main dhoodlungi and riya ko lekar waha se doosre rack par chali jaati hain..

Daksh looks at them for few min and gets back to his book search .goes into other rack..happens to listen the convo

Riya; arey daksh ko madat karne deti na...woh hamesha lib main rehtah tho usse jaroor pata hoga..aur

Naina; .agar main uski madat letii ya phir kuch doubts poochna bhi chahithi usko yahi lagega ki main iss bahane usse baat karne ki koshis kar rahi hu.uska peecha kar rahi hu.,uski karreb aane ki koshish kar rahi hu .aur hamesha ki tarah cls lega mera...iss tension ki haalt main naa baba baa mujhse nahi hoga..ab chalo dhoondo..

Daksh ; (withn himself)is she hurt.πŸ˜•.was he that rude to her that day...he feels lil bad.

after few min book dhoondte huye

Daksh comes on to rack sme rack jaha par naina khadi hain but on oppsotie side..happens to listen the convo...

Riya; Ache se yaad karna

Naina; yaar maine wahi par rakha tha woh book...lekin ab pata nahi kaha gayb hogayi ..looking at books in rack...

Riys; ab kya kare?..agar 3 din main woh assignment submit nahi kiya tho woh..prof tho

Naina; haan haan pata hain woh jaadhu prof mera jaan le lega..kya kare ab??

Riya; ab tuhhe bhi wahi elective mila lene..phas gayi na..kal hi le leti book

Naina; offo Kal  lib tickets nahi the mere paas iss liye tho ...aur iss liye koi aur na leke jaaye doosre section main chupaya..lekin( sigh in voice)...thak gayi hoon main..

Daksh doesn't understand y he;s not liking that sigh in her voice and that wrd look on her face...but she is not letting him help..damn

usko uska book mila he goes and settles down...aur beech main he keeps looking at them ..still searching..for book

After some time Naina and riya leave out of library..Daksh apne padayii main khoye huye misses out them  jab uske saamne se jaa rahe hain later when he looks for them they are gone...Daksh looks out for them nad sees them talking with liabrarian at entrance ..😊.Daksh GOES BEHIND THEM BUT MISSES OUT...in  fraction of second..πŸ˜•

Daksh to Librarian; Woh jo ladkiyan yaha se abhi abhi gayi hain.  woh kya pooch rahethe

Lib woh kis book ke  baare main pooch rahethe,he says out the name and then

Daksh goes back into library..after few min he comes out of lib searching for naina..

lekin mili nahi...

Daksh ;kaha dhoondu usse..hostel chali gayi tho...looks here and there...lekin no luck..

Daksh looking at book in his hand; kal tak wait karna padega ye book dene ke liye..he even dnt have her number to call...(remembers the moments jab usne number poocha and how he reacted)...

Lil sad he goes back into library ...settles down ..lekin his thoughts around naina & book...he shuts down book realising.. he cant concentrate any more and comes out of lib..and about to get down steps .accidently..bumps into..

aur kaun naina..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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contd..from last part where daksh bumps into naina

few min of eye lock..naina brks eye lock and says

Naina;iss baar main giri nahi...(picking her books)

Daksh; galiti meri hain ...sry..😊.

Naina; its ok(lil attitude) and is about to leave Daksh calls her out..

Naina  turns back and daksh asks; lib jaa rahi ho..

Naina ; haan ,book dhoondne...mili nahi na...mujhe jaana hain ..

Daksh ; kahi ye book tho nahi...gives her book

Naina looking at book her original roop waps aaja ta hain...with broad smile and excitement starts off her bak bak...

; Yes iss book ko hi dhoond rahithi main..finally milgaya..thank god ...main tho darr gayi agar ye nahi mila tho...uff pata nahi kya karti main...aur. woh prof tho uski meri padti nahi nahi hain woh tho wait kar raha hain ki main kab usko milungi.. aur  tumhe pata hain ..and she goes on and on..

aur hamra hero usko dekh kar  bas muskuraata jaa raha hain..thinking ki wapas milgayi usse uski chatter box

and naina whose going on & on .stops looking at him whose looking at her with lil smile...and then daksh comes back to his KP style 

naina  comes back to her casual style of lil attitude  in normal tone and says ;waise kaha mila tume aur kaise...main tho poora lib dhoonda lekin nahi mila .phir tumhe...

