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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭 😭 ro rokar head ache hogaya muje
it was so heart wrenching
i just felt like i was seeing it in front of my eyes
hats off dear excellent job

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update nice cont soon...really emotional...thanks for pm...Arsh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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helloo everyone this is the last part of tum bin jau kaha... hope you like this one too...
and i really appriciate for your comments here... plz plz plz comments here...
thank you...

Part 3

In the hospital…. Raghu sir, koelo sir and rathod were waiting for Doctor khurana… Raghu sir who was reading news paper banged on the table and said, "ye reporters bhi koi mauka nahi chhodte… dekho arjun ke bare me kya chhapa hai, "patni ki hatya ke baad ACP ne hosh khoye"… kya milega in press walo ko ye sab chhapke…

Meantime Dr. Khurana entered there with his intern… he said to his intern, "ok liza mujhe abhi jana hoga… ek kam karo tum apni report mujhe dedo me padhke tumhe bataunga." And he started to talk to them

Dr. khurana: dekhiye ab wo shock se bahar aachuke hai… mene psychiatrist se bhi baat kit hi…. Unka kehna hai ki ACP arjun ab use state se bahar aachuke hai… yes he would very upset and could be depressed too but he is out of danger… to aap unki patni ka dahsanskar ke liye unhe le jaa shakte hai…..

Rathod: thank you doctor me kal hi uski dahsanskar ki taiyariya karwata hun…. (to Raghu sir) aap Arjun ko le aayega… mere ghar pe…

Raghu sir: tumhare ghar? Wo Arjun ki patni thi aur tum bhul rahe ho ek ladki ki doli uske mayke se zaroor uthti hai par arthi uske pati ke ghar se hi nikalti hai… aur fir Roshni ki doli bhi tumhare ghar se nahi uthi thi… kyunki tumne uski pasand ko thukra diya tha… aur use sare rishte tod diye the…. Mene aur Vandana ne uska kanyadan kiya tha…

Rathod(angry): kash ki usne meri bat mani hoti to aaj uska ye haal nahi hota…

Raghu sir: sahi kaha tumne… ye haal uska aaj nahi hota… usi din hogaya hota… mar deti wo khudko… Arjun se bichhadke… vandana ne sb kuchh pata lagwaya hai… pandit ji se milkar… kal 11 baje hum sab Arjun ke ghar pe milege… ummeed karta hun tum aaoge isebar…

Raghu sir just left from there and Rathod was staring him in anger…. He clinched his jaws…

Next day 11 oclock…. Arjun's home…. There were many people gathered there in white clothes… in side the house Roshni's body was laying down on the floor… she was dressed as bride… she had worn her marriage sari and jewllery… 17 years old girl were crying by putting her head on her mother's shoulder… and her mother was also crying…

Flashback….

Roshni: sheen…. Sheen kya hua? Itne gusse me kyun ho?

Vandana: dekh na Roshni jab se aayi hai tab se gusse me muh fulakar bethi hai… kisi se baat nahi kar rahi…

In the meantime Arjun and Raghu sir came there… they both looked at Sheen who was really angry…

Arjun (went to sheen): Sheen… dekh I am sor…

Sheen: mujhe na aapse aur papa se baat hi nahi karni… pata hai bhabhi inhone kya kiya… bhaiya mere friend ki party me aaye aur waha me apne ek dost ke sath dance kar rahi thina to unhone mere dost ko sab ke samne dhamkaya… aap ko pata hai ab mera koi friend nahi banega… waha kitni isult hui meri… ab sab log darege unse… aur in sab ka mastermind kaun hai pata hai? Papa… unhone hi bahiya ko bheja tha….

