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Next day morning...clg..main...

Both hamara cuites busy with their clsses..aur shyam ko plan hain na beach ka...tho clg main kam hanging out together...

Shyam ko...Naina  clg ki ek bench pe betke wait kar rahi hain...or hamara hero...pata hain kabhi late nahi ho tha ..lekin kuch prof ke paas phasg gaya...Naina waiting for him..

flash back main jaati hain...

Nisha se bet lagane ke baad ..hamare mam kaam pe lag gayi..aur kaunsa hamare hero ko patane ka kaam main..

After frshers patry..next day...

Clg main...

Kitne koshisa ki...do min sjyada baat karne ki lkein hamara cute khadoos tho..lol.

Jaanbhucke bumping...baat karke ki koshish...all failed attempts...just like that ek, hai ,bye..tho he was friendly freinds ke ssamne  It didnt take much time for her knew that he was not at all intereted in her and her calculation is wrong!

ek baar jab phone number poocha tho

Daksh ; mera number kyu?...

Naina; bas aise hi...looks at his seriuos look and says; matlab doubts ke liye

Daksh ;  miane kab kaha ki main tumhara doubts clear karunga..anyways clg main poocho ..wahi kaafi hain..

Ek baar coffee ke liye poocha tho..

Daksh ; coffee??..phir kabhi ..waise bhi ab lilb jaana hain...

after like this few instances.may be he realised she was doing all this...one day ...

Daksh ; kahi tum mujhe follow tho nahi kar rahi hona..

Naina ; nahi tho..woh...

Daksh tho phir ye sab kya hain kabhi cofee kabhi phine nubr kabhi doubts...

Naina; kuch nahi main bas chahthi hoon ki hum sach main freinds bane..

Daksh ;..dekho naina..maine tumhe support kiya ..party main tumhara help kiya iska matlab ye nahi ki ...shayad tum bhool gayi ki hum sirf jhhot moot dosti ka natak kar rahe hain..ok...aur mujhe ye sab pasand nahi...Tho ayinda se dyan rakho ki pehle ki tarah hum ek doosre ko avoid kare..ok...

Naina was irked and decided not to bother him anymore..aakhir kab tak peeche padti rehti...but still his scoldings re much better than nisha'  tauntings...so she decided to reduce the frequency of bumping and irritating him...but still no luck...

Meanwhile she also joined for part time job in some tutorial  for scholl students for pocket money(like she told her friends).. as she dnt like asking her mom ..since she know the pain she went through and what prompted het to come to mumbai...she tried hard to stand up for herself...and then one day..

Suddenly she comes back into present with his..voice

Naina; tum aagaye...

Daksh  ;  sry swy hrt ..gives her small  hug ;woh ..prof nr pakadliya tho...thoda late hua tum mujhse naaraz tho nahi ho na...naina says no

Daksh good...waise ab tumhe khayalon main khone ki koi zarooat nahi kyunki jo tumhare khayal main hain woh ab tumhare saamne hain..

Daksh; then suddenly ek min .ek min..tum mere baare hi soch rahi hona...yes kaho nahi tho mera itna cahe line ka value nahi hoga.

Naina; bade nautanki karte ho aaj kal...tumhare baare main sochne se fursat mile tab na...aur  yaad hain..

Daksh  haan...yaad hain hamara date@ beach...chale..bike bhi tayar hain aur aapka  bf cum driver bhi..πŸ˜‰Naina hits him playfully..

Dono bike par..naina holding him tight

Both reach beach...

Beach par...

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Beach par...

Paani main khelke πŸ˜›..paani puri khaane ke baad...both settled cuddling close to each other...

Naina; daksh kuch poochu tum se

Daksh ; kuch bhi

Naina; woh jab main hamesha tumhare peeche padte thi kabhi doubts ke banahne kabhi coffee..tab tum bahut irritate ho the na..mujhe tabhi samaj aaya ki uss waqt tum mujhe kuch jyada pasand nahi karte the..(lil mooh pulakar)πŸ˜•...baad main..

Daksh ; galat! kuch nahi samjhti tum ..samjhana padta hain..buddu

Naina; matlab(question mark face)😲

Daksh ; matlab rubbing her hand gently; jaan bhoocke main tumse rudely baat karta tha ki..kyunki kyunki...freshers day ki baad shayad kahi na kahi..mere dil main tumhare liye ek soft spot aagaya tha ...lekin mujhe daar tha hi ki " I will fall for u"..issliye tum se door bhaag tha tha.avoid karne ki koshish..lekin baad main wahi hua..(squeezes her hand gently)😳 and says ; I have crazily fallen for u ...

