premar & rosid ff 'DESTINY' part 8 updt - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
i didnt like it man, i loved it oh God ur lines are so nice. thanx for english trans also
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very nice dear and thanks for pm😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanq for continuing dear...superb update...i loved the way roli confessed...sid's 4 woman dialogue n roli's tears wow fantastic...continue soon lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK U SO MUCH ANI DO CONTINUE
AND THIS UPDATE VERY NICE PREMER AND ROSID BOTH PARTS VERY NICE AWESOME UPDATE AND
I LOVE ALL ROSID CONVERSATIONS AND POOL KIDDING , CONFESSED ITS TOO NICE

AND SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLAY

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.loved ittt.waiting fr d nxt update.thanq fr pm
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wow amazing 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏
i like this so much 😛 😛 😛
so cute and i like most roli's confession 😳 😳 😳
lovely 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
waiting for next part


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GREAT UPDATE...👏👏👏 LIKE THIS VERY MUCH... ROSID ALWAYS CUTE...😳
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Akkuuu love u love u love u u knw my state now thnk u sooo much yaar thnx 2 radhu too thnx a lot m soo happy update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Anu and Radhu yaar for continuing ur FF 👏
really loved it and specially the songs u selected were nice and loved it and the way our hero Sid confesses his love to Roli was awesome and little bit funny also and hope we will get more of Rosid romantic and cute scenes in future 😳
thanks for ur PM and update next part soon yaar 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

As we are in home so becoming from boring we updated it. Hope you will like it. And sorry we couldn't replied to each comments. Thnks everyone.

Part 5

Simar is practicing in her dance class. She goes round and round and gets hit by prem. He holds her and smiling both starts dancing together and talks.

Simar: you dance well.

Prem: not better than you.

Both Smiles.

Prem: by the way!!! When you start dancing?

Sim: 7 years.

Prem: since 7 years????

Sim: no!!! I mean when I was 7 years old.

Both laughs.

Prem: I have something for you.

Simar stops dancing.

Sim: Gift??????? I love gifts. What's that?

Prem: 1 sec.

He goes and gets a packet. Simar opens it and finds a salwar suit.

Sim: wow!! It's beautiful.

Prem: I know. Now go home and get ready.

Sim: why?

Prem: what do you mean by why? Get ready and meet me in the park in 10 mins.

Sim: ok!

She turns but Prem didn't change his motion and keeps looking at simar. Simar looks at him ups her eyebrows followed by Prem.

Sim: what?

Prem: what?

Sim: would you mind dropping me at home.

Prem: oh!!! No!! No!! Not at all!! I will drop you. Let's go.

Sim: (smiling) k.

...

ROSID

Sid is working at some files. Roli is smiling looking at him. Sid notices it.

Sid: are you going to give my explanation in the meeting.

Roli: what?

Sid: are you going to give my description?

Roli: siddhant!!!!

Sid: not na. Then stop staring at me and concentrate on work.

Roli tried but is always distracted.

Roli: siddhant! I want to go out.

Sid: k. you can go.

Roli: with you.

Sid: excuse me! This is office and I am your Boss. You can't...

Roli: Excuse me!! Don't you remember? Just yesterday you proposed me.

Sid: I remember very well. But I always keep my professional and personal life apart. In office I am your Boss.

Roli: k. fine. Let's go out.

Sid: Roli...

Roli: now...

Sid: but...

Roli: now...

Sid: k. let's go.

Roli: so sweet! First you drop me at home then you too go home.

Sid: home. Why?

Roli: Mr. Stupid. You can't come with me with this suit boot Businessman costume. Get ready with some cool outfit and meet me in the park.

Sid: as you wish mam!

Roli: haha! Mam! That means I am your Boss?

Sid: k. baba you are my Boss.

...

ROSIM (HOME)

Roli reaches home and finds simar in front of dressing table. She is ready wearing the salwar gifted by Prem. Roli too gets ready and comes.

Rosim: (same time to each other) I am going out.

Both look each other and laughs.

