||ArIya|| Souls Separation[Chapter2-Page18]

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Story Prologue:

Story prolouge

Eye kahani Zindegii se judi hain...humse judi hain...dosti pyar se judi hain...

Iss zindegii main kitni mulakatein hote hain..kuch log anjaan hii reh jate hain..use bhi anjaan hii rehna tha..paar ek mulakat ke baad dusra..dusre ki baat tisra...humain dost banaya..paar shayed dosti main shayed kuch aur hii chpii thi...
wo chupii huyii feelings ki kahani..do dil milte milte bicharne kii kahanii...Ek dost pyar ko khone ki dard aur phir use ubhar neki koshish..phir usi main girjana...ehii zindegii ka niyam hain...

And stay tune to know more...


To Be Continued''..


Here is two main character ...


Riya Mukharjee


Arjun Suryekant Rawte

Hope you all are enjoy it...😳

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Chapter 1:


Ek ladki Apne window ke paas apne haat main coffe ki mag leke khari hain'Bahar barish ho rahi hain..shayed andar bhi..apne hat se coffe ki mag table main raakhke ' apnii akhon main ansu liye do haat window se nikalte huye barish ko apne haat main le rahii hain'

Ladki ko bohot der se uski ghar ki kaamwali bai dekh rahi thi'kuch der taak aise dekhne ke baad bai: madam ji mujhey jana hain'kiya huya appko??main jayuun???

Paar wo ladki jawab nehi de rahi eye dekh bai apna haath uss ladki ki kandho pe rakhte hain aur bolta hain main aaj ehii rukh jao kiya..??

Taabhi woladki kahi khoye huye bolte hain: Haan tumharii marjii'

Bai: app kisiko yaad kar rahe hain kiya???

Ladki kahi khoye haan..shayed kisiko miss karti hoon..

Bai: kisko yaad kar rahe the'

Ladki: hum kabhi mile the'dost bane the..pher'.

Bai: pher!!

Ladki:Hamara  mulakat waise toh nehi huyi thi jaise hero heroin ka hota hain..jaise maine socha tha'ki mere sapne jaise koyii ayenge aur mujhey use pyar hogii..phir shadi'.

Main bhi naa kaha se kaha pohoch jati hooo''..choro eye baatein...

bai: kiya huya madam jii..boliye na apko assa lagega...

Ladki kuch sochke: Socha tha eye baat kabhi kisiko nehi batayungi..pher aaj aise laga ki kisiko batana chahiye mujhey kyun ki shayed kisika jaannna bhi jaruri hain'Shayed mujhey uske baad kuch assa mehsus hoo'.

Hum mile the.. Achanak'aur hum mile toh aisa laga ki hum ek minuite ke liye bhi ek dusre ko bardash nehi karpaenge'use milne ke baad mera toh aisa hii manna tha'mene vagwaan se mangi bhi ki zindegi main kabhi bhi phir uss insaan se meri mulakat na hoo'..

Paar vaagwaan wo toh vaagwaan hain..wo toh apna hii karte hain'humara mulakat phirse huyiii aur isss baar meri eye galatphaimi dur huyii ki hum ek miniute ke liye bhi saath nehi reh sakti..Uss dusrii mulakat main hum ek minitue 15 miniute nehi puri ki puri seven hours Saath thi'

Aur kitni jhagra huyii phir dhire dhire baat shuru huyii..thori janna huya'tab jakar samajh ayaiii ki shayed wo itna bhi bura nehi jitna main sochti thi''

Aur iss mulakat ke baad mulakatein  hote gayiii..ek dusre ko thori tohri janne lage..dost bane..eye dosti barti gaye'ek dusre ke bina koyii kaam nehi hoti thi'ek dusre kuch bataye bina reh bhi nehi pate the'kuch paal aise the zindegi ki jaha baas hum the'kash wo din lout ati'kash saabkuch pehle jaisa hota..!!!!

Ekdusrese ek din bhi baat kiye bina reh bhi nehi pate the'aur tabhi hamare zindegi main aise tufan aye ki hum do kinare chaldiye..kuch aisa huya jisse hum bhikar ke tut gaye..saab tut gaya..hamara dosti chin gayii hum se'vaagwaan ne chin li'''.