Naina with out words just holds him lil tight...saying love u..❀️

Daksh ; waise tum apni promise nibhaya..raaat ko spno main aakar..

Naina; woh tho pata hain mujhe, tho batavona kya sapna aaya tumhe..pls..batavona

Daksh ; hmm batavunga lekin no daant and no maarpitayi okk...waise bahut ajeeb tha..(starts giggling)πŸ˜†..bahut funny bhi tha...aur

Naina; ab batabhi dona daksh...

Daksh ; acha teek hain suno...

Contd...

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Back to beach daksh naina ko apna drm detailed main samjhaa raha hain...

Daksh ; pata hain naina...mujhe laga ki main khai khogaya hu  aur aas paas main kuch bhi nahi..tho...suddenly maine dekha...


Daksh looks at board and exclaims...

LOVE CLINIC???.😲😲...ye kya hain?...

Naina; Kya love  clinic?.ajeeb hain..phir kya hua..??tum ander gaye..

Daksh haan gayana main ander..lekin woh hospital jaisa bilkul nahi..matlab saare walls pink red colors main..love symbols.❀️..I mean bahut alag tha...phir main ander gaya.. room main

Inside room

Daksh looks at someone..sitting in chair with back turned towards him...

Daksh: excuse me!

As Soon as the person turns back daksh ko laga shock & surprise..ek ladki  doctor coat pehenkar)' yes..how can I help u?

Daksh;Naina ..tum?? 😲aur ye sab kya hain..aur

Naina; offo daksh tum bhool gaye kya tumhe hi tho sapno main bulaya mujhe aur ab ...anyways main naina nahi ..main dr .naina bahardwajπŸ˜†πŸ˜† hu ..iss love clinc ka doctor..aaj  tumhare payr ki bhimari ko teek karedenge..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Daksh ; lekin..??

Naina;; aur faltu main time waste mat karo kal subha mujhe clg jaana hain ..aaj raat tak hi time hain mere paas...looks at him and says ..beto...

Daksh sits down...in chair in front of her...

..Naina ;batavo ki problem kya hain..ohh ..ok..pyar ki bhimari right?

Daksh nods his head yes...

Naina; hmm..tho kab se  hua ye..aur koi symptoms notice kiya tumne.??.

Daksh .; ek mahine ke aas paas..jab se hua, naa bhook lagti hain, naa pyaas...naa neend aati hain teek se..hamesha...

Naina; khyaalo main dooba rehtho ho..kisi kaam par concentration nahi bewaja muskurnaa..πŸ˜† ..etc etc...

Daksh ;exactly!..

Naina ; dnt wry ..Main abhi teek kardungi...

...Naina utke..apne doc ka coat nikallti hain ..daksh is like whoa🀣🀣

 daksh ki paas aati hain daksh ka dil dhak dhak karne lagta hain..naina romanticly uska haath pakadti hain..and looking into his eyes(in husy voice),,,says; pulse chk kar rahi hu...😳😳😳

Daksh ki body main vibrations chal rahe hainπŸ˜†πŸ˜†..thoda ghabrahat ho raha hain bechare ko..🀣

After that

 with out words Naina starts unbuttoning his shirt..

Daksh ; Naina ye tum??.😲😲

Naina; (in low husky romantic tone)offo..hrt beat chk karna hain...dil ki baat stethoscope se pata nahi chalte..tugs his shirt off his shoulders. slightly brushing his chest with her fingers.places her hand on his hrt.☺️☺️dakshu ko kuch ho raha hain..😳

.after few min lowers her head and listens to his hrt beat❀️...

Daksh ; tho kay kehraha hain dil?

Naina; kaafi advanced stage par hain tumhari bhimari..dil bhi tumhari GF ki naam se hi dhadak raha hain..

Daksh gf nahi honewaali biwi..

Naia;.settling her self on table in front of  his chair; any incident jisne tum par asar dikhaya..aaj kal..

Daksh ;  😳(lil blush)woh woh...kal humne pehli baar kiss kiya ek doosre ko

Naina; kiss ka time frame?..

  Daksh; pata nahi maybe nearly 20 min..I guess..