Sim: k. Lock the house and go. I am leaving.

Roli: but didi if you returned first?

Sim: oh yaa!! I will have the duplicate key with me. K.

Roli: better.

Simar takes the key.

Roli: didi your dress is so beautiful. New naa?

Sim: Ah! Ya! Roli I am getting late. Bye.

Roli: bye!

...

PRESID (home)

Both reaches home at the same time.

Sujata: Prem! Siddhant! It's good you both came.

Prem: why maa? Any work?

Sujata: yes. Drop me and Mataji at the Temple.

Prem: Temple???? Maa... i...

Sid: yes Maa... he will definitely drop you at the temple. I have some urgent work I have to get ready. Bye!!

Prem: Ah!! Siddhant!!

Sujata: you will drop us naa Prem?

Prem: ya Maa sure!

...

PARK

Simar is waiting for Prem and near her, nearly 1 to 2 metres far Siddhant is waiting for Roli.

Simar: he is so late. He always comes on time!

Sid: this girl is never on time. Always late!

Both looks here and there and looks to the watch in every 5 secs.

Prem and Roli reach from different directions and are shocked to see Sid and Simar at one place. In confusion Roli runs and hides behind a tree and Prem goes under a bench. They look at them praying they must not come face to face.

Sid and Sim are looking to the watch again and again and all around.

Roli: for God sake! Don't look at each other!

That was the time when sid's eyes fall on Simar same as her. Both smiles. Roli hits her forehead with her palm.

Prem: for God sake! Don't talk to each other!

Sid comes to Simar.

Sid: I think both of us are waiting for someone.

Sim: I think the same.

Prem's head gets hit with the bench.

Prem then calls Simar.

Sim: hello! Where are you?

Prem: in the park. But where are you?

Sim: I am here too. But I can't see you.

Prem: I am at the backside gate. Come here.

Sim: oh! K. I am coming.

She ends her call and leaves. Prem too runs to the backside of the park. Seeing simar leaving, Roli goes to siddhant and hits her from the back.

Sid: aauuchh..!

Roli laughs.

Sid: 1st you comes late, the hits me, and now you are laughing...??

Roli: ok ok sorry.

Sid: it's ok.

Roli: so sweet!

Sid: this is for the last time Roli, don't say me sweet again.

Roli: that you are. Sweet sweet sweet!

Sid: Roli!

Roli: siddhant! Get me ice cream.

Sid: you are just...

Roli: I m amazing na... I know.

Sid: no. you are... disgusting!

Roli: (with an o expression) what???

Sid: nothing... let me bring ice cream for you.

He leaves smiling and Roli smiles too.

...

Simar is wondering for prem and he comes from behind.

Prem: hi!

Sim: I m not going to talk to you.

Prem: but why?

Sim: you made me wait.

Prem: just for this little thing??

Sim: little thing??? Prem, I was waiting for u since half an hour!

Prem: k baba sorry. Don't stay angry.

Sim: I am angry. You will have to do something for me.

Prem: I do it always. What do you want?

Sim: I will not tell you. You do yourself.

Prem: but... what will I do?

Sim: think yourself.

Prem: ah!!! Ice cream! I will get ice cream for you. You wait I am coming.

He leaves. And simar smiles. Simar goes and sit in a bench. She looks around and suddenly her eyes fall on Roli. She is sitting behind her in the same bench but opposite directions. She immediately rush from their and search for Prem. And Sid coming holding two ice creams in his hand suddenly he see Prem and ice creams slips from his hand and he runs from there.

Sid goes to Roli.

Sid: Roli. Come let's go.

Roli: why? Not now. And where is my ice cream?

Sid: Roli you will eat ice cream later on. Come let's go. Common, hurry up! (He holds Roli's hand and drags her)

Roli: siddhant!!! But why we will go now. We haven't spends some time together yet.

Sid: Roli we will spend time later on. (Dragging her).

Simar is waiting for Prem. Prem comes with two ice creams.

Prem: take Simar.

Sim: Prem. Let's go.