Daksh ; tumne iss book ki original section main dhoonda..??

Naina; (very confidently)waha nahi milega..

Daksh wahi par mila..Naina looks at him with question mark face and then daksh says ; woh maine hi rakha tha waha...actually kal jab main lib gaya tha tho..

now we show a  scene jaha par daksh kisi kitaaab ko dhhond tha rehta hain aur usko ye kitaab dikti hain aur hamare hero ko tho sab apne apne jagah pasand hain..tho wapas jaake origial section main rakh leta hain..aur naina mam itni confident thi kiuss section ke alava baaki sab jagah dhoonda...

fight on ...

Naina; acha ! tho woh aap the jisne book ko nikala tha...tumhari wajah se kitna tension hua mujhe ktna time waste huva...kya jarooat thi book ko waha se nikalne ki..

Daksh hello excuse me..ek tho main book dhhondke laya tumhare liye aur tum ulta mujhe suna rahi ho...

Naina (sarcastically) bada dhoondke laaya book..tumhi ne chupaya tho kya dhoondna?

Daksh ; (kp style)chupaya tumne tha..maine bas sahi jagah rakha..

Naina; yahi tho tumhari problem hain ..mr.perfect...

Daksh acha !...teek hain wapas dedo mujhe.. jaake wahi rakhtah hoon lelena .tries to take back the book..naina nahi dene waali phir kheeching session..going on...

Daksh pulls book harder aur book ke saatha naina bhi aa giri uski bahon main...

(something like this  pic lekin faces thoda door hain..)..

http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-photo-1267836-young-man-holding-woman-about-to-kiss-her.php

phir kya?...LOL..

.eye lock...dheemi se hawa ..naian tere BG score.😳😳😳..

just the naina ki phone baji...still lost in each other .naina slowly says in a very low tone phone baj raha hain..

 Daksh;  comes back to reality and says I ma sorry bolke usko chodta hain...but book uski haath main hain tho

Naina phone utake ; haan riya milgaya book..woh (looks at daksh) ... kisi ne help kiya..then daksh looks at her..naina naazr churake ...

kaun??...wapas aake sab batati hoon...haan yaar book tho milgaya lekin..pata nahi kaisa hoga 2 din main πŸ˜•πŸ˜•..poora book tho do din main...teek hain main baad main baaat karti hoon...(puts off phone)

both look at each ither lil awkward smile; and naina says I am sry..and thanks..

Daksh its ok...gives her book and says ; agar tumhe kuch madat chaiye tho assigment main main karsaktha hoon matalab mera bhi yahi elective tha..tho

Naina ; sachi..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Daksh nods his head yes

Naina ; thanks...

Daksh ; u are welcomem pauses for few min and says; agar tumhe problen mahi hain tho  main tumhe chod du.hmm  hostel tak😊

Naina nods her head yes..and they both leave..

 

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Both come out of clg..

Naina; hum walk karke jayenge?

Daksh; Haan woh actually mere bike ka kuch prob hain tho aaj freind ne drop kiya tha..Tumhe walk karne main koi prob hain ( lil concerned

Naina; nahi nahi mujhe koi prob nahi hain ..lekin tum kaise javoge mujhe drop karke..matlab bike nahi hain tumhare paas.

Daksh; main bus se chala javunga ..

Naina; main chali javungi..

Daksh ; kaise?raat ko ?woh bhi akeli..nahi (firmvoice)..chalo mere saath..

Naina; lekin

Daksh ; chup...naina becomes silent ..ab chalo..

walking walking..thandi hawa chal rahi hain lil awkward smiles..