Naina;aur side effects??

.Daksh ;uske baad tho aur behaal hogaya hu dimag ne kaam karna bandh kardiya.. ..jaise paagal hogaya hu...upar se phir ek goodbye  kiss.😳.mere ghar waale samaj rahe hain ki main paagal hogaya hu? iss ka...iska koi illaaj hain  doctor?

Naina; looking at him for sometime..; hain na.

she releases her hair.😳😳.ek dum sexy look aur voice ke saath;..uto ...

Daksh gets up..she twines her hand around his neck..daksh hrt racing.❀️.. she pulls him closer ..sligtly brushing his hair at back..daksh breath quickened as their faces are only few inches away...he could feel her breath on his face..eyes locked..

Naina; ek kiss se ye sab shuru hua hain tho iska ilaaj hain ..looking deep into his eyes..ek aur kiss...and touches his lips..😳😳

Daksh gets up suddenly out of drm...looks around..his hrt still raching..taking deep breath.looking at his shirt still onπŸ˜†πŸ˜†..;tho ye sapna hain..smiles within himself lil blushing😳

 Daksh ; Naina ...Naina..πŸ€—.holds pillow tight and gets back to sleep...

Back to beach...

Daksh ; tho kaisa laga mera sapna..tumne mujhe dara diya ..mujhe laga kahi tum meri izaat na luto.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..aur looks at her killer looks and stops...and next min gets up and starts running  with smile as she follows hitting him with her bag as daksh says ; naina ..naina..pls ..bas karo ab...ouch ..dheere se..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

after long run..both relax...take a breath..

looking at  each other her  gasping...both brk into laugh..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›.

Daksh ; maine pehli kaha na no maar pitayi..aur ab..aur mam sapne main sab kuch aap hi ne kiya.maine tho wahi follow kiya jo love doctor ne kaha...aur..waise sapne tho bade romantic banrahi thi.πŸ˜›.aur ab?

Naina looks at him blushes and hugs him ..

After staying in hug for few min..

Naina; tho phir doctor ne kuch prescription nahi diya kya??

Daksh ; haina!..subha ek GM kiss 😳 beech main ,ek u know hamri baarishwaali kiss aur eve ko ek goodbye kiss..😳..naina ka blush aur thoda badjaata hain ..

Daksh ; lekin kya pata milenge ya nahi..woh tho mam ki meherbaani par depend karta hain nahi thoπŸ˜•..iss pyaar ki bhimari main kahi..

she cuts of his sentence with sudden short kiss..touch of her lips to his...and then  he's lost somewhere with hrt stopping for one min...

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Naina looking at him who is in utter shock...calls him out ; daksh...shooks him holding shoulder..He comes out of trance..

Naina; kya hua?..tum teek hona??

Daksh ; taking a deep breath looking at her ; tum aise sweet sudden shocks doge tho.😳.

Naina;(casually) maine wahi kiya jo prescription main tha na..jo love doctor ne kaha...Aur waise bhi..(lil demanding)aise kaise ho saktha hain ki..do pyar karnewaalo main..bhimaari sirf ek ho..mujhe bhi na lagta pyar ki bhimari hogayi hain tho..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...Looks at his smiling face smiles naughtily..πŸ˜‰..and shows him her cheek.😳...

Daksh with equal naughty smile looks around and drops a kiss on her cheek  and says love u.❀️..naina replies love u too

Daksh ; Naina...kuch poochntaha tumse.

.Naina ; Poochona

Daksh ; woh main  soch raha hu ki part time job join karlu aur waise bhi kitne din baba se paise maangte rahunga...woh baba ki jaan pehchaan ka ek lawyer Mr.Gupta..usko associate ki jaroorat hain...tho

Naina; wow...daksh thats gr8!..iss main poochnewaali kya baat hain.?.

Daksh ; hain naina, ..ab tum meri zindagi ka hissa ho aur main chahtah ki mere har faisla main  tumhra saath ho. .tumare classes aur mera part time job . hum dono ka saath main...(pauses)

Naina; hmm...saath main jyada waqt bitana..possible nahi hain..

Daksh ;nods his head yes Lil moh pulakar)..