Roshni: arjun aap bhi na… dekhiye aap sorry boliye use… aur wada kijiye aage se aisa nahi karege… yaad rahe sheen meri bahen hai aur use kabhi koi takleef na hone paye… kyunki wo pareshan hoti hai na to mujhe bilkul achcha nahi lagta… ab maf kardo na arjun aur uncle ko…

Sheen: theek hai maf kiya lekin sirf bhabhi ke kehne pe… yaad rahe…

Present time…

Those memories brought more tears in her eyes… sheen said to herself, "aap ko to meri takleef nahi dekhi jati thi, par ab to me ro rahi hun… kya aap mere aansu pochhne nahi aaoge bhabhi…. Plz wapas ajaiye na… I miss you…" Vandana also couldn't control her tears today… she was looking at Roshni… and remembered Roshni's padfera's day…

Arjun brought Roshni to Raghu sir's house… and Vandana did aarti for both of them… then she gave different presents to Roshni that she had bpught for her… roshni saw all those and got emotional…

Roshni: ye sab kya aunty… me ye nahi le shakti…

Vandana: are ispe tera haq hai… beti hai tu humari…

Raghu sir: roshni jaise humare liye sheen hai waise hi tum ho… Arjun ke rup me ek beta to tha hi aaj tumhare rup me ek aur beti mil gai… lelo humara ashirwad hai ye…

Roshni touched Vandana's feet and said, "aaj mujhe apni mom ki kami mehsoos nahi ho rahi… agar wo hoti tab bhi aap ke jitna nahi kar pati… thank you aunty"… and she hugged her…

Then she touched Raghu sir's feet and hugged him… Raghu sir said, "humesha khush raho"… Vandana said, " aji ye kahiye sada suhagan raho"….

Vandana came back from those sweet memory… she thought, "kahi wo sada suhagan ka ashirwad roshni ke liye saap to nahi ban gaya… meri abchchi… chali gai… use ashirwad ka man rakhke"…. And she cried…

Arjun came there… he was very vvery sad… he had blue jeans and white kurta on… he came inside and sat next to Roshni's head… he touched her face with teary eyes… didn't say anything just his tears rolled down from his eyes… then he hold her hand and kissed on her hand and cried… he didn't say a word but his tears were spoken a lot… by holding her hand. He was shooking his head…. Like he wanted to tell her, "no.. no… don't go Roshni"… Everyone was sad… kids from Roshni's school also came there and all the kids put a flower on her body… all the kids were crying too… no one could understand Arjun's pain, his sorrow and his lost… he had lost his life… he needed someone who could understand him and supported him… he needed his friend rathod the most tight now… and Rathod were standing behind him and was watching his sister laying down there on the floor and his eyes also got moisten….he was there too but not with him… both of them ego were not allowed them to got closer to eachother and the link who could connect them is broke…. Moreover Rathod thought that Arjun is responsible for Roshni's death…

Panditji came there… he asked arjun to get ready with all jewllery and his "suhag nishani"… he gave Arjun 'sindoor' to put in roshni's maang… arjun remebered his wedding day when he was putting sindoor in her maang… Roshni had closed her eyes and arjun was happy…. Then panditji gave 'mangalsutra'…. Arjun tied to her body… and had flashback of his wedding day where he was tieing 'mangalsutra' to her… arjun was smiling and roshni was blushing and had lowered her gaze… then arjun made her wear 'chudiya' on both of her hand and payals too…then he put gnagajal and rice puffs in her mouth… and he covered her head by putting 'chunari' on her… then arjun hugged her body and cried loudly…. "nahi roshni…. Mat jao… mein nahi reh shakta tumhare bina…. Nahi jane de shakta"…. Then panditji came and siad, "dekho beta… sambhalo apne aapko… kyunki jo ise dharti pe ata hai uska jana to nishchit hai… mrityu ek satya hai… jise koi nahi bach shakta… iske sath tum sab ka safar yahi tak kat ha… jo pura ho gaya aur wo chali gayi… tum himmat mat harna shayad bhagwan ne tumhari kismat me kuchh aur behtar likha hoga… kyunki wo kabhi apne bachcho ko akela besahara nahi chhodata…" arjun left roshni's body and wiped his tears and said, "mujhe uspe wishwas hi nahi hai… roshni bahut manti thi… me inka tyag karta hun"…. Pandit said, "aap logo ko inke akhri darshan karne ho to kar lijiye… iske baad inhe lejana hoga"… everyone came there with joining thie hand as praying and lower their head to roshni's bodies… as panditji's order Rathod, Raghu sir, and 2 more men gave support of Roshni's 'arthi' and arjun was walking at front of roshni's arthi with 2 pots… oneis clay pot and othere had burning homa in it… as they carried roshni's arthi, everyone started flowers showering to roshni's arthi and Raghu sir, Vandana, Sheen, and Rathod remebered the good times they all had with Roshni… Arjun remembered his wedding day where everyone was showering flowers on them when they were taking 7 feras around the agnikund…. Arjun had held her hand tightly… he remebered all the vows that they took during the phere… that made Arjun cry more… he was unable to walk but he did with tears in his eyes… many police men were there in roshi's funeral along with inspector Chandrakant Patil, and tech expert Shree….They were taking her to the 'samshan ghat'….