Daksh ; waise elective yahi kyu liya tha..kuch aur

Naina; tumne kyu liya

Daksh ; sawaal maine kiya tha

Naina; maine bhi tho kiya

Daksh pehle maine kiya..

Naina; offo ok ..mujhe laga ki iss main na seekhne ke liye bahut kuch hain aur interesting bhi laga tho le liya lekin..ab

Daksh ;interesting tho hain lekin thoda complicated bhi.

Naina ; pata chala mujhe..sigh..

Daksh ;wiase kab submit karna hain

Naina sirf teen din mujhe tho bahut tension ho rahi hain ..pata anahi kaise hoga ..aur chaturvedi sir tho meri jaan lelenge..oh god..ab main..

Daksh ; bas bas..tense hone se kuch nahi hota..maine kaha na main tumhari madat karunga ..

Naina ; lekin kyu?

Daksh whoase walking just stops for while..looks at her..she looking at him with her eyes questioing him the same y..and like always he didnt have an anwser..but he says

Daksh ; suna nahi tumne A friend in need is a friend in deed..

Naina ;lekin hum tho jhoot moot ke dost hain na..ye policy yaha nahi apply karti na

once gain few min of silence

Daksh ; tho ab sach much ke dost bante

Naina; excited ; sachi  .main ..

Daksh ; hmmm ..friends?...forwards his hand

Naina nods her haed happliy and and haath main haath mila..aur hogayi dosti..

phir they stat off walk..

Naina; tumhare gahr main kaun kaun rehte hain..

Daksh ; mere ghar main ..ayi , baba , kaka , kai mere bhehn , bahii bade bahiyya vaini aur

Naina; itne saare log .tum bhaut lucky ho ..

Daksh ; isme lucy hone ki kya baat hain ..sab ki hote hain..

Naina ; nahi ...sab ki nahi hote..

Daksh notices the hint of pian in her voice and wonders y..

Daksh; wiase tumhare gahr main

Naina; hmm ..main aur mamma  bas ..

Daksh 'aur

Naina; jab main 8 sall ki thi tho mere papa..(pauses)..small tera flows out of her eye

Daksh ; oh ..I am sry ..

y he is feeling this bad looking at her in pain

Naina;wipes of tear😭😭 and says; its ok ..actually na mujhe lagta hain ki papa hamesha mere saath hain unki kahi huyi baatein ..aur un ke saath bitaye huye pal  ...woh yaddein kaafi hain ..tumhe pata hain daksh jab hum na kisi ko bahut jyada pyaara karte hain unke saath bitaye huye ek ek lamha bahut mayine rakkhtha hain esp jab woh appse dur hote hain na..tab ...

looks at him..and pauses whose lsitening to her seriuosly..; main bhi na kya kay battein lekar beth gayi ...gives herself  ahead push..

Naina; woh mere hostel aagaya..

Daksh ..woh main kuch pages mark kiye ..padlena ..

Naina; ok ..thanksshows the book ..iss ke iye aur drop karne ke liye ..good night..

Daksh good night..

he looks at her going inside..

Daksh laeves from there thinking ..every time he's getting to see a new face of her..she's diffrent for sure . y is he feeling bad .about the pian in her voice that one tear which is bothering him so much nad above all..naina😳


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CONTD...

Next day morning clg...

dono cuties apne cls main busy busy..

Brk time

Naina; ye daksh kaha hain subha se nahi dikhayi diya ..senior ki cls ke paas jaakar dekhe?

Riya; waha par ..nahi ..

Naina; teek hain tu cls chali jaa.mujhe usse milna hain.. bahut kam time hain assignment main ..main jaake aati hoon..

Riys; okk lekin dyan se..

Naina ; haan haan ..

Niana pahuchi seniors ki cls..kuch log bahar gappe maar rahe hain ..hamara dakshu ander good boy ki tarah betke kuch notes likh raha hainπŸ˜›πŸ˜›..

Naina peeks in from window..thinking ki kaise bulavu?..kis se kahu bulane ..acha nahi hoga .. number bhi nahi hain ..ander nahi jaa sakthi..