Naina; offo daksh ..kise baatein lekar bet gaye tum..ye bhi koi sochnewaali baat hain..jat se haan kehdo join karlo...rahi baat saath rehne ki?? phone hain hamare paas..phir clg main milenge..saath main lunch karenge.aur jab chutti hogi tab masti karenge ...waise bhi..(holding him close)..dur rehne se na pyar aur badta hain😊

Daksh acha!..😊

Naina;  jee...aur ab tho mere honewaala pati ..job bhi karnewaala hain(lil attitude) ..main bhaut khush hu..πŸ˜ƒ

Daksh ; sach!πŸ˜›

Naina; sach muchπŸ˜› (drops a kiss on his cheek.)...

Daksh; isko prescription main include mat karo..ok.πŸ˜†.

Naina ; nahi kiya ..Waise kab join karna hain...?

Daksh; do din baad...arey main tho bhool hi gaya...ayi ne poocha tumhe ki naina ne aaj kal aana bandh kardiya..aur akruthi ,baba , sab pooch rahethe..tho kab aa rahi ho..apne hone waala sasural?

as  Listening this naina expression thoda badalte hain πŸ˜•..

Looking at her ; kya hua naina..tum..πŸ˜•

Naina; daksh..woh..pehli ki baat alag thi tab hum sirf dost the lekin ab...pata nahi kyu aisa lag raha hin ki kahi hum ayi ko...matlab..woh..ayi ko ..

Daksh;.I knw..naina ki tum yahi kahoge ..guilt feel kar rahi honaπŸ˜• ..naina..tum itna soch kyu rahi ho...tum jaanti ho ki ayi tumne kitna pasand karti hain aur baaki sab bhi ..agar ayi ko pata chalegi tho woh bahut khusu hojayegi ki uski laadli ghar ki bahu banrahi hain..

Naina; lekin

Daksh lekin wakin kuch nahi .. sahi wqat aane par I promise main khud ayi se baat karunga.hamare baare mainπŸ˜› hum hamesha saath rahenge holds her close..

Daksh ;.. waise kuch kahu?

Naina; Kya?

Daksh ;aise mooh pulahua chrhra kaafi suit karta hain tumhe.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..lol

Naina; kya daksh.?.hits him..

Daksh ;tho mam apne honewaali sasural main kab aayegi?

Naina; kal shyam ko chalthe hain...

Daksh ; done...looks around and says .. waise clears throat and says; aaj ka GM kiss nahi mil mujhe .πŸ˜•.kahi bhimari phir se...

Naina; acha! ..aise baat hain tho mujhe bhi nahi mili πŸ˜‰..tho ab?...

Daksh;hmm tho ab??...

Both look at each other...move lil closer..brief touch of lips..and part..and get back into each others arms...πŸ€—πŸ€—...

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After Kiss.. hug and smiles...daksh drops naina near hostel.. after luv u❀️ and GB kiss..😳😳

Daksh ; cls khatam hote hi phone ya msg kardena ...

Naina; haan baba..karlungi .apne honewaali pati ke saath sasural jaana..wow.πŸ˜›...acha ab main javu...

Daksh ; agar mujh se poochoge tho..(holds her hand and says )...mat javo...miss u..πŸ˜•

Naina;  bas aaj raat phone karne tak .bye..

Daksh ; bye...

Night; phone mian baatein khatam hogaye...

Daksh and naina remembering flash back...

Naina

Remembering that day when she met ayi...

She was going out for her classes...way goes through the market ..suddenly kahi beed jama hogayi ..naina rushes to look and sees a middle aged woman fainted...

Naina rushing towards her ; aap sab log tamasha kyu dekh rahe hain.she sprinkles some water from her bottle.as she comes into conscious..Inspite of her resistance seeing her condition naina takes her to the hospital...admits her...Since she didnt have mobile naina calls her husband vidhyadhar from her mobile and informs him

Naina; aunty maine call kardiya.uncle ko...aate hi honge ..ab aap kaise feel kar rahi hain..

Ayi; main teek hu beta aur kya jaroorat thi itni talikf  karne ki main ghr chali jaati...

Naina; aap kitne kamjor the..aise kaise jaati??

Ayi; tumhara naam kya hain beta?

Naina; main naina bharadwaj..just then her mobile rings..from tutorials..

Ayi ; tumhe kahi jaana hain tho..

naina; aap ko aise chod kar..ek baar uncle aajaye phir main chali javungi...

just then baba comes there..wrdly..after all formalities..Baba thanks naina...just then baba gets a call ..