Ekdusre se itne dur chali gayi jaha se baas ek dusre ko baas yaad hii kiya jaa sakte hain'jaha baas hamare saath yaadein thii..hamesha uska yaad aye mujhey'pata nehi uske saath bhi aisa kuch huya tha ya nehi..!!!!

Ekdusre se dur jake eye samajh aya jise hum dosti ki rishte main bandke rakkha thi wo usse kahi barii thi'dil ki bohot kareeb thii'jaha ekbaar koyii aa jate hain toh uhase jane ka naam hii nehi leta'shayed wo insaan jindegi se chalii jai paar dilse??!!!! Kabhi nehi''

Soch hi liya tha ki phir kabhi hamari mulakaat nehi hogiii'janti thi kabhi milna nehi hoga..phir bhi soch ti thi agar kabhi mulakat ho jaye toh use meri dil ki baat keh dungii'Hamarii kabhi na hone wali mulakatein phirse huyii ek saal ke baad..aur hum aise mile ki kuch nehi keh payii..main baas dekhti gayii use..wo bhi meri taraf hii dekhrahi thi'pata nehi kiya dekh rahi thi..jo main dekh rahai thi wo ya kuch aur soch rahe the'

Mulakatein toh huyi paar baatein!!wo nehi ho paye..samay jaise samndar ki laher ki tarah kinare taak ate hii khatam hoo jate hain paar uska nishan chor jata hain'..waise hii huyii mere saath..shayed uske saath bhi...

Nahi maine use baatein ki..nahi usne kuch kaha 'Shayed wo mujhse baatein hii nehi karna chahte the..shayed use meri parwa hii nehi thi..shayed hamare bich ki dostii nehi jaan pehchan bhi nehi bachi thi'shayed hum anjaan banke bhi ek dusre se baat nehi karsaktethe'

Mulakatein khatam huyii..phir dono do rasste main chaldiye'phirse wohii pohoch gaye jaha hum anjaan the'Samay bitne lage din dhalte gaye'.samay ki dour main main bhi age barne lagi..shayed wo bhii'

Samay ke saath soch main bhi baadlav ayii..umeed jagi dil main..laga ki shayed uss din wo bhi mujhey kuch kehna chahta tha meri hii tarha kuch keh nehii paye jaise main kuch nehi keh payii'Lagne laga ki shayed main uss din chup na rehtii 'use bolta apne dil baat'vaagmaan se mangne lagi ek aur baar mulakaat ho jaye..iss baar main use batayungii'.paar'..!!

Bai: Paar memsahib abhitak apki mulakat nehi huyii unse'

Ladki apne dukhmain haste huye: Vaagwaan se itne mangne ke baat itne saaloon ke baat mulakaat huyii..paar aise ki ajj bhi kuch keh hii nehi paye..ajj toh aise laga wo mujhey kabhi jaanti hii nehi thi'

Aur uski akhon se ansu nikal raha hain jo rukhne ka naam hii nehi le raha''


To Be Continued''.


Here is chapter one of Souls separation hope you all liked it..give your feedback please..wiating for your feedback...😳😳😳


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nice start dude.. Loved it.. Continue..Edited by unishaz - 10 years ago
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loved  ur concept!
it is very nice
superb title
and memory ! wov😉

i think she is riya and dt person is ajun😆
Edited by lizadavidmm - 10 years ago
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res** edited

love it
nice update
continue soonEdited by ...amanvirdi... - 10 years ago
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wow superb concept mou...!!!
prologue is very  interesting...!!
and the update was super duper awsum...!!!
omg aisa kya hua ki both separated...!!!
feeling so bad for the girl who is telling all this...!! she is riya right?
continue soon...!! eagerly waiting for the next part...!!
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Awesome concept... Edited by Leki - 10 years ago
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amazing concept moumi :) loved it
seems like that girl is riya and she is talking about arjun
love the way she was telling bai about her meets with that guy
feeling really bad for the girl ðŸ˜­
banner is awesome
can't wait to read more
continue soon