Naina looking at daksh ki woh kab apne taraf dekhega..kab ishara kare..lekin dakshu.πŸ˜•.sigh..kitaab main dhooba hua lekin hamari dakshu ki batch jo hain ..

Rajiv ne naina ko dekha..aur woh daksh ko ki kaan main ..

Rajiv ; daksh..

Daksh hmm..

Rajiv ; woh bhabhi..

daksh lifts up his haed ? ; kya?(

Rajiv ; uss taraf dekh (points at window).bhabhi ..dakshu looks at window sees naina ..naina waves hand at him with smile..

Rajiv ; lagta hain tere hi wait kar rahi hain ..

Daksh bina kuch bole gts up from his place aur baharj aata hain naina ke paas

Naina; hi daksh..( a s usual excited)

Daksh looks around  holds her hand and takes il away from cls..and says; tum yaha

Naina; woh tumse milne aayi thi ..kal tumne jo mark kiyena woh sab padliya kuch doubts hain aur abhi mera free period hain ...tho agar tum batado ki aur kya padna hain ..

Daksh;phone nahi karsakthi

Naina; number nahi hain mere paas.

Daksh nahi hain tho pooch leti

Naina; poocha tho tha lekin tumne hi mana kardiya..

Daksh; lekin woh sab chodo..book do..waise bhi abhi brk time kahtam hone waala hain ..naina kitaab deti hain aur dakshu jaldi jaldi markkar leta hain

Daksh ; saare doubts note karlo aur hsyam ko clg ke baad lib main milte hain ..ok..

Naina; ok .done

.Daksh ; aur mera number note karlo..

dono numbers excange karte hain ..

Daksh ; ok then bye

 Naina; daksh .. woh sry agar maine tumne disturb kiya ..mujhe nahi aana chahiye tha na..lekin

Daksh sry kehne ki jaroorat nahi lekin (pauses)..yaha aana not advisable , agar main yaha nahi hota tho..anyways...its ok tum javo shyam ko milte hain .4.00 ko ok bye with a smile..

Naina leaves from there..

Daksh is about to go back to cls. woh bad batch jo hain ..arey wahi assiah & co..

asishs ; ye wahi ladki hain na jo freshers day par jiske ke liye tune jagad kiya yaha tak aagayi ..woh bhi junior..chakkar kya hain boss..

Daksh ; its none of your business...ok.😑😑

ashish; really !lets see..

just then prof aaraha hain tho...discussion bandh..

shyam ko lib main...
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Next..epi of FF ..clg series.

shyam ko lib main...
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Naina hurriedly runiing across and comes to lib ..hamare kp already haazir hain ..reading some book seriuosly..
Naina; hi ..😊
Daksh just lifts up his face from book looks at her..Naina settles down in a chair before him and starts off
Naina; oh actually I am sry late hogayi main. kya hua na...
daksh ;shhh
.naina ;chup.
.phir .shows her board silence please..😊

Naina; lowers her voice and  asks  daksh to come lil forward so he could hear her, slowly whispers ;woh main kyu late huyi pata hain ..

Daksh ; tum already late ho aur upar se apni bak bak shuru mat karo ..tumhare nahi tho kamse kam dusre ki time ki khadar karna seekho...mujhe late aanewaale log pasand nahi ../moves back to his usaul position 

naina mutters sry ..aage se nahi hoga .
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Daksh; good..

Naina and daksh in opposite directions

Daksh ; tum waha betoge tho mujhe zor se bolna padega ..thoda paas aake beto taaki hum dono sun sake aur baat kar sake ,bina...
Naina completes sentence saying  bina shor ke..daksh nods his head and naina moves closer to him..ek dum kareeb πŸ˜³πŸ˜³

both look at each other ..for few sec ..

Daksh; mere godh main betna hain kya??.🀣
Naina ; nahii
.Daksh ; tho phir?? itne  kareeb nahi ..thoda dur..
Naina lil mooh pulakaπŸ˜•r and moves away from him ..