Baba; haan chintu main pahauch gaya tu aaja...tu tension mat le .ab teri ayi teek hain ..acha main raktha hu..

Baton baton main pata chalta hain ki naina kaunasi clg main pad rahi hain...

Ayi ; arey hamara chintu bhi ussi college main padta hain..

Naina; Chintu??

Baba; woh ghar main hum sab uske chintu bulate hain ..lekin clg main

Just then naina la mobile phir se bhaji ..

Naina; ab mujhe jaana hoga ..call pe call aa raha hain... comes near ayi and says; aunty aap apna dya rakhiye ..ayi pyaar se usko bless karti hain aur baba se bhi blessing leke..

Ayi; kabhi hamara ghar aana ...

Naina; haan ..jaroor wiase bhi mere paas uncle ka number hi haina...main call karlungi.πŸ˜›.ab main chalti hoon..bye ...bolke...naina nikalti hain ...just then daksh makes an entry πŸ˜›..but they don't meet...miss out in fraction of min..

Present ;

Naina

uske baad she become close to their family...so close ki she even started calling them ayi baba...and now ...very soon hopefully she will truly be a part of patwardhan family...

Daksh

Daksh remembering the same day...

How he got call from baba..how he rushed to hospital...

Daksh ; entering into room; ayi..

ayi .main teek hu..chintu

Daksh; kitne baaar kaha tujhe ..akeli mat jaa ..akruthi ko saath le jaati ..lekin tu kaha sunti hain...sits near ayi holds her hand..tu teek hain na ayi...

Baba; puts a hand on dakhsu' shoulder ; daksh..teri ayi teek hain..

Daksh ; baba ..main jaake ek baar doctor se baat karke ..aur baaki formalities dekh leta hoon...goes out...

Chks with doctor who says just bcos of weakness...she can be taken home..daksh goes naer reception asks for bill & discharge papers..

Receptionist; yaha par sign kijiye. ..aur bill tho usne bardiya..

Daksh ; kisne??

R; wahi ladki jisne patient ko yaha laayi..usne hi saara bill bardiya treatment ki aur medicines ke bhi..

Daksh; how sweet he thinks..I should thank her ;looking at R ; uski kuch details..naam ya number..??

R; ek min...chks register and says; ..number tho nahi hain...lekin naam..Naina bharadwaj

As soon as he listens the name..he's struck for few min ..;Naina bharadwaj...flashes of naina's b4 his eyes..but next min he's like what if she is some other naina...only if he had her number...

He completes the remaining formalities...goes back to room..

daksh ; baba..saari formalities khatam hogaye..ab ayi ko ghar le jaasakthe hain..

Baba; aur bill bardiya tune?

Daksh; maine nahi..woh

Baba; naina. ne

Daksh nods his head..he helps out ayi in getting down...

Ayi; kitni achi ladki hain aur chintu tujhe pata hain woh teri hi clg main  hi padti hain..

Daksh ; acha!...(that means its Naina)..

Finally they reach home...from then ayi never got tired of parsing naina..

Ayi;aaj kal sab log apne matlab kisochthe hain..lekin woh ..mujhe jaanti tak nahi..phir bhi ek min bhi nahi socha..maine kitna mana kiya lekin woh maani hi nahi

Baba; sach vibha..usko dekh kar aisa laga ki bahut jaan pehechan waali hain

Ayi; aho aapke paas uska number hogana...ek baar ghar bulayiye usse

Baba;  haan kyu nahi ..jaroor..

Next day while going to clg...

Ayi ;.chintu  naina tere clg main hi padti hain ..tu usse jaan ta nahi

Daksh ; ayi woh ..main ek naina ko jaanta hoo lekin ..

Baba; ye le uska number aur us se paise lautadena.. aur usse ghar par bhi bulana..phone pe bulaane se acha hoga ki tu khud balale..

Daksh nods his head and leaves to clg..

Present

Daksh

 That  day he had seen a new face of naina ..that naina..whom he had seen as a fun loving  care free not bothered abt anything ..but beneath all this there's a loving caring and selfless person..

That day after hearing convo b/w naina and riya ...

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keep up the good work lucky😊 im really loving the story❀️


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In clg..he went looking for naina after the class in brk...finally he found her with her friend riya both seriously discussing something.walking in corridor...he wondered what would they be...them he thinks kya farak padta hain..he just needs to say thanks ...return the money and then...while going near them accidentally he happens to hear the convo...

