ArShi OS#15: Jiss Pe Hum Mar Mitay..(Completed) - Page 3

it was beautiful and realistic too

Awesomeee os...
Totally loved it...
It's been long since u gave us a new os.. And this os turned out to be a beautiful one like always..
I so love the way you add song to the one shot.. It makes os perfect..
Wow concept was too good..
Never imagined Arhi as a film jodi.
Hence i really enjoyed imagining them so. Khushi's long love finally reciprocated and Arnav's realization was shown so nicely..
And the fake kissing scene which then changed to real one was awesome hehe..
You always make me feel like not to stop scrolling down when reading and i hate it when the story ends as don't want to stop reading..
plz do update a new OS soon.. :)
A big thanks for the PM ...Edited by Pari93.9 - 11 years ago

OMG!

This has to be one of the best One Shots I have ever read. <3<3<3
Well conceptualised. <3<3

Wow that's a wonderful OS!!
I have a feeling that this story is like a ff not a OS!!
Really Loved the story,, beautifully written..
Great job dear

Originally posted by: Pari93.9

Awesomeee os...
Totally loved it...
It's been long since u gave us a new os.. And this os turned out to be a beautiful one like always..
I so love the way you add song to the one shot.. It makes os perfect..
Wow concept was too good..
Never imagined Arhi as a film jodi.
Hence i really enjoyed imagining them so. Khushi's long love finally reciprocated and Arnav's realization was shown so nicely..
And the fake kissing scene which then changed to real one was awesome hehe..
You always make me feel like not to stop scrolling down when reading and i hate it when the story ends as don't want to stop reading..
plz do update a new OS soon.. :)
A big thanks for the PM ...

yup...its been like 4 months since i wrote an OS...
but am glad u guys remembered me n loved this os too...
thank you dear...actualy those songs give me the idea of that os...so its unfair if i took the whole credit of that idea😉
i m glad u find something new in this os...
haha...fake kissing scene ko real banana arnav ka kaam tha
i will try to write next os super soon...
take care dear😳

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

OMG!

This has to be one of the best One Shots I have ever read. <3<3<3
Well conceptualised. <3<3

thanku so much dear😳
thanku...glad u liked this os😃

Originally posted by: Sona257

Wow that's a wonderful OS!!
I have a feeling that this story is like a ff not a OS!!
Really Loved the story,, beautifully written..
Great job dear

thanku so much dear
am glad that u liked this os 😃

Lovely story.

Beautiful os
Lovely
😃

very unique story a new idea  little cute little romantic i must says all in one