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Edited:OMG, Mints. That was just superb. I could feel their pain as if it was mine.You are a terrific writer.👏Khushi's pain is so understandable. Again in the show, She was seen begging him to give a chance to prove her truth even after all this. It's as if she has no self respect. You have dealt with her disappointment in a realistic way. Any woman would be broken after all that.I am glad he realised his mistake in your story.I was shocked when he didn't use his head to put two and two together in the show after she told him the truth. He was supposed to be an intelligent guy.I very much hope you continue this story. Can't wait to read more.
SHATTERED (by Khushi)
Smiles and blushes – a few moments stolen-
Some tender, some full of fierce passion!
An unspoken emotion, so new, it had yet to grow…
Moving slowly, to one another, in a dance so slow.
When there arose a spectre from the past,
In a flash, my dreams broken, I became an outcast.
Ignoring the pain, I asked him why?
My questions, with an answer, he did not dignify.
I waited, I smiled, slowly mending fences broken that night;
All the while, breaking inside slowly, 'twas my plight.
My breath, my life, the man for whom my heart beat-
At last, telling me, he thought me a cheat??!!
Those precious moments I cherished so much
His looks, his smiles, his very touch –
Always being there, whenever I did fall
Did it all really mean nothing at all?
Was it all just a clever ruse, a trick, a ploy?
Was his love just a mere decoy?
Love and trust must go hand in hand,
Or else will slip through our fingers, like sand.
My heart breaks from the very pain,
Of having loved this man, all in vain.
Tears trickle down, fury comes now, no more words-
He never cared, he never shared, 'tis silence that hurts…..
Suddenly, my breath, my every sense knows he is here
But what is this now? I feel no fear….
A pain so deep, it has bled me out
Empty now, so cold – there's not a doubt.
I look at him, there's naught left in me,
I am now as bare, as a wintry tree.
Broken and destroyed, I am, to my very soul
Shattered – mayhap, never again whole….
REGRETS (By Arnav)
A rage so strong, only harm could it do
Walking away, emotions bubbling in a brew.
One memory that hurts, that makes me bleed
So much that to her, I paid no heed.
Faint whispers of other memories come,
Telling me truths, that turn me numb.
I should have known, I should have guessed,
Eyes so guileless, her love I should have trusted.
She gave me joy, even when I gave her pain;
In me, she put her trust, to love in sun or rain.
Bits here and bits there, the facts are now so clear,
My mind so sharp, usually ' now draws back in fear.
Undeserving of her love, I certainly am,
Caused her pain, so deep and so often.
So badly now, do I need to make it up to her
Not just now, our entire lives, until forever'.
I wish to give her the very world,
Never again to hurt her by deed or word.
For her, only for her, I will try with all my might
Her life, and her pain, I have to set it right!
All alone now she sits, do I dare?
To show her anew, how much I care?
She stirs now, I know she knows that I am here.
Her eyes, her beautiful eyes'.they are so clear.
Empty now'..blank'of all that I hold dear.
No! My heart, my soul screams in fear,
Of having lost her, maybe forever'.
What can I do, not for me, but just for her?
Silence again reigns ' in my barren heart and soul
An empty space, there's nothing but a hole.
At any straw, my heart wants to clutch,
But, my love, I have hurt her so very much-
Do I dare to be the one to heal?
Once again, to make her feel?
Regrets for a path wrongly taken;
Regrets for every angry action;
Regrets for pleas that went unbidden;
Regrets for a trust that was cruelly broken;
Regrets for the pain, for breaking the heart
Of the only one, who had given my empty soul a start'.
Originally posted by: chitrajay
Part 3 of my "comment"
Told you it was really long...😆REGRETS (By Arnav)
A rage so strong, only harm could it do
Walking away, emotions bubbling in a brew.
One memory that hurts, that makes me bleed
So much that to her, I paid no heed.
Faint whispers of other memories come,
Telling me truths, that turn me numb.
I should have known, I should have guessed,
Eyes so guileless, her love I should have trusted.
She gave me joy, even when I gave her pain;
In me, she put her trust, to love in sun or rain.
Bits here and bits there, the facts are now so clear,
My mind so sharp, usually ' now draws back in fear.
Undeserving of her love, I certainly am,
Caused her pain, so deep and so often.
So badly now, do I need to make it up to her
Not just now, our entire lives, until forever'.
I wish to give her the very world,
Never again to hurt her by deed or word.
For her, only for her, I will try with all my might
Her life, and her pain, I have to set it right!
All alone now she sits, do I dare?
To show her anew, how much I care?
She stirs now, I know she knows that I am here.
Her eyes, her beautiful eyes'.they are so clear.
Empty now'..blank'of all that I hold dear.
No! My heart, my soul screams in fear,
Of having lost her, maybe forever'.
What can I do, not for me, but just for her?
Silence again reigns ' in my barren heart and soul
An empty space, there's nothing but a hole.
At any straw, my heart wants to clutch,
But, my love, I have hurt her so very much-
Do I dare to be the one to heal?
Once again, to make her feel?
Regrets for a path wrongly taken;
Regrets for every angry action;
Regrets for pleas that went unbidden;
Regrets for a trust that was cruelly broken;
Regrets for the pain, for breaking the heart
Of the only one, who had given my empty soul a start'.
PS- it might seem incompletethats because your story is tooplease continue
Originally posted by: chitrajay
For her, only for her, I will try with all my might
Her life, and her pain, I have to set it right!
All alone now she sits, do I dare?
To show her anew, how much I care?
She stirs now, I know she knows that I am here.
Her eyes, her beautiful eyes'.they are so clear.
Empty now'..blank'of all that I hold dear.
No! My heart, my soul screams in fear,
Of having lost her, maybe forever'.
What can I do, not for me, but just for her?
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