Riya; mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki apne saare paise hospital main de diya...ab tu kya karegi..??

Naina; kya karungi...dance cls baaad main jaoin karungi..bas

Daksh

dance cls;??..he remembers seeing something in notice borad about this..very limited admissions..something of that sort...

Riya; bas!..kal tak tho kitne excited thi tu dance cls ko lekar ab...aur tune bin soche samjhe kisi anjaane..??

Naina;Nahi socha yaar...uss waqt mere dimmag main sirf ye tha ki mujhe uss aunty ko hospital leke jaane hain..aur wase bhi madat soch samajkar kiya nahi jaata...

Riya; lekin saara paise waha dediya..aur tujhe tho kisi se madat lene pasand nahi..mera bhi nahi ..aur tution cls bhi tho tune abhi join kiya...aur dance cls admission ka kal hi last date hain..iss baar nahi tho next saal hi ho ga..phir bhi tu ..

Naina; offo riya kitne fikr kati hain tu meri.πŸ€—.hugs her and says.dekh ..paiso ka kya hain yaar aate jaate rehthe hain lekin jaan..???..aur wiase bhi mere papa hamesha kehte hian ki jab tum kisi ki madat karne ki situtation main hokar bhi uski madat nahi karogena uss jyada paap aur kuch nahi...

aur dance iss saal nahi tho agla saal ..main bas khush hu ki meri wajahse kisi ko help mila...πŸ˜›

Riya; Naina...tu bahut achi hain

Naina; woh tho main hu hi .bachpan se hi.πŸ˜‰.(both have a laugh)

Naina;aur rahi baat paiso ki hain tho..main pane tutorial waalo se baat karke advance lungi agar milega tho..ok..nahi ho tujh se lungi..khush!

Riya;pakka..legi agar chahiye tho haan... pakka

Naina; haan baba pakka..ok..waise woh sab chod..sun ek mazze waali baat batavu..

Riya; kya??

Naina; uss aunty ka beta bhi hamara clg main hi padta hain..

Daksh

 does she know ki..of course ayi ne batadiya hoga...

Riya; really ..kaun hain naam kya hain

Naina; naam giggles and says...chintu

Daksh

Oh god isse kaisa pata ..chintu

Riya chintu/?...ye kaisa naam hain..ajeeb sa

Daksh ; what do she mean by ajeeb??..

Naina; kya ajeeb? nick name hoga.. waise bhi mujhe tho acha laga bhaut sweet hain..

Riya; ohh..sirf naam ya phir.??πŸ˜‰.

Daksh smiles within himself...

Naina; chup kar ..sirf naam pata hiain won bhi ye waala..aur kuch nahi pata woh kaun hain kis cls main hain..wiase bhi hame kya lena dena hain..aur.. imagine ghar main sab usse  kaise bulate honge  uski mom kahegi  chintu beta..chintu beta...

Riya; aur uski behen bolegi chintu dada...lol aur jab uski shaadi hogi tho uska wife kya bulayegi?

Naina; woh mujhe nahi pata ..lekin agar main hoti tho...

daksh listening with curiosity...

Naina; chintu darling...chintu darling idhar avona pls...brks out laughing and both clasp hands...

 Naina; uss aunty milkar aisa laga ki koi rishtha hain hamara...aunty aur uncle na bahut sweet hain ..

Riya; tho chintu bhi sweet hoga

Naina; kya pata sweet hoga ya phir uss daksh pawradhan ki  tarah khadoss hoga

daksh ; khadoos !!!😲😲

Riya; aagaya na DP ka naamπŸ˜†..kisi bhi topic ko ghuma phirakar uss par hi aati hain..din main kitne baar japegi uska naam...ek min..kahi tu uspe fida tho nahi hogayi??

Naina; uss khadoos par ...gives a long sigh and says ..fida ho kar bhi kya fayida..lekin ab maine sochliya ab main uske peeche nahi padungi bahut bhav deta hain...agar NB se dosti karna hain tho khud aayega...

Daksh oh really/smilesπŸ˜†

Riya; woh bhi dekhte hain...arey baaton main time nahi dekha ...cls ks time hogaya ..

Daksh;

she's different ..for sure..and he thinks ..so sweet and good at hrt..and let her know him as Daksh patwradhan not chintu ..atleast for few days.