Daksh; itne dur nahi thoda kareeb ..chillna padega nahi thoπŸ˜†
Naina gets angry..and says offo .. kabhi kareeb .. kabhi dur ...kaha betna hain
Daksh looking into kitaab ; haan 4 ft ki distance
Naina ; islike waht the ..4ft??..😲😲😲

Daksh lifts up his haed from kitaab  looking at expression on her face  and says what?..

Naina says; nothing and sits at distance of 4 ft..and still looks at him lolπŸ˜† bechari abhi 4ft ki shock se bahar nahi aayi

 Daksh ; aise kyu dekh rahi ho??kya tumne kabhi personal space ka concept suna hain ..actually har insaan ko...and he starts off


..Naina ..; nods her head..listening  aur jyan noday karne ke baad 🀣..
Daksh ; samaj aaya
Naina ; nods head yes ..
when daksh looks into the book naina looking upar (; thinks).hey bhagavan ..kis missti se banaya appne isko??? 🀣.4ft?😲
Daksh ; okk tho shuru kare ..naina says haan πŸ˜Š

as they try to pick the book from table same book their hands meet ..naina ki hand ki upar dakshu ka haath ..phir kya?/😳😳😳. dakshna tune bg score aur eye lock πŸ˜³..for few sec πŸ˜³πŸ˜³..phir they come back to this world dakshu uska haath nikaalta hain ..phir naina kitaab leti hain and they start off ..

in b/w in asking & explaining  lil eye locks .. ..aur aaj ka cls khatam hogaya ..

Naina ; thanks a lot ..agar kuch doubt aaya tho..

Daksh ; phone karlena 9.00 ke baad ..ok bye ..

Naina ; bye 

dono chale apne apne ghar aur hostel ..

contd..

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Hostel

Naina's room

Naina enters riya is watching something in her laptop ..khogayi ..aasu bha rahi hain ...
Naina ; kaun mar raha hain ..
Raiys ; srk .(.crying )..het problem ke saath.
Naina; hands her over tissue packet ..
riya ; thanks  oh naina!! kab aayi tu ..???

Naina ; jab tera srk mar raha tha tab..πŸ˜†
Riys ; woh tho margaya ..aman..kal ho na ho ka ..bechara .😭😭
Naina ; tera kuch ho saktha  hain kya??aise ro rahi hain koi risthedaar margayaπŸ˜†.chal ab face wash karle  aankhen suj gayi hain

 riya goes in wr comes back and

Riya;.ye bata ki tere padayi ka session kiasa raha . naina picking her towel goes into wash room .saying ; teek tha(.closes the door)

.riya (from outside) ..teek tha πŸ˜²πŸ˜²..ye kya baat huyi??? ..dp ke saath poora ek ganta ...😳😳omg πŸ˜³..agar mujhe mila hota tho main ho dp ko dekhte hi rehti kitna cute lgata hain  padta hua aur padta hua tho aur cute lag raha hoga😳 woh bhi itne kareeb se..😳😳.its almost like a date in library na aut tu kehrahi hain sirf teek hain ...*sighs *..
Naina ;  coming out from wash room ;tho kya kahu?

Riya ;  Ye bol ki kya kaha usne? actually hua kya tha ??..kya baat kiya uusne?aur tune kya jawab diya?

Naina ; riya... main waha assignment ke liye gayi thi naahi uske saath gappe ladane aur uske saath gappe  tho dur baat bhi maesure karke karta hain πŸ€£..sits on her bed.

Riya (uske bagal main betkar );kuch tho baat kiya hoga .kuch tho kaha hoga(excited) ya phir .(sings song )aankhon hi aankhon main ishara hogaya ..😳😳

Naina ; aise kuch nahi hain

Riya;loffo naina tu kitni unromantic hain.gets up and (starts off in her filmy style)..lib main shyam ko ..koi nahi aas paas ..sirf dono ,ek khoobsurat ki ladki  aur ek naujawan ladka ..dheemi si hawa..oh my god πŸ˜›πŸ˜›..ye koi filmi situation se kam hain ..agar  kjo ka movie hota tho ab tak tho πŸ˜ƒ..ek romantic sa music ..phir aankhon main aankhein daal kar dekhna..aur phir dheere dheere ..aur tu kehti hain teek tha .

