Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ] - Page 9

HEY MINTY THAT WAS AWESOME. POOR KHUSHI. SHE IS SO HURT AND POOR ARNAV AS WELL TRYING ALL WAYS TO KEEP KHUSHI. PLEASE PM ME WHEN U UPDATE NEXT. LOVE READING YOUR UPDATES. TAKE CARE

AND THANKS VANDANA FOR LETTING ME KNOW ABOUT THE 2ND UPDATE. HUGS

Originally posted by: Afya

Mints, That was superb 👏. But then your writing always is.😊

Loved how strong Khushi is...a woman who knows her worth. But she is hurt and broken...the more the love, more the pain...can very much relate to how she goes into a shell (with regards to Arnav)...and yet yearns for him. It's indeed very hard to forget someone you have loved so dearly.

Loved the bit where Anjali asks for Khushi's forgiveness...indirectly on behalf of her brother. Anjali knew Arnav was wrong but she also could understand how her brother lost all his sense when it came to his love/sense of responsibility for her...

I like the calm and composed Arnav...he for once, seems to be using his head to think things through. If he had done this sometime ago, he would have saved so much anguish.

Love how you wrote his inner thoughts...His pain and guilt is obvious. 

Love how he noticed the lost sparkle in her eyes.

You have a long way to go, Mr Raizada to win her over. You had wronged her terribly.

And Anjali, now it's your turn to help your brother. 

Mints, Loved it. ❤️

I am never a fan of sad stories but this story needed to be told. The wrongs have to be made right. Thank you for that.😊

Edited by mints23 - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Afya

Looks like you are busy writing the sin epilogue. Can't wait for more from you.😊

Originally posted by: SPraba

HEY MINTY THAT WAS AWESOME. POOR KHUSHI. SHE IS SO HURT AND POOR ARNAV AS WELL TRYING ALL WAYS TO KEEP KHUSHI. PLEASE PM ME WHEN U UPDATE NEXT. LOVE READING YOUR UPDATES. TAKE CARE

AND THANKS VANDANA FOR LETTING ME KNOW ABOUT THE 2ND UPDATE. HUGS

Originally posted by: mints23

Well, frankly Afya I am busy writing a new story!! 

Andar ki khabar hai... Don't tell anyone... 😉

Thank u so so much for continuing this Mints dear 🤗 It was a rocking one as always darling...My heart goes out for Khushi more, but then Arnav also, poor boy 😭  Hope that Anjali's hope becomes a reality soon...

Amazing update!  Hope you update again soon!

Lovely and soulful. Loved the strength that all the women exhibited. And the strong silence of Arnav. Hoep springs eternal that the magnets wll find their way towards each other, more sooner than later 😊

I have read first part n now i came to know that u have decided to continue it...After completing Seven sin series last night i have become ur fan...U write amazing...waiitng for epilogue of that story... N this part is just amazing...infact both parts are gut wrenching n just waiting for happy ending...Khushi is right in her opinion but Arnav should be given a second chance...Update soon Mints...

That was an super awesome update.