Arhi OneShot |Bedside Manners| - Page 2

😆 They are absolutely incorrigible ... 

Thanks ... that was cute ... 

I love AU's in college/school SPECIALLY. I really liked how the whole thing was written in dialogues and had virtually no description except for what the two of them were saying to each other.

The progression of their relationship was delightful and I could visualize it perfectly through their conversation-- the years of bickering and banter and crushing secretly on each other.

So CR, prefect, football captain AND a romantic? Where can I get one?

I use big words in daily speak too if it helps!

Khushi's obtuseness was hilarious as was Arnav's frustration.

This was a change from your usual style and I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Completely different from you way of writing but thid was brilliant!! 

So funny and adorable...loved it!

You should definitely write more like this...

Great os!

i loved the os!!>...the writing style with jus dialogues n no description was amazing!!...

n jus with the dialogues i was able to visualise all their tym together...arnav's teasing, flirting n khushi being clueless n their relationship!!>...

some parts were real funny!! n i loved it!!...

p.s : did i mention, i loved it!!😉

Arnav and khushi are just so adorable and cute,

Arnav trying to confess his feelings to Khushi was just superb,

Khushi being so feisty and her crazy self was brilliant, 

Loved the one shot and amazing writing.

Update was written exceptionally and perfectly well, 

Thanks for the PM xx 

 

You should seriously try this type of writing more.

 

Thanks.