Naina ;tujhe na yaha par nahi kjo ki movie main hona chaiye ,,

Riya; woh tho hain ..ab main hain itni fimli ki..woh sab chod sits near her shooks her batna mujhe.kya hua// bata ..bata na

Naina ;suddenly says ; enough! ye kya kar rahi hain tu?  

riya ek dum shocked naina ki ye roop dekh kar. and timidly says.maine kya kiya??

 Naina; looks at her for few sec and says kya tumne kabhi personal space ki baare main suna hain..

riya ; kya?
Naina ; physical space ?

Riya nods her head no

Naina..uska jyananoday karti hain just like daksh does.🀣.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Personal_space

khatam hone ke baad few min of silence ...riya looking at naina and says

Riya ;  naina ..tu teek haina ..tujhe ho kya gaya hain ye kya anaap sanaap bol rahi hain
Naina ;  smiles looking at her and says ; maine nahi tere dp ne kaha hain ye sab ..
Riya ;    (with I cant believe it expression)ye sab kaha usne ..??😲😲

Naina ; jee haan..gets back to work..
Riya; oh god ..iss ladke ka kya kare ab..ye na sach main antique piece hain .πŸ˜†.Ladki ko chod kar psychology ki baatein kar raha hain..aisa tho ..aagr koi aur hota na ..tho .
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Naina smiles in return ..;saying lekin ye koi aur nahi ..

both look at each other and says in rhyme ; daksh patwardhan hain..claps their hands smiling..

RIYA; teek hain tu apna kaam karle mujhe bhi kuch wrk kahtam karna hain 

..dono in padayi ..dinner bhi hogaya both come back to room ..riya about tolseep naina still busy with her  assignment

riya; naina kuch poochu ?naina says yes..( still writing something with her pen into notes)

Riys ; woh  jis hisaabb se daksh ne tujhe betne ke liye kaha I mean 4ft woh tho ek outisder ke liye hain na ..πŸ˜•.
Naina ; stops her pen..

Riya mtlab uske ke liye tu??

Naina; silent for few moments then says

Naina; shayad out sider hi hu ..closes her book s..bedding teek karte huye ...wiase bhi hum ek dusre ko jaante kitne hain ki ..main us ke liye khaas banjavu ..(keeping books on her table) .. abas ek baar dance kar liya tho ..kya afrak padta hain ..anyways  woh mere baare main kya sochtha ..i dnt care ..

Naina can sense..she is angry disaapointed ..but y ...y is giving all this reasoning?? riya ne poocha iss liya ya khud  ke liye ..

. Naina; aur waise bhi woh bhi mere liye...(pauses for while)..y is she finding hard ..but still shr says ..oustider hi hain ..

Riys; Naina..woh ..
Naina ; good night riya ..kal bahut kaam hain mujhe..puts off light but not asleep ..still thinking .

Y iam feeling bad ki he considers me outsider ..kya main daksh se kuch aur expect karti hoon ?waht about all that moments wherethey were close to each other..y hse feels connected

flashes of their dance, how lost they were in each other .every catch & fall ..eye locks..

scene shifts to ph..daksh ka room..daksj also remembering those moments

Daksh ; .not even oce he felt uncomfortable holding her ..never felt his personal sapce was invaded...it was like as if they were meant to be (.flashes of moments in lib ).no clue of y his hrt beats faster hen she is close ..good that he asked her to move away sounding casual and .this personal space thing which he read some where kaam aaya to support his point ..nahi tho ..

so now the screen is like half half .. daksh and naina .on bed ..