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He leaves from there smiling..First rushes to notice board to chk the note on dance cls..

Daksh ; kal last date..kya karu?..directly jaake pay karu..naa😲..kisi ne usse batadiya tho..??..paise MO karu kya?..pata nhi time par pahuchenge ya nahi agar kal tak nahi mila tho...risk nahi le saktha..hmm .jaakar khud dedu chintu ne diya bolke...bilkul nahi..daksh tu tho jhoot nahi bolsaktha aur uske saamne tho pakada jayega...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Iss tarah janaab khayal main khoye huye hain...just then

Rajjev; kiske khayol main doobey huye ho daksh patwradhan...settles besides him..

Daksh; aisa kuch nahi ..after few sec..rajjev ..tu ladies hostel main kisi ko jaanta hain kya?..matlab mujhe na

Rajeev;(lil shock )😲😲😲..tu aur ladies hostel??...teri tabiyat teek hainna(chking out for fever)..looking at dakshu ka exp..he smiles and says..okk..bol...no more mazaq

Daksh ;..woh..woh mujhe naina ka room number chahiye..

Rajjev;ohhh..bhabhi ka...ab samaj aaya..(goes lil close and slowly says) kahi raat ko chori chupke snneak in karne ka irada tho nahi..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Daksh ; aisa kuch nahi usse kuch bhejna hain

Rajjev; kya?..love letter?❀️.daksh says nahi ..

Rajeev;.greeting card..bouquet..

Daksh; (apne aap main)

just money ...no..a thnk u card and bouquet would be good...

Daksh; haan ..

 Rajeev;daksh ..kya 360 degree turn maara tumne ek dumm saadhu se romantic hero bangaya 🀣... itna romantic kab se hogya hain re.

Daksh about to say something...

.Rajeev;ha ha pata hain sab bhabhi ka pyar ka jaadu hain...

..Daksh ;hogaya! ab ye bakwaas bnadh kar aur sun...clas khatam hote hi kahi bhag mat jaana...saath main chalte hain..pehle ye bata ki room number kaise pta chalega

Rajeev; tu uski fikr mat kar...cls kahtam hone tak poora address tere paas hoga..hamara network hi kuch aisa hain

 Daksh ;ab chale..

Dono cls main gaye

Cls khatam hogaya...

greeting shop...daksh pics up a thank u card.. and then takes one more cover usme paise daalke

Rajjev ; paise kyu?

Daksh busy in wrtitng on card ; woh teri bhabhi..😳.stops for a min I mean naina ki dance cls ke liye

Rajeev; patting on shoulder ; kya baat hain..abhi se honewaali biwi ki kharche uta raha hain...lage raho beta..lage raho..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Daksh gives a killer look aur rajjev chup ho jaata hain..phir

Daksh and rajjev at bouquet shop..

Bouquet shop...

Daksh looking at bouquet

Daksh ; yaar tujhe kya lagta hain naina ko ye pasand aayega...

Rajjev; mujh se kya pooch raha hain..tujhe pata hogana bhabhi ki pasand..

Daksh finally after long selection settles for one..and then..sab kuch arrange karke..hogaya!..bas ab ye naina tak pahuch jaaye..address laya tu?

Rajjev; tu tension mat le...hojayega..aur ye kya..chintu...ab ye kaun hain ??...

Daksh ; usko pata nahi chalna chaiye ki maine bheja hain..aur chintu mera nic name tu agar kisi ko pata chala ...

Rajeev; hmm ab samaj aaya secret surprise ..wow..cool..aur pata nahi chalega chintu ji..I mean daksh..

Tho delivery ka order deke ..both leave from there after daksh repaets number of times ki aaj raat tak mil jaana chaiye

On the way

Daksh; yaar pata kaise chalega ki naina ko mila ya nahi

Rajjev; ladkiyon ka doosra naam hota hain BBC...poora hostel main na halla machega  ..pata chal jayega..tune itne pyar se bheja hain tho paaka milega bhabhi ko..

Finally dono gaye apne ghar

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AYI aska daksh ki..kya hua naina ko ghar bulana etc etc..daksh says very soon he will bring her but he just want to give her a surprise..he asks ayi baba.to not to tell naina who chintu is...and money usne de diya aur tahnsk u card bhi bheja...