Prem: now?

Sim: yes.

Prem: but simar...

Sim: come let's go. (She drags him holding his hand.)

Prem gets a call.

Prem: simar wait!

Sim: no prem we haven't time to wait.

Prem: this call may be urgent.

Sim: k.

Simar stands leaving his hand. Sid is dragging Roli when suddenly Roli sees Simar is present now also. So she agrees to leave. Rosid goes out of the park. Prem ends his call and turn and get shocked to see Sid near the car. He too agrees to leave.

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ROSIM (house)

Simar reach house but Roli has already reached. She is in the kitchen. Roli looks at her and gets tensed.

Sim :( in mind- did she watch me??) roli...

Roli: (in mind- shit! Did she watch me??)Ah... yes didi...

Sim: what will you eat today??

Roli: anything.

Sim: ok. I'll cook palak paneer for you today.

Roli: k didi.

Sim: you go, I'll do it.

Roli: ok.

She turns to go.

Sim :( in mind) she didn't watch me!

Roli :( in mind) she didn't watch me!

Both become happy.

Roli: didi...!

Simar gets tensed.

Sim: yes...

Roli: nothing.

She leaves. Simar gives a high relief.

PRESID (OFFICE)

Sid is in the office, working at some files. But his mind was tensed thinking about Prem. Then Prem comes in.

Prem: (in mind- did he watch me??) Siddhant..!

Sid: ah.. yaa! What happened? (In mind- did she watch me??)

Prem: nothing, I just came to give you this file. Overlook once.

Sid: ok. I'll do it.

Prem: ah... siddhant... do you want to ask me something??

Sid: ask?? About what?

Prem: ah... about this project.

Sid: oh... no no, I'll manage.

Prem: ok. Then I am leaving.

Sid: yah!

Prem turns.

Prem: (in mind) he didn't watch me!

Sid: (in mind) he didn't watch me!

All are happy now!

Some days later

Door bells of bharadwaj house ring. Sujata opens the door.

Sujata: Namaste pandit ji.

Pandit: Namaste!

Mata ji: come in please!

They sit in the hall.

Mataji: pandit ji, I asked you to find girls for my grandsons...

Pandit: yes mataji, I am ready with it.

Presid comes from upstairs.

Mataji: really??? Who are they?

Pandit: my old friend Jamnalal, jamnalal dwivedi. His two daughters, they are really good for your family mataji, they are both beautiful by face, as well as heart...

Prem:(in mind) Jamnalal dwivedi... Simar's dad!

Sid: (in mind) Jamnalal dwivedi... Roli's dad!

Mataji: that's great panditji, what's their name??

Panditji: Simar, and Roli.

Prem and Sid becomes happy hearing their names.

Sujata: Roli, simar... so sweet names...

Mataji: that's right. Siddhant, prem, what do you say about this wedding?

Both: as you wish mataji.

Sujata: ok then. Let's go to them now.

Mataji: now???

Sujata: yes mataji, I can't wait more to see my daughter in laws.

Mataji: ok sujata bahu, we will go. Panditji, inform Mr. Dwivedi.

Panditji: ok mataji.

Prem runs to the terrace and Sid rushes to his room.

PREMAR AND ROSID ON PHONE

Simar: what?? They are coming here??

Prem: yes simar. They can come there at anytime.

Roli: but siddhant, for what purpose???

Sid: Stupid! Obviously for us yaar...

Simar: what???

Prem: yes. They are coming to fix our marriage simar.

Roli: really???? You are telling truth???

Sid: of course yes.. I m so so happy roli...

Simar: me too prem... our dream is going to be true...

Prem: yah... we waited so long for it...

Roli: hmm... but not more from now...

Sid: I can't wait more also...

Simar: at last we are going to marry...

Prem: we are going to be together...

Roli: we are going to live together...

Sid: we are going to be each other's...

All: For Ever...

Presid: I love you...

Rosim: Love you too...

All of them have tears of happiness and loving smile on their faces.

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To be continued...

Hope you like it... 😊

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