Naina;  What am I to him  and he to her
Daksh ; what she means to me

Both afraid to answer  the question ..thinking thinking 

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Next 2 days..both of them trying to be strictly professional.confining their discussions to only assignment naina ,bcos she is angry that he considers her an out sider..daksh happy that his hrt is lil safe now from her bcos of this professional attitude ..

lekin aisa kaisa love story hain woh bhi dakshna ki tho ,beech main eye locks ..awkward smiles ..getting lost looking at each other(kabhi kabhi)..but no fireworks nad sparks..raat ko phone callsπŸ˜‰ ( doubts ke liye yaar)...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

so iss tarah apne cuties are busy..and last day b4 submission ..library main ..

Daksh ; mujhe yakken nahi hota ki tumne phir se book ko chupaya aur woh bhi yaha iss purane section main.. ( lookinG at her whose on ladder searching for book on top shelf ..)..kal hi tho diya ..agar tum nahi leskathi tho mujhe batati thi na😑😑 main le lata ..lekin nahi Mam ko khud lena tha aur ab 

Naina; looking down at him whose holding ladder ; mujhe laga mera paas tickets hain lekin phir dekha tho bhool gayi ..atab tak tho tum bhi niakl gaye tho kya karti main ..yahi ek raasta tha ..

Daksh ; teek hain teek hain ab dhoondo .

Naina ; wahi tho kar rahi hu .( gets back to her  serach)..
Daksh ; thoda jaldi karo..already20 minw aste hogaye tumhare upar chadne aur bookdhoondne ki chakkar main ..
Naina; tum pls aise tension mat do mujhe ..kaha gaya ayhi par rakha .after few min ...yes .yes...milgaya ..milgaya ..ye dekho ...

book milne ki excitement kuch jyada hi hogaya aur she slips off of ldader ..and aakr giri daksh par..daksh falls on pile of books jo neeche rkaha hain and uske uapr naina...😳😳😳

phir as usual ..eye lock ..both faces ek dum closer ..dakshna muisc as bg score..dono khogaye ek dusre ki aankhon main😳 bahon mainπŸ€— ..phir they come back into this world..

naina gets up hurriedly ..then daksh ..daksh apne shirt par jo dust laga hua hain he's wiping that off ..

Naina; (with anxiety); tum teek ho na tumhe kuch hua tho nahi ..kahi lag tho nahi gaya..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Daksh ; haan haan main teek ...he stops for sec , looks at her and says ; ek min ..ye tho mera sawaal hain ..πŸ˜†
Naina; pata hain ..lekin maine pooch  liya  (winks at him and smiles)πŸ˜‰just for a change

Daksh oh really ! bina mujh par gire tum koi kaam kar sakthi ho jab hum saath hote hain ..(nad adds) just for a change ..🀣🀣

Naina;bina tum par gire matlab ??.tumhe kya lagta main din raat yahi spana dekhtI rehtI hoon kiπŸ˜†πŸ˜† ,kab daksh aayega kab main uss par jaake giru ,πŸ˜†..kab woh bhi mujhe apni bhaon main utayega and all..🀣🀣

Daksh ..takes book from naina and crosses her saying ; who knows??(with a lil smirk on his face)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Naina; what do u mean by who knows ?FOLLOWS HIM .uski saamne aake ..blocks his way .naina looking at him .ek dum fire brand ki roop main ..😑

 Naina ACHE SE SUNLO mr daksh patwardhan .MUJHE KOI SHAUK NAHI HAIN TUMARE BAHON MAIN GIRNE KA 😑😑..ok !is that clear?

Daksh ;ok ok ..gussa mat karo ..cool down ...(SettlIng on chair) ..kabhi kabhia isa ho jaata hain its ok na😊

naina also settles down ..saying ; hmm ye huyi na baat ..

after looking in books for  few sec ,..daksh looks at her and says
Daksh ; .waise tum teek ho na ..😊
Naina; main kyu batavu? tumne mere sawaal ka jawab nahi diya jab poocha tho ..πŸ˜†
Daskh ; mujhe kya hoga ??waise bhi aj kal ladkiyan hain itni patli hi ..kabhi zero size ..kabhi dieting ..all skinny types..tum jyada moti nahi ho .πŸ˜†

Naina ; jyada moti nahi ho matlab??😲😲 main moti hoon ??.😲
Daksh ; nahi ..mera woh mat lab nahi tha 
naian ; tho phir main skinny types  hu?πŸ˜†
daksh ; nahi ..mera kehne ka matlab tha ki ..tum(pauses)
Naina main kya??
Daksh ; i mean tum ..hmm tum perfect ho .dikhne main .😳.

