*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Wow, an amazing update Wiwy! Lovely story am enjoying this very much!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Superb 😊 Update soon 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: kritz11
Really cute story and I totally love the title!😆
Coming to the update, it was very nice and I enjoyed how the scenes of IPK have been re-arranged conveniently, everything was apt!
Looking forward to more nok-jhoks between Arnav and Khushi and thanx for the pm!
Btw buildering and black magic is seriously a deadly combination!😆

Hey kritz,thanks for liking😃

The original title was something else. Vani suggested I change it. So I owe this title to her! Thanks for liking it! Also the rearrangement of IPK scenes!😆 Okay will try to put in more nok jhoks for you!😉 Hi-Five on the deadly combination!😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: arshi-pooja
Hehe...bed purchasing...
So funny...
Thnx for pm

I am delighted you liked it😃 Thanks for commenting!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: RebeccaDaphne
Wow, an amazing update Wiwy! Lovely story am enjoying this very much!

Rebecca🤗

Jumping with joy to see you here again! You really enjoying?! Yes, yes, yes! I am dancing!

Thanks for your tips! They made all the difference!⭐️

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: arshi-sugi-ipk
Superb 😊 Update soon 😊

😃 Okay! Glad you liked!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

wow

nice and dfferent story

like the concept

of broken bed

that turn into a story of two people and bind them in one relationship

good start

loved all part

tfs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

It is so different from all other stories I have read! Very well done indeed!

I can't wait to read what happens next! I do hope you don't make us wait a lot xx

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Wah Wiwy Wah!!! awsome update dear suat and before i say anythings else, thanks you for keeping the essence of ASR the same with the smirks and sarcasm...it all makes our man soo yuummy.

loved the whole thing and how you incorporated little bits from the show like mamiji, the kanya puja and that line of mamiji about playinga cricket on the bedwa😆 wiwy, tussi great ho!!

looking fwd to next!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Nice story. I'm looking forward to reading more.

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