On the road people were giving respect to the funeral… people lowered their head and joined their hands to it… there was one girl who joined her hands, lowered her head and closed her eyes… and one flower from roshni's arthi fell on her…. she said, "job interview jate hue… kisi ki arthi dekhi… aur yel flower bhi gira… goodluck hua… lagta hai ye research department me aaj to job mil hi jayegi… kuchh sal bad field me aajaungi…" she was daydreaming … then suddenly she said to herself, "itni bhi mat udo Ms. Riya mukherjee…. Abhi to sirf interview hi hai… kher… bhagwan unki aatma ko shanty de"…

Arjun took clay pot with water on his shoulder then hole in it and took 3 rounds around roshni's chita… then he dropped the pot and gave fire to her chita… now roshni's body was burning with that chita… arjun's eyes filled with tears… he was crying and crying then he sat near her chita… whole day until her chita was burning…. Then he went to beach and ssat there for whole night without sleeping… becoz whenever he tried to close his eyes he got flashes of that horrible night when roshni died… so he was just sitting near the shore with empty eyes…. He didn't have anything left in his heart… no happiness, no dreams, no hope, no feelings…he stopped smiling, and being happy…hestarted to live in alone… he only had one thing left that is revenge… revenge to Sikander who had killed his Roshni... in order to revenge with him, he became out of control…. He got angry and irritated so easily… started absent on duty and searched for Sikander by himself…. And lost his control toward the criminals and ended up beating them to death…. one month after roshni's death, Arjun was able to caught Pathan Lala because of the help of some informers who was undercover officer- Aishha, however he didn't know who gave that information…. he was interrogating PathanLala, Arjun lost his tempered and he beaten him so much in the jail and also broke his one leg… so after that Pathan lala had to put wooden leg on his right feet… becoz of that incident he was suspended and disqualified from the post of ETF chief… within a year Raghu sir also took early retirement and Dustin Koelo became police commissioner of Mumbai Police… and Arjun didn't keep in touch with Raghu sir or his family… he never came back to his house… and he started to live in Ravi lodge… and they made Rathod as a chief of ETF… and he hired Chhotu and Shree in the ETF team… Arjun's behavior was becoming rude everytime… so he used to get suspended a lot, and now they kept Arjun in minister's security but over there he was being Dabaang and gave problem to all the ministers… whenever he was suspended, he started search for sikander on his own… this was became his routine for last 3 years, and that was changed on 11th August 2012, when he came back to ETF and worked with his lost friend Rathod, and met Riya…. He was called on the request of Raghu sir whose daughter was kidnapped and he wanted Arjun Rawte for his daughter's investigation…. And after that he stayed in the ETF as a second command of chief and having love and hate relationship to Rathod…

thats it guys... this is the last part... plz plz plz leave your comments here...

thank you



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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Tht was really emotional.
Cudnt stop my tears...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi apti🤗... awesome work dear...so emotional update...hatts off to u👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anki di
told ya pehle hi...
take a bow pls
i m crying
lov it
thanku
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
it was emotional and it was awsome the flower scene was nicely written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
beautiful update!!!!

loved it...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
so emotional update dear!
it made me cry…
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
amazing what a story
its out of the world update
plz continue

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