Naina shocked for few sec ; then kya kaha tumne?? tumne abhi mujhe pefect kaha dikhne mian I dnt believe this..oh my god ...daksh patwardhan aur mujhe🀣 ..danya hogayi main ..can I TAKE THAT AS  COMPLIMENT PLS PLS ..pls..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Daksh ; trying to control his million dollar smiles..says ;bas bahut hogaya nautnaki ..ab padayi kare 
..
Naina; nods head happily and dono lag gaye padayi main ..

finally with dakshu's help naina completes of her assignment success fully ..submission bhi hogaya ..and next few days dono cuties busy in apne kaam..apne padayi couldnt catch up with each other except for few min in all those days ..that too a smile.. a hi & bye ..eye locks during lunch time😳
..
One day ...in clg..

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I have give up when u demand woh bhi aise ..πŸ˜†..lo your next part ..πŸ˜›
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One day ...in clg..

 prof announced the results aur assignments main naina topped in the class ..aur after listening words of  her praise from the prof..us prof jo hamesha naina ko daant tha rehta hain 

and after

 receiving accolades from whole classπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ naina tho khusi se paagal hogayi  and tabhi bell bajta hin ..she comes out ..with riya ..walking in corridor ..

riya ; congrats nainaπŸ‘πŸΌ .aakhir tune prof ko impress kar hi liya ..

naina ; haan riya main tujhe bata nahi sakti ki main bahut khush hu.......itna khus hu ki .πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Riya ; main bhi bahut kushu hu tere liye aur terat tho bnata hain iss par

naina ;of course bnata hain ..lekin ye sab psbl hua daksh ki wajah se ..agar usne mujhe help nahi kitya hita tho .kaash woh mere saamne hota tho

riya ; lo hogayi wish poori ..woh daksh hain na ..

naina looking at some one from back ;chillati hain daksh and then he turns back ..naina khushi se excited hoke comes running and hugs him tight πŸ€—πŸ€—ek dum se ; saying ; thank you thank you so much  daksh .. i am so so happy ..

lekin hamare janaab baat sun ne ki haalat main kaha hain ..lol..🀣

it happened so suddenly he didn't even faintly  have an idea of whats going on ..he was

spell bound for a sec ..hrt skipping few of its beats and then it started beating so fast ..she came out of hug ...naina was in front of him ...all he could sense was she was excited and happy and was saying something but he was unable to make out ..kuch sunyai nahi de raha thaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† ..he was like in a sweet shock .she going on and on ...finally he tries to regain his composure ..and all he could hear was..

Naina  saying aarahi hu . (looking at riya whose calling her ).and she looks at him saying shyam ko 4.00 baje..canteen main ..bhool na mat ..I will wait for you

Daksh ; lekin ...and b4 he could saay something ..she left ..

in state of confusion ; daksh  moves ahead settles down  on a bench ; actually usne mujhe 4.00 baje kyu bulaya ..baat kya hain ..he was sure she could have told reason but..he tries   to regain hua kya tha?..

He was on his way to class ..and then he hrd his name called by... he turned back and it was naina ..and b4 he could say hi...she came running towards him and hugged him so tight...that he .lost his sense..😳😳

; daksh takes a deep breath ;.and looks at watch he getting late for his cls and he moves on..

 shyaam ko 4.00 pm..

 naina in canteen ..; ye daksh kaha haina bhi tak nahi aaya..looking at watch and walking here & there ..phone kar leti hoon ..she calls daksh..

from other side daksh says ; hello

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