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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

FIrst part Awosm

n res for 2nd Done

Awosm update 😆😆 OS😉

Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

AMAZING OS dear

loved the way u portrayed her pain..his pain...his reasons...

The flashbacks were adorable...the letter was heart wrenching...

Loved the flow...u r such a versatile writer..

Please keep showering such beautiful pieces on us

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

res... 😊😊

unres 😊😊

my god it was beautiful

the way it was written 😃😃

good job 👏👏👏

and specially the flash backs 😊😊

sharon's emotions

her POV

her priced possessions...

wow!!!!

im literally mesmerized right now

swayam's POV

how much he was suffering... 😭😭😭

and last but not the least the letter ❤️

it was magical

and the ring scene

and the end

💔

amazing OS
loved it to the core...

thank your for the pm
write more
and do pm me😊😊

Edited by spongy - 12 years ago

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

I really dont knw u bt i m in luv with ur writing...this os to b frank has nthng special bt still has tht affect on reader tht he / she cant control her emotion...thnk u so much fr so lovely piece f writing...

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome os...

its so heart touching...loved it to the core

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow..

that was really beautiful...

you have a some serious skill..

because they way you write it just has the reader hoked on to the story...

a great job!!!

seriously amazing..

and heart touching...

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome piece of work.. Lovely os.. Both the chapters were amazing..

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was so awesome..
it was simply out of the world...
totally heart breaking 😭
and the name of the OS is out of the world.. actually that is the base of the story.. "Goodbye My Love"... 😭
i felt so awesome while reading it...
it was heart touching.. you made me cry so bad 😔 😭
and the last letter by Swayam.. Damn!!! that was so awesome.. each and every word touched my heart 😭
you wrote it amizingly
hats off!!! 👏
I become a fan of your writting seriously!!! 🤗