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Naina 's room

Riya & Naina.looking at bouquet..like some detectives with look of suspicion

Riya;kahi iss main bomb tho nahi...hum dono ko udane ke liye🀣

Naina; Hmm..hosaktha hain time bomb..jo abhi 10 scond main blast hojayega..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Riya; kya??????(in panicky voice)😲😲

Naina;(looking at riya) brks int laugh and says tu jitni jaldi films dekhna bandh karegi utna acha hoga tere sehet ke liye..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.

Riya; dara diya tune mujhe and later looking at bouquet

Riya; naina..iss main card bhi hain jaldi jaldi kholna

Naina; rukh..dekh rahi hoona...(opening card)..kaun ho saktha hain..

she opens the card..and reads the msg...

Riys; OMG!..Chintu ..chintu ne bheja tumhe ..how sweet aur ek aur cover hain..

Naina snatches cover from her hand nd opens and finds money

Riya ; usne paise bhi return kiya...kitna sweet hain woh..haina naina

Naina; looking at card; hmm ..sweet tho hain...picks up her mobile and dials baba's number...

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Dinner time..

Sa table par baba ka phone baja...

Baba picks the call; kaun ...arey Naina beta

Daksh just chokes his food...

Ayi; chintu sambhalke..gives him water... and says ; aho mujhe bhi baat karna hain

Baba; signalling her to wait ; ab  vibha bilkul teek hain..aur dawayi bhi time pe le rahi hain..oh chintu ne paise de diya

Naina; kya jaroorat hain uncle iski

Baba; arey ye kaise padne waali bachi ho tho koi na koi jaroorat hogina...rukho vibha baat karti hain..Phone ayi ko dete hain

Daksh ; apne aap mai ; ab woh kahegi ki mujhse baat karegi..mian kaun hu jaan ne ke liye ...kaise mana karu kahi mera awaaz pehchan liya..tho

Iss tarah dakshu apni thinking process main busy and listening to ayi convo with naina...

Ayi ; Naina kaise ho tum ..main teek hu beta...haan haan tabiyat ka khyal rakh rahi hu..aur dawaiyan bhi ..agar hosake tho ek baar ghar aajaana...main chintu se kehdungi aakr tumhe lekar aaye...khana ho gaya tumhara..acha beta tu bhi yan rakh apna aur ache se padayi karna..aur haan aana jaroor ek baar

Meanwhile Daksh preparing him self and thinking of what to spk...just then

ayi;good night beta...

Daksh ; wth goodnight??...she did nt even think of saying thank u personally..usne poocha bhi nahi..mere baare main...aise kaise..kya usko jara sa bhi interest nahi ye jaan ne ki chintu kaun hain ..aur main yaha usko mana karna ka soch rahatha...*sigh*

Ayi; chintu bahut acha kiya tune paiso ke saath naina ko thak u card bhi diya...aur bouquet bhi ..usne tujhe thanku bolne ko kaha...

Daksh ; oh finally poocha!.and says ayi  woh aur kuch nahi poocha usne mere baare main ki...mujh se baat karegi ya aur kuch..

ayi serving baba ; nahi..aur kya poochna hain?...khaana khale..aue jitne jaldi hosake ek baar gahr leke aana usse..

Daksh ; bahut jaldi le avunga ayi...bahut jaldi...thinking y he was disapponited ki Naina ne nahi poocha uske baare main...

hostel

Riya; naina tune chintu se baat karsakthi thi na at least awaaz sunti ..naam tho jaan ti ..kyu nahi poocha

Naina; decorating bouquet and card besides her bed; kyunki..maine aunty ke liye phone kiya aur agar chintu ke baare main poochthi tho yahi lagta na ki maine chintu se baat karne ke liye kiya...ab tho baatein hoti hi rahenge ..aaram se poochenge..tu kyu itna tension le rahi hain...chodna ab chalo sojaate hain

Riya; matlab tu chintu main interested nahi hain ..uss DP par hi😳😳

Naina; offo  beech main daksh ko kyu laa rahi hain...chintu kaun hain mujhe bhi jaan na hain ..aur main jaan ke rahungi..bhaut jaldi..ab good night! pulls up her blanket and goes to sleep...

PH..

Daksh ka room

remembering naina's words

."..lekin ab maine sochliya ab main uske peeche nahi padungi bahut bhav deta hain...agar NB se dosti karna hain tho khud aayega..."

Daksh remembers all the moments when naina tried to be friendly with him and how he avoided her.. and now...y is he??


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