Arhi OneShot |Bedside Manners| - Page 4

Awesome OS..

Things like this should crop into your head more often! This was a hilarious read. Loved it 

Awesome conversation... This concept was too gud that u could use it for a new college based story

Awesome dear
It was hatka...but awesomely wholesomely good
Thanks for writting

Ohkay... Edited by AngelTeen - 10 years ago

I have butterflies in my stomach and a stupidly wide grin on my face right now. 

Loved the OS! 

That was super adorable ... really loved reading this OS !

something new from your regular style but me likey! a furious khushi dealing with an infuriating arnav was damn funny... just had a field day reading his quips... the repartee was awesome: You look kind of dangerous – and deranged but in an adorable way - this naughty raizada is cute! agree with him about khushi's impressive vocabulary... despite that, she was often left speechless by his retorts, which is a nice change from the garrulous khushi we are so used to! the flustered yet feisty khushi not giving in easily to arnav is adorable: 'Oh, man up. That was your uninjured arm. And you call yourself an athlete.'  Awww, that was such a desperate plea: 'Honestly! How am I going to get you to believe me?! What do I have to do?' just loved the gentle and patient manner of arnav making khushi understand his true feelings… And the only person with whom I never have to worry about said reputation is you… that just says it all! and the conclusion left me grinning ear to ear! the title is spot on! a pretty amazing intro to your wicked sense of humor!

Nafisa this was one of the cutest OS I ever Read :) A clueless Khushi is a damn cute Khushi ...  Arnav had to explain her so much to convey that she is his girlfriend and he is interested in her 😆  Poor Fella !!! This is so different from what you usually write But indeed a fabulous one . I totally loved it !!!! Thanks a ton for the PM :)